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I read the description, and then looked at the author, and sure enough, it was you. Can't wait to check this out.

Usually in fics like this, Spike gets cucked. Glad to see him grow some balls and claim what's his

Fizzle gone...I thought Rarity going to please him. But it is not...Oh poor Fizzle. The only one who didn't have chance to finish....

So... Sequel when?

Gimme a sequel.

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Glad to hear that I'm making a bit of an reputation! I hope this story lived up to your expectations! :pinkiesmile:

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I like Spike and thought it's only natural that he takes claim to his waifus! :rainbowkiss: I'm in any way glad you agree with me on that action. It is nicer to see Spike take control, even though I will admit that a sequel with Garble gangbanging them had its own charm. But hey, Spike deserves some love too! Even more so than Garble! :yay:

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You are right. I almost feel sorry for him. Then again, he could have blown his load, if he only were a bit more brave. On the other hand, who would want to stand against a greed-filled Spike? I guess he just wasn't lucky.

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That it is! :rainbowkiss:

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I was thinking about that too. Spike could possibly become the Dragon Lord and get his own little harem. Only problem I have is that I can't think of any way to introduce a gangbang in a sequel. And everyone who knows my work knows, that I love my gangbangs! :pinkiesmile: I mean, have I EVER written a story without one? But I would in any case want to write a sequel. I just need the right idea for it. Maybe a competition, seeing as the greedy Rarity doesn't want to share his gift? You are also invited to share your thoughts for a sequel. I'm open for ideas! :twilightsmile:

7382130 The competition part sounds interesting! If an idea pops into my head I'll let you know! Thanks for considering making a sequel for this story!

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Yeah. He isn't dare enough to face Spike like Garble. And that why I thought he with Rarity while Spike and Garble fuck Twilight senseless. Since she was ignored too, since Spike come in action. =w=

It's so rare to see Fizzle with female also...

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Not bad, hope to see more soon :pinkiehappy:

Great fic. I loved how Twilight mentions her royal title to get them fired up. I'd fuck a slut twice as hard if she did that

It would've been even better if Garble made her beg for his cock, though

Well, this was a fantastic read.

Good job, dude. :eeyup:

Honestly didn't see that coming at all--the Twilight showing her slutty self in front of Garble and his gang, and then Spike showing everydragon and pony why he loves his pony friends. Loved that part where Spike grew up to 'I'm gonna fuck you up' size--straight-up dominance at work. Honestly didn't think he actually had in it him; looks like he just needed the right trigger.

And now he's got Ember, and Rarity's next...what about that other female dragon from the episode? The one that wanted to make burps an official greeting.

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Take Rarity? One of Spike's mates? I don't think he has the balls for that too.

But you are right about Fizzle. He really is hardly used with any female. At least I can't name one single fic there that happened, besides my own here. But don't worry. I wanted to write a Barb gets gangbanged by dragons fic in the future, so that Fizzle gets another chance! :yay:

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Garble is a teenage dragon and doesn't really seemed like the type who would wait if presented with a princess pussy. That was why I decided to go with this approach. It just seemed to fit better, even though begging is quite hot. :pinkiesmile:

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I found it more fitting to stay with the Spike shippings. And I will admit that I find it more arousing if females get banged that are more known. Males aren't that important in that fact, as I'm concentrating more on the female gets rutted senseless aspect. So, I personally like it this way better.

