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I'm a Sonic fan (obviously) who is also a fan of this show. ...not much else to say.

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"Welcome to Good Burger, home of the Good Burger. Can I take your order?"

Ed was mopping the floor during closing time at the Good Burger until he was accidentally teleported to Equestria by Twilight due to her failed magical experiment with her Crystal Mirror. While Twilight tries to figure out how to send Ed back home, Ed spends his time working at the Hay Burger as a volunteer and befriending all of Twilight's friends. Whether they want to or not.

Meanwhile, a certain group of ponies is dedicated to try to dethrone the Princess of Friendship and find out the secret of how Ed was brought into their world.


Main MLP:FiM x Good Burger Crossover Story!

I also did a short side story called Can I Take Your Order? Be sure to check it out!

Character Vectors Made By:
itv-canterlot for Twilight and Rainbow Dash
SpellboundCanvas for Applejack and Starlight Glimmer
Tardifice for Rarity
Togekisspika35 for Fluttershy
SniperNero for Pinkie Pie
Spyro4287 for Spike

And the rest of the cover is made by me.

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 65 )

YES, YES, YES, YES AND YES. FINALLY A SEQUEL. THANK YOU SO MUCH. I WILL PUT IN MY FAVORITES BEFORE TO READ.

Why? Also burn Starlight at the stake for she beith a witch.

Please add a joke when he tries to buy something, like, "Sorry sir, I can't let you buy that, you don't have any bits."
"Why, is it cause I'm black?" Just like in the movie. (Yes that actually happens there.)

Aw yeah awesome got more Ed

and a song for everyone

As a one shot it works but as a long fic I'm not sure.

I'm so excited to see AppleJack eats her hat.

Poor Twilight, she doesn't know what will happen next. Hehehe

Still no burgers.

I'll have a Good Shake and Double Good Burger.

this story just get better and better

Calling it now, Flash is going to be stuck Ed-sitting. :rainbowkiss:

yes!! yess!! more please!! and you earn a watch from me! ^^

Welp... I smell bur- I mean... trouble... *Sneezes Violently *

Yep... trouble it is...

Loving it so far!

You made another perfect work, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Maybe the chapter 5 is Can I Take Your Order?

And we can read more chapters after this fiction?

Flash and Ed become best friends and save the day from Blueblood together. Calling it! :rainbowkiss:

7644122 Thank you for liking my story so far! :twilightsmile:

There will be another chapter that takes place from my other story, "Can I Take Your Order?" All other future chapters will continue on in this story.

Awesome chapters. You are doing a amazing job, I can't wait for the next chapter.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

7665745 Thank you so much! The next chapter is coming soon! :twilightsmile:

Hehe, this is the first decent comedy crossover I've seen in a while, I like it. Keep it up:twilightsmile:

personal guard that she got probably forced to have (one minus point so far in my eyes)

“If Flash Sentry really bothered you that much, you should tell him what you feel.”

second personal minus point.

The rest is good so far, I'm going to keep reading.

“No, it’s not the Bugbear or any other monsters that relates to my former agency." Bon Bon reassured. "So you don’t have to worry about me running off again.”

nothing wrong with that, but it wouldn't be a problem either to let Bon Bon be Bon Bon and not agent Bon Bon.

If I'm honest the show itself didn't looked so funny from what I saw, but I haven't understood everything. However the story is good.

Somewhere behind the crowd, a lone pony stared at the stage with leering eyes before slowly turned and trotted away from Town Hall.

This wasn't bad, but I stopped laughing at that moment, because I thought this story would take a certain turn.

This brings back memories; whatever became of those two?

Oh, that was just so... Thank you, This made my day :pinkiehappy:

You saw this, didn't you?

Also, poor Flash. He just realized that he doesn't have any friends.

So, am I supposed to be hating Flash or feeling sorry for him? On one hand, he's being an insufferable stiff, but on the other hand, he gets abused regularly and has no friends. :applejackunsure:

Poor Flash. Ed is written perfectly

Flash gulped nervously. "Um...why is everypony looking at me like that?"

I feel like I'm watching "All That" again. :pinkiehappy:

8161461 Both, but mostly the former...for now. I am trying to develop this character as the story progress.

8162079 Thanks! I was hoping I did his character right! :twilightsmile:

8163957 The show is currently on Teen Nick/The Splat channel every Saturday night as re-runs. Go check them out if you have the chance! :twilightsmile:

8164938 Let me guess. He's been so focused on his career that his social life pretty much withered, just like Twilight in the pilot episode. :twilightsmile:

I was at work while reading this and i got in trouble.

Worth it.

I love that show in the 90’s. Which they pshowed it on Nickelodeon everyday.

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Yeah, I love that show too. *Sigh* They really don't make good shows like this anymore.

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