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Cocknie Thug


very good at writing very bad things

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7685402

I SAY THIS OVER AND OVER AND PEOPLE KEEP LOOKING IN THE BAG

Yes.... so much yes. I wanna see that scootabooty destroyed.... a shower of scootagoo, big mac cum, and tears... :pinkiecrazy:

7917005

he's coming inside her, no protection. cue scootamom....

update soon? I'm excited to see more.

I wonder what the end result is going to be for everything. Applejack and Rarity are on board with this and I'm guessing the others are two. I hope we get to see a scene where they all survey Mac's handywork, or perhaps an epilogue some time in the future after these events.

Noc

I was hoping Sweetie would be next, and I’m pleased. Too bad she didn’t get any anal, though I doubt she shares the feeling …

Also, is it wrong if I imagine Mac using Bloom just about anywhere and anyhow from now on? Like, one morning the Apples awake and enter the kitchen for breakfast, only to find Mac already there piledriving a tied-up Bloom in the ass, and she’s totally mortified. He tells her the forced exposure is to get her used to being displayed and fucked like a whore around her family, since they’ll be doing that every day from now on.

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mac is gonna be screwing Sweetie Belle until the little slut has triplets, i'm sure he'll get to her asshole sooner or later :P

as for Apple Bloom, well... to be honest Granny Smith would get ornery if her breakfast was interrupted by screwing, so they'd probably just keep it to the bedroom. mac would rail her ass while she gave AJ a nice, loving rimjob...

Noc

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mac would rail her ass while she gave AJ a nice, loving rimjob...

You just insist on writing stuff that demands its own chapter, don’t you …

Also, given how normalized this seems for the Apples and Rarity, I wonder how would Ponyville take it if Mac were to set a trussed-up Bloom in town and rail her publicly now and again? Maybe just for special occasions. And of course, to help the farm, there’d be donations, maybe even a cont—

Christ, I actually started describing Sister Act without realizing it. COINCIDENCE?

8435166

mac would rail her ass while she gave AJ a nice, loving rimjob...

I like how your mind thinks.

Also yay, an update! Thanks <3

8455094

Twisted minds writhe alike!

Any highlights for you?

What did they do to deserve this?! Ouch Apple family and Rarity this was low. Hopefully this all turns out to have been a dream or some sort of illusion as this chapter fully cemented this story as dark.

Okay everyone! Who wants to have a Ponyville Slimeball MAssacre!

dead dove do not eat

What the heck is that supposed to mean?

8849399
That depends, who are the targets and how far from Ponyville can we go?


8851752

I means that this story is going to contain something disgusting. And boy does this story not disappoint.

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Big Mac
Rarity
Diamond Tiara
Silver Spoon
Anyone who agreed to this

🤒

You are very sick. Is it wrong that I feel completely terrible that I actually read this story from the start and only now am completely disgusted with it?

There we go a dark happy ending

Noc

Another happy ending.

Happy for whom, though …

8946752
It just means, that you haven't been paying attention :D

8947527
Happy for the readers, of course...

"It'll be your new life, sis. No school, no college, just crawling around the farmhouse with swelled-up feet and a swelled-up belly, sucking my cock until I send you back to the kitchen to cook supper. My lil' barefoot and pregnant cocksucker slave..."

This is fantastic.

She wasn't protesting or screaming or even crying, all her usual vinegar and fire was gone, crushed out and ground into nothing.

I wished more stories did that.

The irony that spunky, punky Scootaloo had become the most thoroughly tamed of the trio was not lost on him. Fearful of punishment and desperate to please, she seemingly spent half her mind and all of her body trying to anticipate Mac's wishes. It wasn't hard to see why, after all, her shoulder would twitch in pain if he so much as raised his voice.

In the kitchen, Sweetie Belle sung softly along to the radio. Of the three, she had changed the least, completely adjusting to her new role as servant-wife and brood mother

2 years later and there's still nothing like this yet. I wished there's more.

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