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TheOneWithoutAName


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7279682

What do you mean by no? No to grammar, typos, content? :rainbowhuh: Could you be a bit more elaborative?

7279714
Everything about this premise. I highly doubt Celestia would punish an Element of Harmony just for trying to help her bird. Phoenixes aren't common knowledge, so how was Fluttershy suppose to know? And something as far back as Season 1? Goodness.

7279794

Tyrantlestia is a headcannon for many a user on this site

Maybe the stories you read? Because I have over 1700 stories in my favorites, none have the tyrant. And I'm not gonna argue over this, lets just leave it be.

7279805

You just have a different taste and that is totally fine with me. It would be boring if everyone was the same after all! :raritywink: I just ask you to accept the opinions of others. Tyrantlestia is of course not canon, but it made a good excuse for a punishment and I personally like the theme in that connection. That's why I used it! :pinkiesmile:

Edit: I just added Tyrantlestia to the list of the description. Hopefully it will help that only people that are interested in it will read this fic.

7278976

I'm glad that it is living up to your expectations and I hope the same applies for the second chapter as soon as it is out! :twilightsmile:

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That reminds me that I would like to write a Timberwolf bestiality fic sometime in the future when I have a bit more time on my hands! I wouldn't mind to try to work together on such a project! :pinkiesmile:

Maybe you could've given Fluttershy some lines of protest, pleading or something like that? Being terrified and nervous is understandable in these circumstances but I think even a shy pony like Fluttershy would've tried something, anything, to avert such a degrading punishment.

It also would've made the whole thing a little bitter hotter, maybe. And darker, because rape, you know?

She should end up as like the Ponyville slut at the end. Maybe have Tyrantlestia make FLuttershy service her friends as punishment or something

7280071

Good idea. I edited two scenes at the very beginning, where she is in the stocks. where she is pleading with Celestia and then a moment later the guard. Maybe I will add another one later.

Word of advice. ALWAYS get your works edited BEFORE publishing them.

7279781 I'm afraid I'm to blame/praise. This is based off an idea I had.

7280257

I thank you for your advice. It probably will be one of the plans for the future. When this future will be, I have yet to see. I have a few things that I have to do and probably won't get to it in this month and maybe next month.

Though I'm quite curious. Are there really many typos in there? I was reading over it again like I did with "Domination of Love" and this story seemed to be doing okay. Heck, I even thought that this story was better written than said story! Sees how flawed my own judgement is. :rainbowlaugh:

7280374

It's just not his/her cup of tea. Others have to learn to accept or tolerate that such fetishes exist. They don't have to read such stories if they are not interested in them after all. So definitely no blame here that can be dished out! :pinkiesmile:

So why exactly does this filth not have a dark tag?

7280509

I haven't written a "Dark" story before and therefore missed to add it. I thank you for pointing that flaw out! :twilightsmile:

It is now corrected! :yay:

My butt's still sore from scootaloo's last chapter, give me a break :pinkiecrazy:

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That reminds me that I would like to write a Timberwolf bestiality fic sometime in the future when I have a bit more time on my hands! I wouldn't mind to try to work together on such a project!

Timberwolves, hm? Not regular dogs?
Ohoh, or the orthros back from Trade Ya. Had an interesting chat about that topic with someone the other day.:raritywink:

As for this story, let's not forget Twilight is complicit in what happened! She might ask to be given the same punishment... Despite not knowing what said punishment is yet.

Time to build up another set of stocks!

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It isn't anything planned like this in chapter 2 since this clopfic mainly focuses on Fluttershy. But maybe I could write a bonus chapter at a later date.

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Ask and you shall receive! :trollestia:

But without kidding now, I'm probably slowing down for a month because of tests, so things are really going to slow down. I will still try to get at least one chapter of one of my clopfics out, but it all really depends on my time.

7283143

The idea was of a User, like I mentioned. No pictures were involved. Though you just made me curious! Can you name the artist of said picture? :pinkiesmile:

While I'm not a huge fan of these interpretations of the characters, I'm at least interested enough to see how this plays out. You did get me in my fetish a bit, so you get props for that much alone.

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There's a similar one by Tetrodotoxine, on Derpibooru, number 975384.

Heh. I wonder what Zephyr Breeze would think of his big sister who never fails if he saw her like this.

You should do a chapter where fluttershy, *ahem* services the criminals as well? :raritywink:

plot twist, it's a dream and a secret fantasy of fluttershy's

Love it, it have almost all of my fetishes, really think you should continue this. How abut making a prequel?
You're depicting Celestia as a "Queen" so how about making an episode with her teaching her little rebellious sister her place? Trying to plunge the world in eternal darkness is an offence worthy of a fitting punishment. I'm thinking with bondage and orgasm denial, followed by fall to shameless slutery.:trollestia:

7337110

You might probably like this since I have something planned that comes close to it. A story where a female bat guard joins the troops after NMM turned back into Luna. In that story, there are only female bat guards and only male solar guards. The female bat guards are used as cum dumpsters, surprising that one female guard. She is also a huge fan of Luna, but at the end of the story, when she finally sees her, she only sees the mighty Princess being used as a cum dumpster herself. This idea was inspired by one of replicas pics. :pinkiesmile:

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I think i can even guess which one, love that guys work and his Nolegs OC.

