Good job.

How about no?

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What do you mean by no? No to grammar, typos, content? Could you be a bit more elaborative?

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Everything about this premise. I highly doubt Celestia would punish an Element of Harmony just for trying to help her bird. Phoenixes aren't common knowledge, so how was Fluttershy suppose to know? And something as far back as Season 1? Goodness.

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Tyrantlestia is a headcannon for many a user on this site

Maybe the stories you read? Because I have over 1700 stories in my favorites, none have the tyrant. And I'm not gonna argue over this, lets just leave it be.

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You just have a different taste and that is totally fine with me. It would be boring if everyone was the same after all! I just ask you to accept the opinions of others. Tyrantlestia is of course not canon, but it made a good excuse for a punishment and I personally like the theme in that connection. That's why I used it!

Edit: I just added Tyrantlestia to the list of the description. Hopefully it will help that only people that are interested in it will read this fic.

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I'm glad that it is living up to your expectations and I hope the same applies for the second chapter as soon as it is out!

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That reminds me that I would like to write a Timberwolf bestiality fic sometime in the future when I have a bit more time on my hands! I wouldn't mind to try to work together on such a project!

Maybe you could've given Fluttershy some lines of protest, pleading or something like that? Being terrified and nervous is understandable in these circumstances but I think even a shy pony like Fluttershy would've tried something, anything, to avert such a degrading punishment.

It also would've made the whole thing a little bitter hotter, maybe. And darker, because rape, you know?

She should end up as like the Ponyville slut at the end. Maybe have Tyrantlestia make FLuttershy service her friends as punishment or something

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Good idea. I edited two scenes at the very beginning, where she is in the stocks. where she is pleading with Celestia and then a moment later the guard. Maybe I will add another one later.

Word of advice. ALWAYS get your works edited BEFORE publishing them.

7279781 I'm afraid I'm to blame/praise. This is based off an idea I had.

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I thank you for your advice. It probably will be one of the plans for the future. When this future will be, I have yet to see. I have a few things that I have to do and probably won't get to it in this month and maybe next month.

Though I'm quite curious. Are there really many typos in there? I was reading over it again like I did with "Domination of Love" and this story seemed to be doing okay. Heck, I even thought that this story was better written than said story! Sees how flawed my own judgement is.

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It's just not his/her cup of tea. Others have to learn to accept or tolerate that such fetishes exist. They don't have to read such stories if they are not interested in them after all. So definitely no blame here that can be dished out!

So why exactly does this filth not have a dark tag?

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I haven't written a "Dark" story before and therefore missed to add it. I thank you for pointing that flaw out!

It is now corrected!

My butt's still sore from scootaloo's last chapter, give me a break

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That reminds me that I would like to write a Timberwolf bestiality fic sometime in the future when I have a bit more time on my hands! I wouldn't mind to try to work together on such a project!

Timberwolves, hm? Not regular dogs?
Ohoh, or the orthros back from Trade Ya. Had an interesting chat about that topic with someone the other day.

As for this story, let's not forget Twilight is complicit in what happened! She might ask to be given the same punishment... Despite not knowing what said punishment is yet.

Time to build up another set of stocks!

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It isn't anything planned like this in chapter 2 since this clopfic mainly focuses on Fluttershy. But maybe I could write a bonus chapter at a later date.

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Ask and you shall receive!

But without kidding now, I'm probably slowing down for a month because of tests, so things are really going to slow down. I will still try to get at least one chapter of one of my clopfics out, but it all really depends on my time.

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The idea was of a User, like I mentioned. No pictures were involved. Though you just made me curious! Can you name the artist of said picture?

While I'm not a huge fan of these interpretations of the characters, I'm at least interested enough to see how this plays out. You did get me in my fetish a bit, so you get props for that much alone.

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There's a similar one by Tetrodotoxine, on Derpibooru, number 975384.

Heh. I wonder what Zephyr Breeze would think of his big sister who never fails if he saw her like this.

You should do a chapter where fluttershy, *ahem* services the criminals as well?

plot twist, it's a dream and a secret fantasy of fluttershy's

Still looking for an editor?

Incredibly stupid parody idea: The same idea, but by "stocks" we mean "the stock exchange".

I don't know why I thought of this.

Please don't hurt me.

wow celestia that was kinda cruel

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I personally just pretend it's an oc who happens to share a name with Fluttershy