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“Is it the only pussy you’ve ever seen?” Twilight shot back with a giggle.

“...Maybe,” Rainbow admitted.

Discounting her own, of course. I am sure she has been butt first to a mirror at least once or twice and looked backwards. And she is super flexible, so being able to bend around would not be out of the question.

and can make you so wet you’d think you’d just stepped out of the shower...

The imagery in this sentence is an odd combination of arousing and gross.

“Kind of a weird thing to ask before having sex, though.”

Even weirder to ask in polite company.

“Now, this might feel a little weird at first, but I promise I’ll do my best to make you cum all over my face, okay?”

:rainbowlaugh: Damn, that is straightforward.

Twilight grinned, glad that she found her mark on the first try,

Because if she did not, they would have had to spend the night in the hospital with an awkward story to tell the doctor and Rainbow Dash with stitches in an embarrassing and unfortunate place and a seriously bad case of blue bean.

Here is the perfect song for two virgins who have just had sex. And they shall never go back to the not having sex ways of the past.

That was cute. Though it was hard to keep in mind that these are the same Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash from I'll Do Anything For You. The way they spoke seemed different from how they do in the other story. However, this means they have finally reached a new stage in their relationship. Yay.

I enjoyed this so much that I will do something I have not done for a long time. I present to you Twilight and Rainbow Dash ahegao.:twilightoops::rainbowwild:

~KBO.:twilightsmile:

Dang. Go Twilight.

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Damn, that is straightforward.

Twilight isn't good at talking dirty haha.

Because if she did not, they would have had to spend the night in the hospital with an awkward story to tell the doctor and Rainbow Dash with stitches in an embarrassing and unfortunate place and a seriously bad case of blue bean.

Imagine having them explain that to both Twilight's AND Rainbow's parents!

I haven't read it yet, but I really like the title.

They're gonna be stinky ponies tomorrow! :rainbowlaugh:

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Yup. Sex is messy, but that's what showers and laundry detergent are for! :raritywink:

Not my kind of story, but I will give you credit they still came across perfectly from your other works. Also I don't think I have read a story before this in which both parties were approaching sex from an angle of fearful but enthusiastic ignorance.

This was freakin' great.

'nuff said. TwiDash FTW!

7770323 Glad you approve!

I love this kind of horn sex I think it's even my fetish.

7775478 Too bad we'll never be able to experience the glories of sticking a horn in a puss. :P

Magic horn?... my bet is on one of NASA's electro-biogenetic secret experiments.

Cordless... but with a tail!

7775504 Soo true. :( There are barely ani fanarts either.

I have one thing to say: WEAK!
I know this is with a couple of virgins but the sex sene was kinda weak-sause. :facehoof:

7819701 Lol, I heartily disagree.:moustache:

:twilightsheepish::heart::rainbowkiss: Oh... I ship 'em more than ever right about now... They did it pretty good too considering they're both virgins!

Please make more of these XD

I loved everything about this :rainbowkiss: Rainbow and Twilight are so cute

He told me I wasn’t acting like a mare should act.

Ugh, Misogynists, much? They only serve to make the entire male gender look bad.

This make me laugh and feel really sad at the same time. Good job

I swear, I'm losing my sanity every time I read one of your clopfics....

*covers eyes with hooves and wings*

Oh gosh, there’s some cute stuff in here amongst the... saucy stuff. But the details are just.... well, amazing, but it’s kinda messing with my head,

Note to self: never read a clopfic made by you before writing...

I only have one thing to say...DDDDAAAAMMMMEEEE!!!! DASHIE AND TWI GETTIN KINKY WITH THAT HORN HAHA!!😘😆😉😋😋

Cutest ponies getting it on. I like it! :ajsmug:

Definitely one of the more awkward clopfics I have ever read but seeing as they both are virgins that kind of comes with the territory.

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