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840189 And when Royal all pronouns are capitalized, Us, We, Our, etc.
The new line for new character speaking is extremely important. It let's you use less of "he she it said" and makes it easier for the reader to decide who is talking before hitting the "he she it said" spot.
Either way, I like the synopsis- so I think I'll keep reading to see what happens.
Hm, I like the opening. Nice, quaint and easy.
You are now hearing Luna say "A is for 'apple'."
840189 Meh, I'm not used to this website's interface, as I wrote it for the sole purpose of use for Google Docs which had been my starting ground. And of course, this was one of my first and earlier fics, so as you can imagine I wasn't a real Shakespeare. I had also planned on re-visioning most of the fics for use on tablets (webOS, Android, iOS, etc.) but I had't gotten around to it.
Anyway, thanks for the advice, I'll make a note of it. Nice to have some advice givers around here :)
843524 Trying, but sadly it's been quite a while since I've heard Luna speak. Not sure if the voice in my head actually does sound like her :V.
*Finishes reading.*
Oh shit.
Great story so far...
SHITSTORM APPROACHING! AND PROBABLY IN A GOOD WAY!
Damn, that was intensely sexy. Try reading this while listening to the main guitar solo of "...And Justice For All" by Metallica.
nice and easy
is this the end comon you can add a few more chapters its a great story can't quit now
sequeal!!!! please it would be so easy to do one for this story how everything could chagne slow back to the olden days with a little push from two mares trying to get the acceptance to be ith one another. you have to write a sequeal!!!!!!!!
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Yes, I'm sorry but this is the end of this story. BUT, I've been told to write a sequel, so that is exactly what I'll do! I'm glad you each enjoyed the story so much, and I truly hope that I will be able to continue to please you with the power of words.
Thank you all for your amazing feedback on this story! As I've already had a couple of people suggest I do a sequel or add more chapters (I see these as the same things in this case "Derpy Forever" and "crazypony26"), so that is exactly what I've planned to do. I promise you I'll get to work on it as soon as possible my fellow bronies.
All that aside, I really cannot thank you all enough for reading this and leaving this much amazing feedback! It means the world to me and is the sole reason that I will happily continue to write for your sole enjoyment.
You guys are amazing, and keep on reading.
"The greatest success goes to the person who is not afraid to fail in front of even the largest audience." - Bill Hewlett, cofounder, Hewlett-Packard.
This one's for you guys, keep on creating. You all have amazing capabilities
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thank you sooo much!!!
we (or i) will wait for a sequel or more chapters
Oh my.. that was so adorable.. Luna learning to read.. Luna is best.. I am glad I chose to read this. Thank you for sharing this. I never thought I would like TwiLuna.. xD *continues to next chapter.*
Oh my.. this will be interesting xD
*just stares at you* You have talent, I went from disliking the idea of them to loving it because of you. This was.. This was intense..
yay, presents.. xD
Moar
xD
o//o
and wait.. Spike slept ALL day? lazy dragon xD
oh, is she not coming? ... no, wait.. she's he- YOU'RE DUMPING ME?!
this was sad, I know what that feels like.. I would very much like a sequel as well.
You are very talented and I can't wait for anything else you may write..
Yay.. the epilogue was great.. made me dry my tears a little..
Being a huge TwiLuna ship fan, I love any and all TwiLuna fanfics. I have read some good, some /okay/, and some ones that need work. You fall into that category of beyond good. This had me enticed and left me wanting more with each chapter. The romance intertwined with the abundant sex made this quite a delicious story to read. Sequel, please please please! You are a fantastic writer, the story of Twilight and Luna's love cannot go unfinished! Thanks for the great read though, favorited, downloaded, and watching.
848781 Thank you ever so much!
It's the good people and supporters like you that I write for. I am very happy that you enjoyed it!
You've done what you can't always expect will happen: make a wonderful love story intermixed with tons of sex. Congratulations.
I CANNOT wait for the sequel!
As most definitively not a novice of TwiLuna fics i have to say that this, though short, is amazing and i hope that you do in fact write a sequel.
Interesting take on the Lunar Princess' reading after banishment, most stories I read skip or ignore this interesting part you have chosen to highlight.
To be fair, it seems that Luna's coming was anything but silent
wow.
My only critique here is, Twilight seems to accept the whole 'love' thing just like that.. It's a bit surprising. OTOH Luna bringing it up in the way she did, seems perfectly in-character.
Very cute fic i love the way it started. Love the way you did luna.
I hope you write a squeal to this.
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Glad you liked it!
And yes, I'm planning a sequel very soon.
More cloppy than i was expecting but still well written.
There may need a clop tag if there will be as much sex in the sequel.
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I laughed at the double entendre. "The library was as spotless as it had been before Luna had come"
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I don't think I ever thanked you for your words. How selfish of me...
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Okay, I hate to point it out but when a different character begins to speak after another you have to begin a new paragraph!!!! Just sayin' it might come in handy knowing that.
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I know that. If you'd have scrolled down through the comments you would have seen that others have notified me of it. This was very early in my writing and I didn't know all of what I was doing and since I was occupied with bigger and better things I never bothered to correct it. All is as should be in my newer works. Thank you for pointing it out though.
2804412 ok, im sorry if i had managed to upset you in anyway it was just a friendly reminder, that ended up being not-so friendly, sorry bout that.....
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No, no, no, no! Did I sound harsh? Oh goodness I'm sorry, I didn't mean to! I was up late in the night doing some work, so tired as you can imagine, and I really did try to respond nicely. I really do appreciate the reminder! Once you get to know me I'm not as big of a monster as that comment tried to paint me out to be. Are we cool?
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Yikes! Now that I read it I do sound like a jerk. You have my most sincere apologies
2806421 yea bro, we're awesome! i was in the same boat last night as well, so no hard feelings!
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Awesome! You seem like a cool person to get to know, so I just went ahead and decided to watch you
2806496 Awesome! but....I don't really do much, all I do is help my friends write their stories and read/fix (if needed) other peoples stories, so you wont learn much.
, but I am thinking about writing a story of my own I just don't know how its gunna' work out.
2806496 and you seem like a pretty cool person too!
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Hey, I'm sure you'll do fine! We all have amazing capability! All you've gotta do is have a little faith my friend
2806652 Wow, thanks!