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dirty little secret
I tried so far… and got so hard… but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (Direct Support)
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Well, you've certainly got my
erectiattention, DLS. I can only assume the fusion process came for past attempts too.Is it weird that I like how Zephyr is here - That it borders on that type of Johnny Bravo-like air without veering whole-on into unlikability? Because that's what I've always thought Zephyr could have become in the show - that sort of chauvinistic yet comedic presences that everypony loved to hate.
Seriously, it's amazing and I cannot figure out why.
Anyways, nice to see another fantastic FIMFic from you.
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I am so glad to hear that. Because, honestly, Zephyr is a really tough character to write in a way that people will end up liking the story. I was kind of dreading that when the voted prompt required it. It’s great to hear that I managed to use him well in this story!
What's with the like and dislike ratio? This seems pretty tame, all things considered.
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I dunno.
Zephyr gets a lot of hate, for one thing. And the concept is just pretty weird.
Eh, I’m not too concerned about it. I know this story turned out pretty well ... but I also know that it was never going to become a huge hit because it’s going for a pretty niche fetish.
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Honestly, I think Zephyr's appearance in Sparkle's Seven did have that kind of role and feeling. Unfortunately, a lot of have trouble moving on from early impressions, and the first 80% of his first episode (where he was very unlikeable) had a lasting effect on opinion even though he did improve at the end.
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I was reminded of Daffy Duck.
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Even if that thing that Hasbro said was Fluttershy's brother was in it, you'd probably still get downvotes. Just for the idea, more than anything, probably.
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Heh, yeah. Plus the obligatory few downvotes for being a porn story.
Oh man, would THAT make for a hilarious sequel!
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I actually do have a sequel set up to be voted on right now.
In the sequel, the stallions have all got second wives. Big Mac’s already got his, of course. Zephyr tries for Rainbow Dash and ends up getting Lightning Dust instead, and Shining Armor picks Twilight.
Well no, but actually yes.
And just like that his plan already failed.
Well, we had three headed dogs, so it isn't that much of a stretch...
That was something I worried about, too.
Rumor says Cadance had promised them they would be allowed to watch the action if they make it in record time.
Who is teasing who again?
Easy: Call for reinforcements!
There might be some mares outside willing to lend a hoof.
Well, she can't leave them unrewarded, can she?
Of course she knows a spell like this, and of course she uses like this.
But where exactly did the excess cum go? Maybe she teleported it into an barrel she had set up before, so she can use it later?
I'm sure no one had any doubt about that one.
(Too much commentary?)
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No such thing as too much commentary! ^.^
Yup, very on the weird side. Yes, great stuff even so.
I give it a solid passing appreciation.
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Better question: what is Amethyst going to do with a barrel of cum?
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Maybe a combination of personal consumption and selling to high-class restaurants?
But in either case she must be fast; otherwise Cadance will have emptied the barrel herself.
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Sell it as fake cum substitute for mares (and the occasional stallion) to refill their cum-tube dildos.
Pro: Very realistic.
Con: Actually gets you pregnant.
Old Man Diol is on the phone for you. He wants his schtick back...
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Who?
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LOL, sorry he was a chimera obsessed mage who wanted to make a three-headed chimera to combine powers of three creatures. Your comination of those three guys made me think of his plan.