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Slam-Manian
Sup fellow MLP lovers. Not much to say about myself. I'm just a brony that loves to write and would love to put up my work for others to enjoy.
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*looks at word count*
More like worth ten thousand words.
Well, I'll have to put this on the read later.
Care to tell me more about Harms Way's 1,000 Follower Contest?
10k words and one of my favorite ponies?
This gonna be good
And I am back. My only complaint: really overdid it with Photo's accent. Other than that, decent fic.
DAYUM
Quite the excellent story, my friend. I'm glad to have read it.
My only issue was that the accent got a bit tiring at some points
otherwise than that pretty good
Is it bad that I imagined her in her Equestria Girls box art attire and her pony form?
I just wanna point out that Photo Finish's speech is based off of Austrian accents. The constant z's really throw me off, speaking German myself and knowing what it's supposed to sound like.
Doesn't Meine Fruend mean My friend?
7764567 It does, thats the most direct port. He's referencing the context in which she calls him "mine friend" or "my friend"
7763214 Thanks for that, truth be told, I have a hard time writing accents and that really was my personal biggest issue putting this together
. I'll try and keep this in mind
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I agree the accent was a bit much.
But it's s great story and kudos for giving photo some love total underrated character.
Christ, so many Zs!
Too many "z"s. The "t" sounds should be there the "th" and "s" sounds are what the "z" is for.
This was truly sexy. Photo FInish needs more love.
Wide or die, fam.
This really captured Photo's true beauty. I also love how you captured her German accent.
If you guys are wondering how to say "Photo's my girlfriend" in German it's "Foto ist meine Freundin"
You know if you put your mind to it you can do a story of Photo Finish being a yandere stalker I mean she takes alot of pictures already of models what's stopping her from being obsessed on where I go and what I do by taking pictures of me I can see the male reader character comes into Photo Finish room by chance, and on the walls is countless pictures of the male reader, this can easily be a stalker yandere story of Photo Finish love to see it done.
O.K.. This is a very interesting story. Too often in the series, Photo Finish comes off as abrupt and bossy, But here, she shows herself to be what I always expected her to be, a capable young woman, and also a genuine sweetheart. I like that the two characters here seem to be developing a real relationship, and there's no bullshit present on either side. (One would guess given the way she handles this that Photo hasn't gotten too many second glances from her classmates, which even given the limitations of animation is obviously nuts. She's a damn cute girl.) I've taken a shot at a Photo Finish story, and it's worth the extra work. She's a damn lot of fun.
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