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What particular fetishes will we see in the current and following chapters?

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Everything what you can read in the story description under the last point "Contains:"! :raritywink:

We don’t want to offend Abioye after all.

Is this the prequel to The Spreading Mare or are you just using the same character? :yay:

The next comment is just meant jokingly:
You're missing the comedy-tag. I often had to laugh out loud because of some passages which I found really funny.

Domination play in a way. This was also the closest she could ever get to her fantasy of being gangbanged by the royal guard. Being a princess had its downsides in the sexuality department. A lot of depraved acts were just off limits for her.

That actually made her perk up. This was another fantasy of hers. Consensual cheating. Just the thought of letting her husband see her get banged like a cum-addicted bimbo by another stallion was enough to make a small heat develop in her loins. Not to mention that he would get another mare for him to dominate.

Didn't know Cadance was this depraved. It's always the silent ones, right? :rainbowlaugh:

“How in the hay could you ever think that Equestria was a prude community? We were the ones that invented vibrators in any shape or form, not to mention bondage equipment like spreader bars, fuck machines, paddles, ball gags, ring gags, fleshlights... Should I go on, or do you now see that our countries are on equal terms in the sexuality department?”

Yeah, someone had to invent those, right, now that its mentioned. Was rather unexpected to read though. :rainbowlaugh:

To sum it up: Interesting start so far. Was fun to read and I'm looking forward to more. :twilightsmile:

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I was thinking more along the lines of sequel or alternative universe to be honest. In my first story another zebra is leading Zebrica, but that is a story for another day. :raritywink:

Sometimes I'm thinking about that too, but I think a Comedy tag might be too much for the few scenes which are in the fic. It can be noted that it is funny to write Abioye though and that that was one of the reasons I just put him in there.

The idea was like I mentioned from Mr Ghostman. He requested such a fic and I found the idea rather interesting. It is a nice change of pace to write another character from time to time.

The pony prude theme was my idea and I thought it might be a good topic to lure Cadance into this 'peace ritual'. She as the Princess of Love of course would argue against him, and what better way to prove her point than said sexual inventions?

I appreaciate your opinion and hope you will enjoy the second chapter just as much or more, since that is going to be the chapter the real action starts! :pinkiesmile:

Edit: And thanks for being a Follower! :twilightsmile:

7255005 Alternate universe makes a little bit more sense. The reason why I thought of this story as a prequel was because Abby is in Zebrica and also the leader. Could've been that they they're immigrating to Equestria after the successfull negotiations. Just my thoughts. :twilightsmile:

7254895 Sorry, didn't see that at first.

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No problem! :twilightsmile:


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Could be, but since I have plans which include someone other leading Zebrica at that time in "The Spreading Mare" it is something I can't really put in the timeline of it. But how and if I will use this oneshot for this is still something only time can tell. :pinkiesmile:

She had a reputation to uphold! For Equestria!

More like for her fantasies. :rainbowwild:

http://youtu.be/RVLNIpS6J80

I am intrigued by this interracial cuckold fetish thing you're doing here, matey.

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But in this case, the clopfic doesn't feature cuckolding but rather consensual swinging since the royal couple have agreed to partake in sexual activities with other partners without risking in breaking up a relationship. The more you know. :derpytongue2:

The Princess of Love isn't entirely selfish you know. :derpytongue2:

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Oh. My. God.

This...was an awesome chapter. Thank you based TheOneWithoutAName. :heart:

My reactions while reading
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The stallion grinned as he positioned himself at her entrance again.

“Yeah, you do. And good needy little whores always get their reward as long as they know their place. Do you know your place?”

Cadance nodded vigorously.

“I-I do! My place is beneath you sucking cock! Please use me as your personal cum dumpster! I’m nothing more than a whore that needs to be filled!”

Secret fantasy or not, somehow I have the feeling that the poor guy will get some sort of punishment once they're all back in the Crystal Empire. Well, either a punishment or a punishment. :rainbowwild:
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A little bit later
Okay, I think all of the Royal Guards are in for a punishment once they're back home! :rainbowlaugh:
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“It’s just like the good old times when we took that four-eyed mare for a ride. She couldn’t walk straight for a week after we were done with her!”

Wait, what? Does this mean that ... No, it can't be ... :rainbowderp:
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“Ahhhhhhhh! Y-You know him S-Shiny?” she asked unsteadily as her nerves were assaulted by an indescribable pleasure with every heavy thrust of the two stallions.

“Of course I do! We were good old fuckbuddies back in Highschool! Often teaming up to rut some wallflower sluts. We could make even the most prude of mares moan like a bitch in heat!”

