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A wise woman once said, " Fuck this shit." And she lived happily ever after
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Not tagged "sex"?!
6458084 oh shit
6458084 it is now
6458084 Maybe she's mentally raped instead of physically?
6458092 I changed it
6458093 Yes, but now the description makes no sense.
Is this that rape fic?
6458092
No such luck for Rarity.
6458120 yes I hope you like it
6458116 I know...I don't know why it's doing that. It only does it when I log in on my I phone, ever since I updated it last night Fimfiction is just being weird.
6458116 Is it ok now?
6458124 I know I will! But it'll have to wait.........
Don't wanna read this in the school computers!
6458138 no no no...NOT at school!!
6458141 Yeah! Lol.
Everyone would be, "really? Pony porn? Why not people?"
Nobody knows I is brony very much.
6458152 lol because human porn isn't as sexy
6458156 Got that right.
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6458132 Yeah, it's fine now.
6458219 Yeah! Thank goodness for that!
Lovely. Rarity totally deserves that.
6458468 she does
6458219 You guys are going to get me in trouble!!
Did none of you haters not read the title of this story?
6458837 I had a comedy tag on it.
6458192 thank you
- Surprise
- You might want to re-do this sentence.
Ugh. I'm usually okay with a rape, but this was just brutal. I hope I never get to the point where I find shit like this arousing. Nothing against the author or anything. I didn't downvote the story and it is tagged appropriately. I just wasn't prepared for this.
6459389 thank you.
6460406 Would it make any difference if i told you the author was a woman?
6459697 Thank you
Tehehe. Is it wrong to say I liked it? Oh well I do, thumbs up.
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Women can rape and men can be victims. Gender roles were only ever make-believe.
Don't worry, I'm not going to use my past as a reason to hate, but I want to say that I've been molested. I know how it feels for a man to take that something from you. I figure if anyone should read something like this and give an opinion, it's a girl who's been through it and come to terms with it. Maybe I could identify with the victim, or understand where you were coming from with the assailant, or maybe through reading this I could learn something about you, the author; barring that, I could at least I can put on my Editor's Blinders and read it as it is, without my past interfering.
Read it I did, and I'm afraid I have an answer to that last blog post of yours. It's not just the subject matter, though that is a hard sell in almost any place you'd publish a story for the public; no, the only part that offended me was the callous title. ((Rarity "Gets It" in the Dumpster? Really? Gets It. Gets what? What she deserved, judging by your comment? ...Okay, away from that line of thought.)) The Wicca-influenced, black-as-night, broken-horned, so strong, so cruel, oh-so-beautiful, brutal, stereotypical, one-dimensional, edgy-beyond-edgy Mary Sue of a self-insert villain was boring. There was nothing to relate to on his side. On Rarity's? You didn't give her a personality at all. You just painted blue eyes on a sock and, pardon the language, fucked the shit out of it. Ignoring the common grammatical faux pas, unneeded exposition at every corner, the poorly-handled rape scene, Rarity's sudden transition from victim to needy accomplice, and a parting shot that paints Twilight Sparkle of all ponies as the town gossip and every other mare in Ponyville as a slut who, just like a woman should, needs a good raping as much as this stallion needs to dish them out...
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...I can't call this story a good one because there simply aren't any redeeming qualities to it. I'm sorry, but that is my opinion this time around. I think I see the problem: You've written for a niche audience your whole stay here, and because of that, all hate will seem to be due to the subject matter and much of the praise you receive will be so biased or inexperienced or easily pleased that it'll be almost meaningless. Take the time to hone your craft; the only way to do that is to stop listening to the ones who always say you're perfect and be honest with yourself about where it is you fall short. Write character studies; write one-off scenes; explore interactions; read the best of the best and drink it all in. Study hard, and then put what you learn into practice.
Oh, and since you seem to be worried about all the flak you've been getting for putting your stories in the wrong groups, please remove this story from the Sensual Fiction Group. There's nothing romantic about this, and to quote the group's front page:
One more thing. First off, don't worry, I didn't downvote any of your other stories; since they're not going to be my cup of tea, I'm simply not going to read them. No need to add downvotes just because I don't like the subject matter, yeah? However, I did see a bit about them in your blogs when I was checking to see whether or not you were a sadistic, angst-ridden twelve-year-old. I know it's just Scootaloo, but if you really are old enough to be a mother and you really do have children of your own, how do you justify treating someone else's children like that? How can you write about destroying a young life without seeing their faces in place of hers? We're all in this together.
6462315 I totally respect your opinion. I'm sorry you had what happened to you happen. I truly am. And yes, I am a mother, and I love my son dearly, I don't see how what I write reflects who I am.
It's a FICTION story, remember. Fiction!!!
About some little colorful ponies that don't even exist. When people start questioning my ability to care for my son because of a story I wrote well that just pisses me off. You don't know a damn thing about me,
If you don't like the subject matter DONT READ THE STORY- it's CLEARLY MARKED.
Haven't you ever heard of performers who act a certain way when they go onstage? They play a role, and it doesn't mean that's the person they REALLY ARE.
If you didn't like it well you're with all 47 people who don't like it. Go read something else. I really liked the way you described my OC though!! That was perfect! And he's NOT AT ALL boring!! Don't you remember in the end, ALL the mares had cakes in front of their door hoping he would pay them a visit?
