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Teh ending!
I think we've all had a fantasy like this as a sexually charged teenager. Who wouldn't want to be king of the world and turn it into their own personal fetish dungeon.
nice
Very nicely done.
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a nice person
Ouch, just ouch. And for all that enjoyable. Oh, and Diamond Tiara deserves it
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Touche.
Out of curiosity, I clicked this...
A few minutes later...
Fuck you curiosity!
Talk about depraved mind...
I can say that I'm sorta pervert and I have a dirty mind but this is too much.
I always prefer the more consensual stuff...
And I especially like well written romance clop...They make me feel warm and happy...not disgusted with myself afterward.
And this actually make me "unlike" the whole thing...So, congratualation because I'm pretty sure that this story was meant to be like that.
Kinda like making you hate the bad guy of the story and love the good guy of the story thing.
Many stories failed and making people actually prefer the bad guy because they are actually better that the good guy.
Awesome!!!
Totally awesome!
Not enough of lunchlady though.
This colt deserves to be king!
A sequel, perhaps?
Maybe Twilight intends to find out what his mindscape entails without Discord's help, but finds herself trapped and changing to match what he fantasises her to be?
Or perhaps she recruits Luna for the task and either or both lose themselves in his dream?
Perhaps it even affects how they think once the return from the vision?
A brat with omnipotent power, you say? Sounds like It's a Good Life.
I enjoyed this story, but I wouldn't mind seeing a slightly different version. Instead of bondage and restraints, what if his godlike powers rendered such things unnecessary? Everyone willingly goes along with every insane whim, because if they refuse he can just wish them away into the corn field.
Overall, though, I quite enjoyed this story.
I'd not want to be in Discord's position. I still prefer to maintain what little sanity I retain.
Twilight sweetie, you really don't want to know.
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no he doesnt hes terrible
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strictly a one shot, m'fraid. however, look out for similar stories from me to cum lol
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heh, i'd be lying if i said that werent an influence of sorts HOWEVER ill also add:
the bondage is kinda a false-hope thing? like, this colt doesn't use his mind control power to the full extent because he wants to see suffering, and where something like 'i'm literally being forced to do this by an omnipotent power' would probably overwhelm a pony mind, a pony can intuitively grasp the humiliation of being built into a blowjob-locker, or a urinal, or a rimjob chair. iunno probably makes more sense in my head?
The way this ended is why I love it so much.
Good keks
Worth it for the punchline.
What the hell did i just read?
the ending was the best part
That ending though. Makes me kinda realize how much I want a fic about an all-powerful brat completely enslaving Equestria to his will. Ah, now that's something i'd like to read.
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You can only shock me so many times before I become numb to it, I stopped being surprised at around the 1/4 mark.
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this isn't shock porn, its fap fuel
5980541 Well in that case it isn't meant for someone like me, I'm more of a traditionalist I suppose. Regardless, this is quality work; not just one of those fics that are bad just to be bad.
I like the authors notes... that is mostly why I voted it up. It was a decent storry. But there are many of that. Nice writing style though.
Please update with shop class. I want to know.
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...dammit i can't resist. it'll be up later tonight
Before reading
Miss Cheerilee has already started the lesson. She’s on her table, getting triple-penetrated by a trio of construction workers.
At the end
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This sadistic little sh*t.
I love it! Now I really wish Twilight or Luna found themselves trapped in his dream, unable to escape.
Thank you.
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yessss luna angrily protesting that the dream will not sustain himself and he will wake within "weeks" and he laughs in her face, shoves his dick in her unwilling mouth, and makes dream!celestia suck her sister's clit.
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anything you liked about it?
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Oh, that's nice!
Weeks, eh? How much lasting mental damage and/or conditioning can he put into 'a few weeks'?
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He doesn't believe her, he thinks it's just something he made up in his head. Still, two weeks of dream time is a lot of time to explore all of luna's holes, make her serve as a public slut, get her well-acquianted with the taste of piss and asshole, show her the joys of sisterly incest...
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Mhm, that sounds like a fun read! And if any of that sticks in Luna's mind beyond just his dreamscape, things in Canterlot might become... very interesting.
If I may I would suggest that you put this story in the group bimbofication,bimbos, and sluts this is just a suggestion and great story btw.
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Done. You know you can add stories to groups yourself, right?
6094666 you learn something new every day
6085289 dude, you got issues.
you so fucking didnt warn us about SCAT gawd dammit!
and why the hell does everyone hate Twist so much? I can't believe you gave her the same treatment as Diamond!
still I'd be lying if I said I wasnt turned on by her position also. I just hate myself a little more for it.
that ending.. THANK YOU SO MUCH!
SCAT WARNING YOU SICK SUNUVA...
that's the one thing I can not stand!
you need a whole lot more warnings in the description and a butt load of therapy. Otherwise well written well done
this colt needs to die.. CUPCAKES anypony?
Oh and btw I'd take Silver Spoon out of the tags and add OC in her place. There really is no need to mention her, she's literally just a hole in a locker door and is only mentioned by name once.
let me be clear, I am NOT insulting your work or you as a person. I was surprised (not pleasantly so, I might add) by the SCAT and shere brutality. But you know I took the risk and still upvoted (
I feel so dirty). It's my own damn fualt my fetishes take me to some dark places.That being said I think you would enjoy the arts and fiction of the "Fall of Equestria" Universe. Fillies and mares being slaves simply by gender and treated with hardly any mercy. Might be right up your
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its only implied scat and in the second instance, ass-to-mouth. as rocco says, "ITS JUST SMELLZ"....
thank you very much for the review!
Twist got the same treatment as Diamond because Sparkbright is a dick who can't think of a better use for her
i'm torn on Fall of Equestria. Schorl Tourmaline has done some nice things with it, but it just feels a bit iunno, contrived. weirdly regimented. can't really describe it.
*small claps* We never did get to see how Twilight would react to all this....
Any chance we'll get to see how the rest of the school day progresses? This is absolutely amazing!