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Yes. In the description that is mentioned. And the first bit with Rarity and Twilight was inspired by a picture of lumineko by the way. :pinkiesmile:

Hum, well this is one of the few occasions I've ever heard off a MLP fic that uses the human glory hole (aka: the male glory hole) instead of the "correct" equine/female one, and actually made sense xD

Considering the MLP dragons can actually use human ones without being inexplicable or illogical hehe~
See you still snuck in some of the more trope types of cock worship hehe~ Like random hyper. But big kudos for including what the fic actually contained using spoiler text ^^ So many seem to forget that for whatever reason. (Generally laziness or incompetence) So yeah, really nice work on the description~

And hm... haven't seen the pics in particular. But unless they have picked up their pace since last I saw their work, I will guess that they are as half-assed, generic and one sided as usual. Dunno why, but the pony fandom in particular has been on a roll to have incredibly poorly made/haphazard comics, folios and animations... at least when it comes to all the "AAA" equivalents. All have so far delivered less than 40 % of what was promised, or just outright lied about the content. Still baffles me how many just go "Oh well, it's not AS bad as it could have been..." and are contempt with it heh. Ah well, trailing off a bit. But from the looks of it, seems like you pulled off a really well made run of the mill, one sided cock worship story ^^ (with a little twist ending. Least from what I gathered.)

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It's no problem, really. And I'm glad you enjoyed my work! :twilightsmile:

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I personally only know of one fic that has this equine glory hole. I mean the equine one is the one where a plot of a female is placed in, correct? So there are quite more of the normal glory holes than you think. I mean, it even has its own group! :yay:

Also glad you enjoyed this. I hope that I can write a sequel one day that will be just as enjoyable! :pinkiesmile:

Wow, love it^^ but still, i was rooting for Garble, love the dominance in this dragon!!

7391111 There are a few, but yes, most favor the human version, as that's the one they know xP And yes, an equine glory hole is one mad for females. Named so based on their anatomy. As for humans, male have easiest to use glory holes. While for MLP's, females have the easeist~

And "normal" in our context. Just like we have hamburgers, and they have hayburgers ;3 And the group is for any types of glory hole, and glory hole use. Not just the gender pairing and act it's most known for ;D

Would personally recommend branching out some or trying some variations on what roles you use. But that's kinda limited by experience and all that hehe. Personally wish I could do more varied stuff... but people keep chaining me down to a particular line of themes heh.

7382130 Maybe ask Sining armor, cadence, Celestia, and Luna to come and visit the new dragon lord and his harem, then have them join in for a massive gang bang, with Celestia and Luna having the years in their belts to develop self cast Futa Spells.

i love it spike got twilight and ember pregnant

Rarity kinda disappeared for no apparent reason, beside that it was good. Just a bit odd to have a character seem to poof without a trace.

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Yeah, something of a shame to see her kinda fade out. Something of a continuation, a shorter bonus chapter to show what happened to the two dragon-cum addicted mares, would be pretty sweet on the authors part! :raritywink:

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There will be a sequel for this. The title will be something like: Dragon Concubines :pinkiesmile:

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Sounds fantastic, if it's anything like this entry! :raritystarry:

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It's not high on my priority list right now, since I pretty much only know a few things. Like how the characters will act mostly, but still need to develop the plot better. With other words it will take some time, but I hope the sequel will be just as satisfying read as this. :pinkiesmile:

With determination she trotted up to Spike, eagerly offering herself and waiting for her turn. After all, she wasn’t going to lose to some dragoness!

Meanwhile, seeing that Twilight was all alone, Garble walked back in and grabbed Twilight determined to make her his own personal cum dumpster for life.

This was a great story and I hope there will be more like this in the future.

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There will. If you have read some of my blogposts a sequel for it will be coming soon. :pinkiesmile:

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Sweet can't wait for it.

Question, will you a story starring Lady Terra, the female counterpart of Lord Tirek?

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Never thought about that before. Though I have more than enough other projects I want to still write, so it isn't something you can expect in the near future, if at all. I mean, first I would need an idea I like myself as well, but like I said other stories need my attention now.

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That's fine I was just curious is all.

Unedited?

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It is one of my older stories where I didn't use Editors. I pretty much read the story over a few times and edited myself. :twilightsheepish:

Is it alright if we get more give of Garble dominating Twilight, not sure why but I really like Twilight being Garble's own personal cum dumpster.

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