yessss luna angrily protesting that the dream will not sustain himself and he will wake within "weeks" and he laughs in her face, shoves his dick in her unwilling mouth, and makes dream!celestia suck her sister's clit.
He doesn't believe her, he thinks it's just something he made up in his head. Still, two weeks of dream time is a lot of time to explore all of luna's holes, make her serve as a public slut, get her well-acquianted with the taste of piss and asshole, show her the joys of sisterly incest...
6087387 Mhm, that sounds like a fun read! And if any of that sticks in Luna's mind beyond just his dreamscape, things in Canterlot might become... very interesting.
Oh and btw I'd take Silver Spoon out of the tags and add OC in her place. There really is no need to mention her, she's literally just a hole in a locker door and is only mentioned by name once.
let me be clear, I am NOT insulting your work or you as a person. I was surprised (not pleasantly so, I might add) by the SCAT and shere brutality. But you know I took the risk and still upvoted (I feel so dirty). It's my own damn fualt my fetishes take me to some dark places.
That being said I think you would enjoy the arts and fiction of the "Fall of Equestria" Universe. Fillies and mares being slaves simply by gender and treated with hardly any mercy. Might be right up your ass alley.
its only implied scat and in the second instance, ass-to-mouth. as rocco says, "ITS JUST SMELLZ"....
thank you very much for the review!
Twist got the same treatment as Diamond because Sparkbright is a dick who can't think of a better use for her
i'm torn on Fall of Equestria. Schorl Tourmaline has done some nice things with it, but it just feels a bit iunno, contrived. weirdly regimented. can't really describe it.
This sadistic little sh*t.
I love it! Now I really wish Twilight or Luna found themselves trapped in his dream, unable to escape.
Thank you.
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yessss luna angrily protesting that the dream will not sustain himself and he will wake within "weeks" and he laughs in her face, shoves his dick in her unwilling mouth, and makes dream!celestia suck her sister's clit.
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anything you liked about it?
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Oh, that's nice!
Weeks, eh? How much lasting mental damage and/or conditioning can he put into 'a few weeks'?
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He doesn't believe her, he thinks it's just something he made up in his head. Still, two weeks of dream time is a lot of time to explore all of luna's holes, make her serve as a public slut, get her well-acquianted with the taste of piss and asshole, show her the joys of sisterly incest...
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Mhm, that sounds like a fun read! And if any of that sticks in Luna's mind beyond just his dreamscape, things in Canterlot might become... very interesting.
If I may I would suggest that you put this story in the group bimbofication,bimbos, and sluts this is just a suggestion and great story btw.
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Done. You know you can add stories to groups yourself, right?
6094666 you learn something new every day
6085289 dude, you got issues.
SCAT WARNING YOU SICK SUNUVA...
that's the one thing I can not stand!
you need a whole lot more warnings in the description and a butt load of therapy. Otherwise well written well done
this colt needs to die.. CUPCAKES anypony?
Oh and btw I'd take Silver Spoon out of the tags and add OC in her place. There really is no need to mention her, she's literally just a hole in a locker door and is only mentioned by name once.
let me be clear, I am NOT insulting your work or you as a person. I was surprised (not pleasantly so, I might add) by the SCAT and shere brutality. But you know I took the risk and still upvoted (
I feel so dirty). It's my own damn fualt my fetishes take me to some dark places.That being said I think you would enjoy the arts and fiction of the "Fall of Equestria" Universe. Fillies and mares being slaves simply by gender and treated with hardly any mercy. Might be right up your
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its only implied scat and in the second instance, ass-to-mouth. as rocco says, "ITS JUST SMELLZ"....
thank you very much for the review!
Twist got the same treatment as Diamond because Sparkbright is a dick who can't think of a better use for her
i'm torn on Fall of Equestria. Schorl Tourmaline has done some nice things with it, but it just feels a bit iunno, contrived. weirdly regimented. can't really describe it.
*small claps* We never did get to see how Twilight would react to all this....
Any chance we'll get to see how the rest of the school day progresses? This is absolutely amazing!
You sick, twisted, demented person.
Lets be friends.
My oc vee vermilion will be coming to this universe in order to stop you cause it's his job to go around the multiverse and protect children
6087365 Came back for... clopping...
Bondage...
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OOh I enjoy this.
More please.
Mooooooore please dude.
Ya police, we got a sick bastard over here.
I wanna see him use his power to break free abd wreak havoc on reality.
Nobody's safe or sacred enough.
And while I much prefer oral rape over any other orifice, that's up to you.
You know the railroad from fo4 well maybe you could put in something like that
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That's the way it goes, on fimfiction.
You'll find your best, and your worst too.
Ahh still the best chapter for me. It actually focuses on the rape more then (not my thing) asshole licking. Gross.
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What's your fave bits, if you don't mind me asking?