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Manifest Harmony


I. AM. INSPIRED!

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That was hot. And cute. And really hot.

I will probably write a proper comment later. Maybe. I have something very important to do right now. Very, very important.

First you gave me a hoof fetish. now you gave me a shitton of new fetishes. stahp pls!

also inflatable gags are a thing?

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They most definitely are. Look up butterfly gags.

Nurse Kinder Hart

I think it should be "Heart".

If any of the traditionalist neighbourhood watchdogs ever caught the Blossom sisters kissing and licking the hooves of their beloved Master

I am tempted to write another episode of Shadow Walkers adventures in the comments of this story.

7522672 It's been 12 hours since you posted. Should I start getting worried? Make sure you drink plenty of water. It's a pretty hot summer.

7522689 Not stopping until I give you all my fetishes. All 422 of them. Including the skyscraper fetish. You'll love the skyscraper fetish.

7523261 What this gentleman/lady said.

7523705 Oh, you're right. Let me fix that.

You know, I don't find these hot. Not at all honestly. I don't read them for that. I read them to get a sense of perspective, because I don't understand this, not really, I get the basic idea but I don't understand why or how. And I like to know those things, after all understanding is the basis of empathy and I'm not the most empathetic person around. Also love the worldbuilding, really like the idea of the Clocktower Society.

I'm actually curious as to what this Clocktower Society is. I've never heard of it before.

7524687 Here you go - Link!

7524360 I certainly enjoyed writing all that worldbuilding so I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!

7524628 In case you're not aware, imgur blocks Fimfiction. I can't see your pic.

A public cum pool? Well that's something new...

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... it was a guy with a really nasty nosebleed, just enter the link into a new tab...

You missed out on a great pun by calling them the "cummunal baths"

I think this is an interesting story so far. I like that this is also taking about the how the relationships work, like how Poky is taking a very controlling role in the lives of the other members of the herd, and how there will be adjustments to come in their life styles for when they will finally have foals in the house. I am looking forward to see more of this fic.

I cant help but feel fuzzy while reading this:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::heart::heart:
Now I want to cuddle something:twilightsheepish:

My god I wish this was a thing that existed in real life.

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I always hated the whole "nosebleed from arousal" thing.

If you get regular bleeding from being aroused, you:
A- Need some immediate medical attention because you've got the blood pressure of a 65 year old who's in the mid 250's on the BMI scale (IE, 5 foot 2 inches, weighing 1,400 lbs) in need of scheduling his 3rd quadruple-bypass surgery, and it's a miracle you haven't exploded like an over-inflated water balloon.
B- Have taken a near-fatal dose of pharmaceutical grade blood thinners.
C- Have such an extreme case of sickle cell anemia that someone should be on the phone with the guys at the Guinness Book of World Records (seeing as how you've survived long enough to develop a sex drive, thus miraculously defying all logic).
Or D- Have absorbed enough radiation that you shouldn't have functional eyes, working hair follicles, or still-coherent DNA.

In short, it's utterly ridiculous to expect this from any person healthy enough to survive reproducing.

You know you're a-dick-ted when the shoulder angel agrees with the shoulder devil... :trollestia:

7564818 Look, I have heaps of reference material that tells me the contrary. :twilightangry2:

Ignore the fact that it's all anime. That's not important. :twilightsheepish:

7565542 Or... it's not good nor bad...
But you are right, she is totally a-dick-ted...
a bit like me...

OK putting this in read alter JUST for how the title caught my attention.

Seriously? This fic died before it even got the the scene advertised by the title?

A few fellow submissives at their kink club's weekly submissive coffee mornings had expressed horror and concern at what they called ‘freaky and abusive’ levels of control

I find it more likely that they think their master is wasting his time with pointless things. It's obvious he invest a large amount of time and energy into those food tables, water calculations and other health maintenance. I would think most masters would see that as a complete and utter waste of time that could be better spend doing more fun things. It is a little silly how detailed he is, for example having so many variables with the water intake is a little ridicules. He can just put it very high so that they have always enough. Maybe two different numbers, one standard and one for hot days.

I couldn't quite follow it when she was on that 'wedge' just what does that mean and in what position was she? When writing clop scene's like this you need to be extremely accurate with your descriptions.

You ever planning on continuing this? I really like the premise, and would love to see more of it. It's super well done...

“Now, kitchen, it’s just you and me,” Pokey cracked his neck, limbering up as he strolled into what had long become the most macho place in the Blossom herd’s household, “This salad’s not going to know what hit it! Take that! And that!” The three sisters winced at the sparks of magic lighting up the walls as the high-pitched whine of a power drill filled the air.

It was at this moment I knew, this was going to be an AWESOME story

Comment posted by BrightMind deleted Feb 6th, 2019

Good fic, a shame that all the images don’t work any more

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