Love it, it have almost all of my fetishes, really think you should continue this. How abut making a prequel?
You're depicting Celestia as a "Queen" so how about making an episode with her teaching her little rebellious sister her place? Trying to plunge the world in eternal darkness is an offence worthy of a fitting punishment. I'm thinking with bondage and orgasm denial, followed by fall to shameless slutery.

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You might probably like this since I have something planned that comes close to it. A story where a female bat guard joins the troops after NMM turned back into Luna. In that story, there are only female bat guards and only male solar guards. The female bat guards are used as cum dumpsters, surprising that one female guard. She is also a huge fan of Luna, but at the end of the story, when she finally sees her, she only sees the mighty Princess being used as a cum dumpster herself. This idea was inspired by one of replicas pics.

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I think i can even guess which one, love that guys work and his Nolegs OC.

Hmm....what about Rarity "Failing" to please with clothes is made tomake a latex suit for herself as punishment only to find herself as stuck as her mannequins and used from there

Honestly I would love for Twilight to be this deliciously cruel Celestia's Student. As in she uses her own cock (because why not) to break the minds of one of her friends, pleasing her teacher and acing the lesson given to her. (Mind Breaking 101 XD). then they break said friend more together. Probably Rainbow Dash.

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Well i would think that this celestia would have already broken twi as she was her personnel student. Unless this a molestia's thousand year resurgence or somethin.

7338618 Eh. I would still like to see it. Maybe she broke her into acting like she does. A sort of mini Celestia. I dunno. I just feel it would be a good addition to change things up, otherwise I feel like it's just gonna follow the same pattern each time.

How about Applejack falls behind on taxes for the farm and winds up paying the difference with her body. Winds up becoming, through magic, a short term broodmare, being hyper fertile, coming to term, and birthing in under a few months rather than yearly.

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Hm... something with clothes might work. I only don't understand what you mean with the mannequin thing. Do you mean that she is stuck then?

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That sounds hot!

But back to the topic. Truth be told I wasn't sure where to go with Twilight yet. Either make her like Celestia or a sex toys of her or maybe even let her keep her innocence as some sort of scheme and breaking her last.

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I could imagine her being a broodmare to breed stronger guards. It certainly has its appeal to use her as livestock!

7342616 I think that the like teacher like student route has the most possibilities for use. You'd have yourself two characters to choose from to break ponies with instead of just the one. And the former friendships that Twilight had with her "Friends" Creates some wonderful dramatic tension. Imagine how ladylike Rarity would be once she finds out that Twilight never cared about them and she'd been planning on rutting and knocking them all up the whole time. It would be DELICIOUS~

7342616 yeah sorta like how fluttershy was but unable to move at all

Nice.

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Yup! Are you interested in helping me out?

7376314 Sure, just send me a PM, I'll be happy to help.

Whoa... I have no words...

10 mins later

Now I do...

Good story,
really interesting,
i was surprised Fluttershy went over that fast though - oh well your story
I hope you do the others too (i see you've got one on AJ already)
If you do the others you can count on me to fave/follow them

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Okay just telling everyone who doesn't know. This isn't a remotely accurate description of anything.

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Glad you liked it!

Fluttershy turning so fast was part of the idea, so that she can be publicy used. But I guess I really have to learn that. And it is something I'm trying to in my two last posted stories. So, I'm working on it!

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The description or the chapter?

I'm still trying to really get the hang of writing, since I am completely new to it, so I can imagine that it is far away from being a clop pearl.

7414336 No the writing is actually pretty good (focus more on eternal conflict, justify emotions more, and recognize that people have more than one emotion at a time) it's just not a remotely good description of sex.

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I thank you for your advice. I will try to look after the emotions more.

7417086 Awesome. Also I meant to say internal not eternal.

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Hey, you can, y'know, not be an asshole about it. It's important to correctly tag, sure, but that's no excuse for bad manners.

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Seriously? You're going to reference 1700 out of the hundreds of thousands of fanfiction in the site? And also, remember that this is fanfiction. Y'know, the stuff people create out of their imagination? The stories that explore every possible outcome of every possible situation? Your, "I don't think this would happen" excuse is literally useless here.

And author? Good story.

>for the etite pegasus
-petite

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I'm not going to hurt you, even though I really don't know how you would want to use that topic with clop. Could you elaborate?

7537158 I got a few ideas from the "stock exchange" comment. One such idea is: Flutters could have stocks in sock companies that go under, so she has to make them popular again.

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My, my. That would be an idea. You could use pretty much any item for this and it could develop in any direction. One could probably even make a whole series out of it. Each chapter Fluttershy tries to make another item popular. Maybe even be inventive with some items? Sounds like an interesting idea.

Could you make it a series with Celestia catching each of the elements and forcing them to stand next to Fluttershy?

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It actually is already a series. A series where they all get corrupted one after another. There will be also a finale with all characters, but that's still far away.

Probably someone already suggested this, but with Twilight I suggest some magical hypnosis into play.

Sorry to be that guy but...

In the meantime, some impatient stallions were sick of waiting, and decided to soak her wings up with her cum.

Soak her wings up with HIS cum.

It took me to read it three or four time before finding a single error. I really enjoyed this fic.

Checked this out when it was mentioned on a forum even though I know it's not my kind of thing.

Didn't downvote or read fully, but sometimes stories like this are good to take a look at to remind me there are far more extreme stories than the ones I wrote, making me feel less uncertain about them

Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

OR is it jest for the

Contains: A pony in the stocks, Eventual Consensual Rape, Tyrantlestia, Gangbang, Public Use, Exhibitionism, Sluttification, Futalestia (Chapter 2)

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Well. Celestia is really quite the jerk in this one. Sentencing Fluttershy to the stocks. And Fluttershy also gets a lot of degrading talk. But she enjoys it rather fast, and is quite into it. So, pretty much depends if that is too dark for you or not.

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it is not

One down, five to go??
Please please please do a sequel

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There is a sequel...or at least the start of one. I haven't touched it in a while sadly. Something I will try to continue thig year though.

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It's obviously OOC for the show. That's part of what makes it amusing, at least to me- Celestia obviously wouldn't do this, but characterizations of her as a brutal tyrant are kinda entertaining to read.

Is there a sequel?

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There is, but one that is on hold. So, nothing mentionworthy at this moment. I gotta work on it again sometime, just been busy, so it hasn't happened yet.

good job! maybe have applejack and rainbow dash punished for ruining the running of the leaves