Teh ending!

I think we've all had a fantasy like this as a sexually charged teenager. Who wouldn't want to be king of the world and turn it into their own personal fetish dungeon.

nice

Very nicely done.

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Who wouldn't want to be king of the world and turn it into their own personal fetish dungeon.

a nice person

Ouch, just ouch. And for all that enjoyable. Oh, and Diamond Tiara deserves it

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Touche.

Out of curiosity, I clicked this...
A few minutes later...
Fuck you curiosity!
Talk about depraved mind...
I can say that I'm sorta pervert and I have a dirty mind but this is too much.
I always prefer the more consensual stuff...
And I especially like well written romance clop...They make me feel warm and happy...not disgusted with myself afterward.
And this actually make me "unlike" the whole thing...So, congratualation because I'm pretty sure that this story was meant to be like that.
Kinda like making you hate the bad guy of the story and love the good guy of the story thing.
Many stories failed and making people actually prefer the bad guy because they are actually better that the good guy.

Awesome!!!

Totally awesome!

Not enough of lunchlady though.

This colt deserves to be king!

A sequel, perhaps?

Maybe Twilight intends to find out what his mindscape entails without Discord's help, but finds herself trapped and changing to match what he fantasises her to be?

Or perhaps she recruits Luna for the task and either or both lose themselves in his dream?

Perhaps it even affects how they think once the return from the vision?

I won’t go in to how exactly I gained Discord’s power, how I’m able to manipulate the fabric of reality without anypony else even realising it, how I went from a dorky, unpopular colt to a literal god.

A brat with omnipotent power, you say? Sounds like It's a Good Life.

I enjoyed this story, but I wouldn't mind seeing a slightly different version. Instead of bondage and restraints, what if his godlike powers rendered such things unnecessary? Everyone willingly goes along with every insane whim, because if they refuse he can just wish them away into the corn field.

Overall, though, I quite enjoyed this story.

I'd not want to be in Discord's position. I still prefer to maintain what little sanity I retain.

Twilight sweetie, you really don't want to know.

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no he doesnt hes terrible

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strictly a one shot, m'fraid. however, look out for similar stories from me to cum lol

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heh, i'd be lying if i said that werent an influence of sorts HOWEVER ill also add:

the bondage is kinda a false-hope thing? like, this colt doesn't use his mind control power to the full extent because he wants to see suffering, and where something like 'i'm literally being forced to do this by an omnipotent power' would probably overwhelm a pony mind, a pony can intuitively grasp the humiliation of being built into a blowjob-locker, or a urinal, or a rimjob chair. iunno probably makes more sense in my head?

The way this ended is why I love it so much.

Good keks

Worth it for the punchline.

What the hell did i just read?

the ending was the best part

That ending though. Makes me kinda realize how much I want a fic about an all-powerful brat completely enslaving Equestria to his will. Ah, now that's something i'd like to read.

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You can only shock me so many times before I become numb to it, I stopped being surprised at around the 1/4 mark.

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this isn't shock porn, its fap fuel

5980541 Well in that case it isn't meant for someone like me, I'm more of a traditionalist I suppose. Regardless, this is quality work; not just one of those fics that are bad just to be bad.

I like the authors notes... that is mostly why I voted it up. It was a decent storry. But there are many of that. Nice writing style though.

Please update with shop class. I want to know.

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...dammit i can't resist. it'll be up later tonight

Before reading

Miss Cheerilee has already started the lesson. She’s on her table, getting triple-penetrated by a trio of construction workers.

At the end

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As I walk out of the room, Truffles pushes past me, a pained look on his face and a rumbling belly. He barges straight into the stall, and I laugh out loud. The pony installed in the stall is of course our former lunchlady. She’s fed us so much crap over the years, I thought it was only fair to return the favor.

you so fucking didnt warn us about SCAT gawd dammit!

and why the hell does everyone hate Twist so much? I can't believe you gave her the same treatment as Diamond!

still I'd be lying if I said I wasnt turned on by her position also. I just hate myself a little more for it.

that ending.. THANK YOU SO MUCH!

6314652 May I ask for the why?

Jesus fucking Christ, a sorry isn't enough!