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*Reads the first line in the Description*
"Baby don't hurt me! Don't hurt me! No more!"
It so far seems really interesting, and well written. I will have to read more when I have the time!
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My thoughts exactally! XD
I am curious to this and a little apprehensive. I mean the story of how Cadence and Shining got together is a good story, but I have to read a little further. I kind of taking objection that she is in an abusive relationship and is taking it. This is a girl who went up against a powerful changeling and seemed pretty dang strong in her own right, I just dont think she would be the girl who would allow herself to be in a abusive relationship-ESPECIALLY with an aunt like Celestia. However, I am curious as to where this is going to go.. I do like the writing and the premise is quite sound, so lets see where this story goes
"What is love?"
UNN
THROW DIRT ON ME
AND GROW A WILD FLOWER
BUT IT'S FUCK THE WORLD
GET A CHILD OUTTA HER
YEA MY LIFE'S A BITCH
BUT YOU KNOW NOTHIN' 'BOUT HER
BEEN TO HELL AND BACK
I CAN SHOW YOU VOUCHERS...
"What is love?"
BABY DON'T HURT ME!
DON'T HURT ME!
NO MORE!
Im sorry but anytime the question is asked, 'What is love?' You incur the wrath of this gif or one like it...
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Awww! I enjoyed the part were they went to dinner. I felt it was cute and this story really does a nice job of explaining the beginning of Shining and Cadence's relationship.
Vegeta! What does the scouter say about the dawww level?
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Too many emotions. Can not handle.
Great story it made me laugh, cry, get angry, cry, go dawwww, cry. Oh god that last chapter, did I mention I cried? Because that last chapter made me cry.
Umm this chapter has a very different tone to it. I don't have a problem with clop (especially in this case as they are married), but the word choice made it feel very dirty and carnal and I felt it took away from the sweet romance of the previous chapters. Don't get me wrong I love clop as long as it's straight, but this chapter kinda tarnished a romantic and heart warming story. I don't mean to offend, this is how I feel, even if the clop was well written.
915662 Cry some more
If you can, please look past all the screw ups in Chapter 4. There were some minor errors I was trying to correct (bad mistake on my Android Smartphone), and as a result you may notice some spacing and indentation errors. My promise to you, I'll have those errors fixed ASAP. But please, just do look past those errors.
Thanks for your patience, and deepest apologies for any inconveniences.
P.S. Thanks for all your amazing words, and keep on reading and writing.
Although there weren't many spelling errors, I feel like Cadence's reaction was very unbelieveable. She seemed too flippant about the death of her child and it felt out of place that she'd just jump back in right away.
Y u no clawp?
That sick son of a Bdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png ch.
I'm loving the slower pace. I guess I'm just used to stories with 100,000+ words. Keep up the great work!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_rainbowkiss_flip.png
912158 Often the things that hurt us make us stronger. Provided we get past the hurt.
So sad but sweet I cried in the last chapter.
I think she got over that FAR too quickly, it's a devastating event, and to dismiss it like that-well-it makes it look at if a child is something that can simply be throws away.
However, enjoyable story.
Y U NO CONTINUE!
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You mean write a sequel?
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yep
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Will do! Thanks a million for the view, and thanks a million more for the suggestion!
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I second this guy, except the part about liking clop. Honestly, I just hate the horrible image in my head. I just hate when stories start out as sweet fairy tale romances and then get reduced to porn.
I'm fine if it's implied though.
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So... that a good or a bad thing?
915662 thats an intresting gif any clue where its from I'm curious (by curious I mean bored)
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I love this story so much
Holy BUCK! How dare that motherbucker strike royalty, while I ought to be the shit out of him right NOW!!! *Large sigh* That aside, a story about Shining Armor and Cadence, the Princess/Goddess of Love? You have my full attention.....damn, this is getting good.
Though be sure to seprate the pargaphs, they seem to run together, just a little advice LOL.
That's IT, I'M GOING TO TEAR THROUGH THIS SCREEN AND KICK THAT BASTARD'S ASS
I'm so pissed right now.....*sigh* as for the story, dude, you haqve some real talent but your paragraphs are so hard to read even though it's so well made.....other then that, very good chapter
Woah, woah, WOAH!!! Wait a second brother, their love is going so fast that it can't possibly be real, I mean I know they fall in love but seriously, slow it down a tone will you, she can't just let him rfest in her bed after meeting one another for about a few hours....damn.
Anyway, I'm very, very suprised that Celestia did not have Chaption (spelled that wrong) killed, I mean seriously? I know she's the ruler of Equestria and Princess/Goddess of the Sun but the Gods do have their limits with mortals, do they not?
I hope he dies a very slow and very, very painful death.....wow, great chapter though.
Rather veryimpressive, they went on their first dat, that was cute, I dislike Shining Armor but I have much respect for Cadence, very good chapter.
To be honest, I skipped over this chapter. I mean don't get me wrong it's well written but....I don't know, they, they don't have any problems, no fights....nothing? Huh....really does not seem realstic, I.....don't know seems such a romantic, sappy story is impossible even for Equestria......even for the Princess/Goddess of Love, you know?
Rather impressed, I'm suprised Shining did not use her full name though
An error I spotted and I'm not suprised but because they are adults should thery not...I don't know drink? Candence is the Goddess of Love, what would she have against sex before marrige? Hmmm......not bad at all.
Wow.....wanting a foal so fast seconds after they are married? Don't you think that rushing, they should at least wait a few years if anything, though the clop was good, had no problem with it, it was honest and caring....nice
Not a bad chapter, rather enjoyable.....very nice
Nice, wonder if the foal would be a demigod though....hmmm.....and short but very impressive chapter, I liked it
Eh.....tihs chapter seemed so.......very OOC, likew seriously they just....did not seem to care as much as paretns should, I dfid not like it.....all in all for the story...a 5/10, sorry bro but even though it caufght my eye, it was not something I really much enjoyed.....sorry, but I'm sure you improved in your wrting, correct?
Wtf they had sex on grass
like really they couldn't wait till they get to a room well anyways loved the chapter not one for flop really
Stupid spell check I ment clop not flop
aww so sweet man I feel stupid for the whole Wat if she's getting her hopes up and shit
well great story
Omfg that was so sad
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