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My thoughts exactally! XD

"What is love?"

UNN
THROW DIRT ON ME
AND GROW A WILD FLOWER
BUT IT'S FUCK THE WORLD
GET A CHILD OUTTA HER
YEA MY LIFE'S A BITCH
BUT YOU KNOW NOTHIN' 'BOUT HER
BEEN TO HELL AND BACK
I CAN SHOW YOU VOUCHERS...

"What is love?"
BABY DON'T HURT ME!
DON'T HURT ME!
NO MORE!

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Too many emotions. Can not handle.

Great story it made me laugh, cry, get angry, cry, go dawwww, cry. Oh god that last chapter, did I mention I cried? Because that last chapter made me cry.

915662 Cry some more

If you can, please look past all the screw ups in Chapter 4. There were some minor errors I was trying to correct (bad mistake on my Android Smartphone), and as a result you may notice some spacing and indentation errors. My promise to you, I'll have those errors fixed ASAP. But please, just do look past those errors.

Thanks for your patience, and deepest apologies for any inconveniences.

P.S. Thanks for all your amazing words, and keep on reading and writing.

Although there weren't many spelling errors, I feel like Cadence's reaction was very unbelieveable. She seemed too flippant about the death of her child and it felt out of place that she'd just jump back in right away.

So sad but sweet I cried in the last chapter.

I think she got over that FAR too quickly, it's a devastating event, and to dismiss it like that-well-it makes it look at if a child is something that can simply be throws away.

However, enjoyable story.

Y U NO CONTINUE!

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You mean write a sequel?

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yep

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Will do! Thanks a million for the view, and thanks a million more for the suggestion!

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So... that a good or a bad thing?

915662 thats an intresting gif any clue where its from I'm curious (by curious I mean bored)

Eh.....tihs chapter seemed so.......very OOC, likew seriously they just....did not seem to care as much as paretns should, I dfid not like it.....all in all for the story...a 5/10, sorry bro but even though it caufght my eye, it was not something I really much enjoyed.....sorry, but I'm sure you improved in your wrting, correct?

Omfg that was so sad

Saw the title, and I thought this.

A Knight In Shining Armor.

A Knight In Shining Armor

A Knight In Shining Armor

M/M clopfic for the win!

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Sorry, don't do those. I'll change the title.

2737220 No bro, its just that I think of a million things a second. The titles more than perfect, i'm just a little weird.

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Oh, ha, sorry. You're not weird, I'm just running on fumes. Tired, but can't sleep. Don't know what it is, can't say I care to know. Anyway, glad you like the titles friend

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Yup! Thanks for all the favorites BTW!

Interesting story. Wrong, but interesting. It's actually explained in the comics how they met and got together. You should check it out. It's hilarious.

miscarriages are not uncommon. I come from a family of 4 and my mom and 2 miscarriages. So maybe Velvet had a miscarriage as well.