Hmm....what about Rarity "Failing" to please with clothes is made tomake a latex suit for herself as punishment only to find herself as stuck as her mannequins and used from there

Honestly I would love for Twilight to be this deliciously cruel Celestia's Student. As in she uses her own cock (because why not) to break the minds of one of her friends, pleasing her teacher and acing the lesson given to her. (Mind Breaking 101 XD). then they break said friend more together. Probably Rainbow Dash.

7338253
Well i would think that this celestia would have already broken twi as she was her personnel student. Unless this a molestia's thousand year resurgence or somethin.

7338618 Eh. I would still like to see it. Maybe she broke her into acting like she does. A sort of mini Celestia. I dunno. I just feel it would be a good addition to change things up, otherwise I feel like it's just gonna follow the same pattern each time.

How about Applejack falls behind on taxes for the farm and winds up paying the difference with her body. Winds up becoming, through magic, a short term broodmare, being hyper fertile, coming to term, and birthing in under a few months rather than yearly.

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Hm... something with clothes might work. I only don't understand what you mean with the mannequin thing. Do you mean that she is stuck then?

7338253

That sounds hot! :rainbowkiss:

But back to the topic. Truth be told I wasn't sure where to go with Twilight yet. Either make her like Celestia or a sex toys of her or maybe even let her keep her innocence as some sort of scheme and breaking her last.

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I could imagine her being a broodmare to breed stronger guards. It certainly has its appeal to use her as livestock! :pinkiesmile:

7342616 I think that the like teacher like student route has the most possibilities for use. You'd have yourself two characters to choose from to break ponies with instead of just the one. And the former friendships that Twilight had with her "Friends" Creates some wonderful dramatic tension. Imagine how ladylike Rarity would be once she finds out that Twilight never cared about them and she'd been planning on rutting and knocking them all up the whole time. It would be DELICIOUS~

7342616 yeah sorta like how fluttershy was but unable to move at all

Still looking for an editor?

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Yup! Are you interested in helping me out? :pinkiesmile:

7376314 Sure, just send me a PM, I'll be happy to help. :twilightsmile:

Whoa... I have no words... :applejackunsure:

10 mins later

Now I do...

Good story,
really interesting,
i was surprised Fluttershy went over that fast though - oh well your story
I hope you do the others too (i see you've got one on AJ already)
If you do the others you can count on me to fave/follow them

U-D123 :twilightsmile:

Okay just telling everyone who doesn't know. This isn't a remotely accurate description of anything.

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Glad you liked it! :yay:

Fluttershy turning so fast was part of the idea, so that she can be publicy used. But I guess I really have to learn that. And it is something I'm trying to in my two last posted stories. So, I'm working on it! :pinkiesmile:

7413141

The description or the chapter? :rainbowhuh:

I'm still trying to really get the hang of writing, since I am completely new to it, so I can imagine that it is far away from being a clop pearl. :twilightsheepish:

7414336 No the writing is actually pretty good (focus more on eternal conflict, justify emotions more, and recognize that people have more than one emotion at a time) it's just not a remotely good description of sex.

7416965

I thank you for your advice. I will try to look after the emotions more. :yay:

7417086 Awesome. Also I meant to say internal not eternal.

7280509
Hey, you can, y'know, not be an asshole about it. It's important to correctly tag, sure, but that's no excuse for bad manners.

7279805
Seriously? You're going to reference 1700 out of the hundreds of thousands of fanfiction in the site? And also, remember that this is fanfiction. Y'know, the stuff people create out of their imagination? The stories that explore every possible outcome of every possible situation? Your, "I don't think this would happen" excuse is literally useless here.

And author? Good story.

>for the etite pegasus
-petite

Incredibly stupid parody idea: The same idea, but by "stocks" we mean "the stock exchange".

I don't know why I thought of this.

Please don't hurt me.

7517613

I'm not going to hurt you, even though I really don't know how you would want to use that topic with clop. Could you elaborate? :rainbowhuh:

7537158 I got a few ideas from the "stock exchange" comment. One such idea is: Flutters could have stocks in sock companies that go under, so she has to make them popular again.

7576276

My, my. That would be an idea. You could use pretty much any item for this and it could develop in any direction. One could probably even make a whole series out of it. Each chapter Fluttershy tries to make another item popular. Maybe even be inventive with some items? Sounds like an interesting idea. :pinkiesmile:

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