Breh, she got it in the dumper, in a dumpster.
6462315 "One more thing. First off, don't worry, I didn't downvote any of your other stories; since they're not going to be my cup of tea, I'm simply not going to read them" Then why the buck did you even post? Just to start shit? Get on a soap box? What?
6463796 ugh I agree! Then she proceeded to bring my SON INTO IT.
No no no no no- WRONG THING TO DO.
6462315 Nice wall of text good sir white knight.
6462315
As the editor of this story, I want to address a few of your points:
» I agree that the protagonist is a bit close to the cliché black and red alicorn OC (though he's a black and blue unicorn OC) but felt that given the genre, this was not an especially important issue. It's not the type of story that people are reading expecting well thought-out character development.
» As far as trying to illustrate Rarity's personality, she's a canon character, and rather a well-known one, so readers might be expected to already be familiar with her personality. That's one of the good things about fan fiction — you can skip some of the usual exposition required in original fiction.
» The title was actually my idea. I thought it might grab people's attention. It seems that it worked.
6463796
I didn't downvote the other stories that I didn't read, but I did downvote this one. I felt it deserved a red thumb for reasons involving story structure and writing basics. The author wanted to know why there was a flood of negativity surrounding the story. I figured I'd explain myself.
6464925
"Miss Social Justice" thx
6465178
Stereotypes and archetypes are perfectly fine if the character is built and used well. I don't mean that I believe they have to be as developed as a character from a one-point-five-million-word epic; I just think some effort is necessary because the audience needs a reason to sit through whatever was written.
Some exposition, yes. All character, color, flavor, and detail, no.
It certainly grabbed my attention. I'll leave it up to the author to decide just how much negative publicity is good publicity.
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I didn't bring up my past for sympathy... I just wanted to share perspectives. We all write terrible things, but what made me speak up was that you wrote from a perspective that clearly sympathizes with the rapist and then glorified your choices and opinions in the comment section. What's more, this is an ongoing thing. This isn't about playing a role; this is about supporting rape, gloating about rape, thinking foals are the perfect target of rape, and being a chronic sympathizer of rapists.
Actually, I brought it up to figure out how the exterior mom-you and the interior foalrape-you manage to coexist. I tried to write a metaphor just now to explain my feelings but there doesn't seem to be one that applies. The idea is alien to me, and I'll admit that foalcon shall forever be one of the few subjects toward which I am quite judgmental, not because of my own past but because kids don't deserve that shit.
I was told it would be a saucy romance, and since I read that it was originally marked a comedy, I was trying to find any trace of humor or satire before I stopped reading the first time through. I finished because I saw your blog post seeking answers and wanted to give them to you, since no one else was.
Writing about rape, even in a fetishy sense, and glorifying rape in everyday conversation are two different things.
That's boring. If there's no conflict, there's no fun... and there was no conflict; Rarity was too tame to fight back and he was too strong to be fought against, and even though he's a vile, horrible creature, every mare in town can't wait to give their everything away to him. It's either another bland OP villain or a twisted shell of a characterization of normalcy. In this case, I'm inclined to think both.
While we disagree on many things, I do hope you learned a little of what you were hoping to learn from my lengthy-ass walls of text.
6467468 No people like you really annoy me, So why not tell your sob story on Tumblr or something.
6467478
If you don't like the subject matter of my posts, feel free to not read them. I wrote it for k9groomer's benefit and hers alone.
6467490 This site is not for feels it is for poni content, not some random half wit wanting to get attention.
6467493
Yes.
6467498 Yus.
6467468 I am going to tell you this ONE LAST TIME
STOP bringing my son into it.
UNTIL you get to know me, and you will probably be surprised, I am a kind, caring, compassionate person...you have NO RIGHT to talk about my ability as a parent. MY son is NOT allowed to read what I write... "kids' who read the stories are SUPPOSED to be 18. I do not appreciate you assuming I am "destroying children". I don't know what you are grasping at but it's really crossing the line.
You know you really have a lot of nerve to come on to my comments page and insult my parental ability because of a story YOU didn't like!!!
WHY DID YOU READ IT?!
WHY?
Its CLEARLY marked!!!
Whatever happened to you, sweetie, I am dearly sorry, I hope that son of a bitch suffers for the rest of his life!!
However...you ARE using your past to gouge into MY ability to care for my son. NO no NO NO!!! Don't judge by a fucking story!!
A fiction story!!
Im done with this now, have a nice day
6467478 She fucking comes on to the comments of a rape story...a rape FICTION story and tells me she was molested. Why would anyone who has been molested....read a story like this?
Furthermore, i don't know what she's accusing me of in the way of my son, with my "foalcon loving" mother self, but until she gets to know me she has NO right pulling shit like that.
God that pisses me off, I can understand people leaving a comment that they didn't like the story..but to have a past like hers and then read a rape story..then insult it and insult ME, bring MY son into it..is bullshit.
Thank you for your comments Im following you now.
6467545 Yay.
6467468 "Actually, I brought it up to figure out how the exterior mom-you and the interior foalrape-you manage to coexist. I tried to write a metaphor just now to explain my feelings but there doesn't seem to be one that applies." No. You did it to be nasty. You just did it in a "Look at me I a am smart" way. I have no kids to bring to this but. If you want to play who is nastier I will play with you.