Oh Shining Armor you sly bastard! :rainbowlaugh:
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“Yeah. It was my idea. My friend Abioye wrote me that he was the new leader in Zebrica, which made a perfect excuse to go there and meet up again after all this time, so I asked him to send a letter to Celestia, requesting our presence.”

He's so going to get punished as well ... :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
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“Then his little brother had a better idea, telling him about a peace ritual between tribes that would be the perfect trap for you. A few well-chosen words about the prude attitude of the pony race was all it took to make you offer your entire body to the zebra populace. I mean, shit, Cadance! You really must love being nothing more than a public cum dumpster if a slight provocation was enough for you to whore yourself out!”

And at this point I lost it completely. Everything was completely set up? Wow. Just wow. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
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Leaving her in the hooves of the whole Zebra population at the end was maybe a little bit excessive though.
Nevertheless, t'was really fun to read :twilightsmile:

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Glad you enjoyed it! :twilightsmile: You can also call me Towan. It is a lot shorter than TheOneWithoutAName! :pinkiesmile:

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Secret fantasy or not, somehow I have the feeling that the poor guy will get some sort of punishment once they're all back in the Crystal Empire. Well, either a punishment or a punishment. :rainbowwild:

Technically this is directly after their honeymoon and with that before the Crystal Empire. Sure, I was thinking on putting it differently on the timeline to match up with 'The Spreading Mare', but this scenario fitted best like this.

I'm afraid however that there won't be a punishment. At least I don't see a reason for it. The guards love dominance play, just as much as Cadance loves her submissive play, so there was no harm done. But you could elaborate if you want and share your thoughts on it. :twilightsmile:

“It’s just like the good old times when we took that four-eyed mare for a ride. She couldn’t walk straight for a week after we were done with her!”

Wait, what? Does this mean that ... No, it can't be ... :rainbowderp:

Ok, now you got me curious! What are your thoughts here? :pinkiesmile:

Leaving her in the hooves of the whole Zebra population at the end was maybe a little bit excessive though.
Nevertheless, t'was really fun to read :twilightsmile:

I love excessive! And I was writing Cadance so that she loved it as well! So it is kind of a happy ending for her too! :yay:

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I'm afraid however that there won't be a punishment. At least I don't see a reason for it. The guards love dominance play, just as much as Cadance loves her submissive play, so there was no harm done. But you could elaborate if you want and share your thoughts on it. :twilightsmile:

Well, yeah, that's the point why there will no be punishment. As you said: Cadance loves being dominated. If it only would have been a "heat of the moment"-thing, I could imagine that the Princess of Love would be rather upset about her being treated that roughly.

Ok, now you got me curious! What are your thoughts here? :pinkiesmile:

My first thought was "Wait? They banged Moondancer?". But then I focused on the "when we took"-part, stopped reading for a bit, thought about the story and if that meant that they both knew each other already, which was not mentioned before and revealed shortly after that passage.
Nice plot-twist. :twilightsmile:

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I was thinking about another four-eyed mare (the nerdy one from the episode Princess Spike) when I wrote this, but Moondancer is a perfect choice too! I was thinking about writing a sequel, or should I say prequel, with Shining and Abioye anyway. And this already gives me a new mare they could 'free' from her inhibitions! :rainbowkiss:

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I was thinking about writing a sequel, or should I say prequel, with Shining and Abioye anyway.

"The Raunchy Adventures of Two Fuckbuddies". Yep, sounds like an interesting Idea. :rainbowlaugh:

I guess now that she has this successful "negotiation" under her belt, she'll move on to negotiate with the Diamond Dogs (getting passed around the pack, spending every single minute knotted and stretched to her limit), the dragons (Holy cum inflation, bat-mare!), the Griffons (those poor catbirds need a better outlet for their predatory instincts than greed), etc...

awesome you out did your self again!
dang *mumbles* now how am i going to beat this in my stories?
*still mumbling* dang it could you have put the bar any higher*NOT MUBLEING ANY MORE* OK well good job anyways\
-randomfastreader /rfr
note i'm stealing your short nameing ways (just because rfr is a lot shorter than random fast reader)
oh and my favorite part is
“It’s just like the good old times when we took that four-eyed mare for a ride. She couldn’t walk straight for a week after we were done with her!”
ha couldn't walk straight for a week (wait I still can't walk straight huh)

Great as always TOWAN. This was one hell of a hot chapter. :twilightblush:

Ho ly clop.
That is hot. But still, the degradation theme lost some of its appeal in this chapter, mainly because the climax of the story seems to be in the previous chapter and public use.
Thats not saying that the chapter isnt hot. IT IS!!(hot)
Thank you for this story, and i hope you continue to write :yay:

You know that tradition has it that mares stretched like that are allowed to be used by anyzebra or pony here, as a gaping cunt counts as an open invitation of a mare to any stallion.

