Oh my boner, an update!

*dead*

Oh yes, an update!!

I wonder how the Twilight's Family are taking this?

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well, it's only taking place in this kid's head, so not at all I guess

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You know the railroad from fo4 If you make a sequel make it about a simaller froup freeing mares

So this WHOLE story was a Dream for that perverted Colt, good job I am so glad it was only a dream, if it wasn't then one of the four Princesses could have just blasted him with enough power to destroy him, I mean come on they are the Immortal Princesses of Equestia, only Dicsords FULL power could take them on and win.

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this comment feels kinda quaint and nostalgic seeing how King of Ponyville is now basically the tamest thing i've written

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No shit.

i'm stealing this idea. sorry not sorry. i'll live you credit

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which idea in particular? because I can't wait to see it, so make sure you leave a link in the comments when you're done!

8038216 the part about turning ponyville into his own perverted playground. however only for a day and not so much watersport since that's not a personal fetish of mine.

I wouldn’t eat a living dove so...

somehow this is heartwarming

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Proablay when ever actually sex happens. To be honest a lot of the bits in this story feel like there being fast forwarded or jumbled bewteem segments of other characters. Like I love everything with the twins up until rlRumble and friend get up there and it’s just over. Then with Cheerilee’s bit it’s interrupted by Rumble getting his ass licked. It feels like you have to be bi to enjoy it. I feel like it cloud be better balanced. Just my thoughts. I think Im the most tame when it comes to rape. I just want some good old fashioned crying rape without them ending up “likeing” it by ether brainwashing or it becoming consensual.

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for more straight-up no-frills rape, try Desk Job or https://www.fimfiction.net/story/355892/diplomatic-service, those might be more your speed.

I wonder if the King ever dreamt of a trip to the School of Friendship. So much to learn there, after all. Or... would it better fit an entirely new story..?

So Celestia's trapped in a block of concrete, with her sister's horn up her ass...what happens when she needs to pee, or poop?

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enchantments on the two horns inside her magically remove them as needed

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Unbreaking III enchantment