Basically: Mare is stretched -> Mare will be used -> Mare remained stretched while being used -> Mare is used until not stretched anymore
=> Mare is used indefinitely
(Did I get that right?)

Not enough to harm her, mind you, as he wanted her mind to break with pleasure and not to inflict physical damage or pain.

Quite the gentlezebra.

Her once fragile and slender frame was now turned into a fucktoy that even the dragons might have fun to use as a cum dump.

:moustache:: "Proof it!"

It made him kind of sad that the Princess of the Sun was such a prude stick in the mud, if she had such huge potential to be a grade-A slut!

Be careful what you are wishing for. Maybe she isn't as submissive and will dominate you!


Good story!
I liked it! We need more zebra-stories like this (zebras, sex, potions, etc.)!

Will there be an epilogue or additionally bonus-chapter where Celestia get her banana trade agreement (she will be happy), featuring her reaction when she learns just how she got it?

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Glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

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Also glad you liked it! Might be that it was losing some appeal, but then again, this was just a Bonus Chapter and I technically only wrote this since I found the idea of Cadance negotiating while riding Abioye appealing. The cock growth wasn't even planned and came to me while writing it. But back to the topic. Yeah, not a planned chapter, so maybe less appeal but I'm glad that it was still enjoyable! :yay:

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Basically: Mare is stretched -> Mare will be used -> Mare remained stretched while being used -> Mare is used until not stretched anymore
=> Mare is used indefinitely
(Did I get that right?)

The stretching means basically the REAL BIG stretching. Normal is not included and the stretching that happened here will go back to normal after a while. So technically a mare might be used by the whole town if she walks around like that, but it will turn back to a normal size regardless! :raritywink:

Quite the gentlezebra.

That's Abioye! This character was created while writing my first story and I really like this about him. It's just some nice consensual domination play! :heart:

Will there be an epilogue or additionally bonus-chapter where Celestia get her banana trade agreement (she will be happy), featuring her reaction when she learns just how she got it?

Currently planned is a Prequel with Shining Armor and Abioye, and I was thinking maybe about a Sequel there Cadance has fun with her guards. I haven't had an idea yet where I use Celestia, but then again I have so many plans of stories I want to write, as well as a few requests, so it might be some time before there might be more of this. :twilightsheepish:

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Thanks for clearing this "stretched-mare-confusion".

I haven't had an idea yet where I use Celestia

I thought something like this:
:trollestia:: "So, the negotiations were successful?"
Cadance: "Yes. Very successful."
:trollestia:: "I'm glad to hear. Please, tell me more about how it was going."
Cadance: "Well, when we arrived there..."

But now I have another question.You showed us two zebra-potions:
- An aphrodisiac to turn on mares
- The cock-growing-potion

Any idea what else could they have? Considering their culture there is probably more...

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I was thinking about letting him use a multiple cock potion in a story where he foalsits Flurry Heart, which he seduces, along with Cadance. So a different story with the same zebra yet again, but I like the character so can you blame me? :twilightsheepish:

Other than that I haven't thought all that much about it. Sure there are possibilities about a virility one for broodmare purposes (no idea where to use that yet), or one for creating futanaries for a limited amount of time, but other than that I'm not having all that much ideas at the moment.

7340063 yes totaly^^ Even more so as it was stated that Celestia at least is prude as sin

I'm interested to see what would happen if she does hit her limit.

Will there be any tender moments with these three ?

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Abioye is tender in his own way. He would never hurt a mare and has always her pleasure in mind. But yeah, he is into domination and loves to pleasure mares that love to be dominated. So with that it might be hard to get any 'real' tender moments. Maybe aftermath moments. I had one in 'The Spreading Mare', the first story I used that OC. In that he cleaned Scootaloo lovingly after her use as a public cum dumpster.

So, he is a good guy and tender moments are possible, even if they aren't happening too often, due to his domination fetish. But rest assured in the knowledge that he values every mare, and I will use tender aftermath moments when they fit. Here in this story it just didn't seem all too fitting as Cadance was always craving for more. Sure, I will admit that the Bonus Chapter had the possibility for tenderness at the end, but I wanted that chapter to end with a banana line for the sake of humor. I kind of like humor every now and then! :pinkiesmile:

Edit: Oh! I almost forgot! About the limit thing... I really haven't anything planned for that. For two reasons: One, I'm not all too creative and lack often ideas. Two, I'm not sure if the Princess of Sex should really have a limit, with her being the embodiment of it and having a durable Alicorn body to back her title up. But I'm willing to hear out ideas. So if you have an idea for that, or any other things for future prequels and sequels of this you can tell me! :twilightsmile:

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I'm glad.

He kinda reads like a misogynist dick in parts, so it had me a bit worried.

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Really?! :pinkiegasp: Wow. I didn't think he would look like one. Only shows that I maybe should have given him a scene where he acts more casually. But I guess, what's done is done. :twilightblush:

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There were points where it got difficult to determine whether he was playing a character or not

"..... just for them to drag her violenty into a room and have there way with her....."
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............please continue :rainbowderp:

It took two more hours of constant use, before they finally had Cadance's brain fucked out sufficiently for her continued attempts to "negotiate" to trail off into incoherently stammering "B-ba... bana... na... NAAAA! naa..."

The barely conscious Princess of Sluts was then put out into the street to parade her cavernous, widely gaping fuckholes for all to see and use, while Shining and Abioye followed at a discreet distance to watch. After hours of cum-drunkenly stumbling through the zebra city and being pleasurably used and abused by dozens upon dozens of zebra stallions and mares, Cadance finally fell asleep in an alley, resting in a puddle of cum and covered from horn tip to tail tip in every type of sexual juice. Her husband and their host lovingly transported the exhausted cum dumpster back to their quarters, where they cleaned her up and let her rest in bed.

Shining was surprised the next morning, when Cadance insisted on going right back out again immediately. She had no intention of ever letting her gaping fuck-holes close up again. The Princess of Whorishness instructed him firmly that while she was out working on increasing the goodwill between their two nations, Shining was to continue negotiations with his old friend.

In addition to the banana trade, they would have to hammer out a massive exchange of mechanical sex toys for sexual potions. To encourage him to get this sorted out, she winked salaciously and whispered in his ear that he and the entire royal guard under his command would need a lot of alchemical assistance to keep her new appetites sated - otherwise she would just have to wander out into Canterlot and ruin her princessly reputation by enlisting the entire populace into a massive gangbang of her slutty plot.

As Shining watched his beloved wife saunter out into the city, tail hiked high and loose holes on display, he grinned and knew they were going to have the best marriage ever.

So if shining and Abyoie are fuck buddies does that mean they fucked each other too?

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That's actually kinda awesome and hot to boot! to write clopfics. :rainbowkiss:

You might have talent for this kind of stuff. Ever thought about writing clopfics? :pinkiesmile:

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No, they are only teaming up on mares. I'm not really into M/M, so you won't see me writing it. :twilightsheepish:

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Yes, I have toyed with the thought of writing an actual story, rather than a condensed "plotbunny" comment like this. If you'd give me permission, I could try my hand at expanding the comment I wrote into a sort of omake/tribute chapter for your story.

I believe I have a fairly good handle on your style of story - it's mainly Mdom D/s with bondage elements (e.g. stocks) but no hard s/m and a heavy emphasis on fantasies (or the reality) of degradation, humiliation, and (semi-)public use, am I right?

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Seems like you know me all too well! :yay:

And I would be honored considering it would be the first time someone would actually expand a story of mine. So I can only say, go ahead! I would love to read it! :rainbowkiss:

I would think a ritual like this would start with just the king fucking her by himself. I think it would be stronger that way, to start of slow and then slowly ramp it up.

Welp... this got pointed out to me and the person asked me to apply my usual snark and disdain for clop in my also always charming and loveable... and am afraid I'll have to disappoint. No jokes, but I have had thoughts

Zebrica was not a land of equality.

Probably haven't done much in the way of social structure or even economic and infrastructure consider much of their day is spent fucking

It was a land where females weren’t seen as equals.

I'll touch on this a little more in a bit

At least not in the leadership department.

Which is why zebra stallions need themselves chugged and railing some random broad in the middle of the road. Its very stressfuly being the head of a household! Honestly, I'd imagine the mares are grateful that their not on the top of the totem pole. Then they'd have to be an example and a pillar of the community, which means a lot less fun.

And hence a country with only females as leaders had a rather hard time to get around any sort of agreements, even if it were for some simple trade.

What, why? Okay, I can see zebras different ideas where a mare should be, but that doesn't mean its a matter of viewing females as lesser, just their own duties in society. Also, all males adhere to the rank and file. Also... yeah, mama Tia is a lady who hefts the powers cosmic. Keep slinging that dick their fella's, she'll be impressed with it one day!

Abioye is still young, correct? Actually, this shows a cunning and connecting with outsiders that would serve his nation.. but not to drag a pretty pony princess out of being Mommy Eternal to be railed by your local populace. Also, he risked the couples guards careers and very lives with that stunt! Mind you its less a moral failing on his part then it was experience. Sure, fun was had, but any future dealings will be started with the words "You know you choking on transport, handling, ad license fees entirely, correct? Its part of the fine print that comes with railing one of our matron goddeses."

And now onto "Equality"... Simply put, males do not put any stock in sluts. We like the idea of sluts, may even partake, we'll even pay a a few bills, but respect or love, hell no. Inj this scenario, the mares regard their actions as a means of currency, and since most enjoy lives of comfort before they hit late twenties, they think rarely past spending their fertile years being sexually available and then more then likely shackling some sucker when they knock her up. Rape though, as a side, would probably be more harshly punished since it turns mares of dick entirely, and really, if you can't get any without shattering some filly's psyche, then fucking anyone should be at your desperate matter in need of attention.

And thus we turn to the ones in true power, the older mares. As the fire dims and ones flesh grows less able ro be stretched and inflated, or even holding a stallions attention for a time, a girl must develop faculties in her day to day lest she be abandoned entirely. And more then likely, those mare would be the ones being courted and being held in regard and even loved.

Why? First, in Zebrica, death would be fairly more common and most not living past fifty or so, and given the rampant fucking, what would they need for some old woman? First, an older mare is wiser, making for someone who you can spend a few minutes after railing her and the conversation be actually the most enjoyable part

Second, attitude. All a young mare there needs to put out and some tail reveals, and you got them at your feet. In short, on little to no effort aside from being a jizz dumpster, your immediate needs are met, and you wouldn't need a good heart or even being pleasant.

In the third, utility. As beauty fades and ones body succumbs to hard work being schtupped near constantly, one must adapt and offer other faculties as a companion and head wife, a hard worker and stern mother, and rare is an older zebra mare who is not also kind and compassionate. Cooking and book keeping would also be valued assets since here males seem to largely leave the purse in the ladies hand.

And in an older mare, ones chances of siring are lessened and thus one less headache.

And thus the fourth, discretion. An older mare would be valued as a companion abouve all else, an ear to offer and a soft voice to ease ones turmoil with the cooling of the years then with a young one whose still in the emotional throws of maidenhood.

And of course, a stallion should ever seek to tend the fields most often plowed, correct?

So.. pretty much very arrogant and unfathomably idiotic mares of the stripe variety, in pursuit of parity with stallions, took a commodity, namely their sexual assets, and analed themselves euphorically into great depression level of future hardship since their availablity is so encompassing as to be worthless. And now, any smart stallion will scope up a nice older sugar mama who can actually run things and take the pump and dump as a mistress or as under his head wifes hoof

This is pretty much all the young mares theme, where they should either be silent by choice of their words stifled by dong

After I read the first chapter I just felt angry. Like in a killing mood angry. I won't give this a thumbs down cuse their people that like this, but its not for me.

... Welp, I'm now possibly inspired to possibly maybe one day consider the not so likely idea of perhaps doing a clollfic (a troll clopfic) of a meet the parents scenario where Velvet and Night Light enact their own form of holiday ...

To the expected, at least coming from me, results....:trollestia:
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NL: Well Velvet dear I'd say the first annual High Holy Day OF Fuck Zebra's Stupid was a rousing success!

V: Indeed my stud!

Random zebra slut#43: raaappppeee....

V: Dear... we all heard you. You first swung your big illusory dick with a smug yes like you were doing him a favor and ended up begging to pound you up and down the garden path, we all heard.

43: Disagreement... internalized misogyny...

V: What... Wait... Uh oh:twilightoops:


RZS#24: Socialism... works....


NL: Eh... its not that bad love. After all, fucking them stup,,,

Abioye: Freddy Got Fingered... is good....

NL:... OH GOD, WHAT HAVE DONE! SPIKE, GET A LETTER OUT!

Spike: FUCK YOU! WHY DO YOU PEOPLE BRING ME TO THESE THINGS!

V: WE BROUGHT YOU TO TAKE DICTATION!

S: DAMN IT, I TOLD YOU, I DON'T SWING THAT WAY , NOR ANYWAY AFTER THIS FIASCO, THANKS ALOT YOU PUTZES!

Abioye stepped happily forward to address the crowd.

"...and now begins...THE SNU SNU!!" (thunderous cheering ensues)

I usually don't comment on this sort of thing more then once, but I think I've found a distributor for Abioye

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