• Member Since 1st Apr, 2013
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Cocknie Thug


very good at writing very bad things

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(After reading the story description) .... *slowly, nervously, walks away*

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you're better off. this is not good porn for most people, unless you enjoy feeling sad and nauseated.

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I dunno, I enjoy your fics, man.

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You and I are not most people.

You're my target audience

I dunno, that dove looks tasty.

So basically she's in a bitchsuit? Hot. Never seem to see those in fan fics for some reason.

You suck fuck, I love you)

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any highlights for you?

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Dildo plugged in the mare, and buttfucking while swallowing loads of dog cum, her wishing for one gulp of water to clean her gums. That, and ending with auto pump. Other stuff was top notch too, but these are best moments.

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autopump is best pump, especially when set to random...

have you seen Sweet Apple Discipline or my clopshots collection yet?

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Yeah, you're on my watch list, dude. Love your work. Sweet Apple Discipline wasn't my cup of tea, but other fics are great, and collection is cool. FIve Course Meal and Desk Job are my favourite ones, love continuity there. Hoping for some degrading stuff with real proud and strong mares, like Lightning Dust and Spitfire. Maybe throw Soaren in the mix, and have Thunderlane or Filthy blackmail and degrade the fuck outta them! Just... dreaming out loud here :pinkiehappy:

Shouldn't the Orthros handler get an OC tag?

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we don't know his identity. might not be an oc

More bitchsuit shenanigans. :heart:

Of course with the way he's treating her, you have to wonder how long he actually intends to keep her alive for, or at least in relatively decent health. Then again it's porn taking place in a world with anthro magical unicorns and a geocentric solar system, so maybe I shouldn't analyse it.

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oh, he's only holding her for the duration of his 'training course.' once she's proven herself to be able to handle the responsibility of an orthros, she'll be free to go - though, he might return for her in the future should he need another 'assistant'

Ahhhh yes~ Lots of dead dove fics are too scared to venture the extra spicy route or just do it for the reaction because let's face it, the average user here doesn't like clopfics that aren't the average vanilla shipfic, usually with a shipping that everyone has already done to death.

I commend you, this is glorious.

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glad you liked! any highlights for you?

Well, gotta finance your rape somehow. I like how this is somehow crueler than your other stories. Not enough that she's an uncomfortably bound sex and humiliation slave, but he's really rubbing it in just how casually he's profiting from destroying her life.

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while having his ass eaten out, naturally...

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also, if you like my work, send me a PM with your fave bits in it and I might send you a special mini-fic in return

(that's actually how this fic started, btw)

No seriously, fuck you. This just ruined my day. WHY?!

Both to why can't I stop reading it and WHY THE EVER HOLY FUCK DO YOU WRITE THIS SHIT?!

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they're just a normal set of training tapes for responsible pet owners i dont really see whats objectionable here

That idea with a casual pet owner making tapes about animal caretaking is so ridiculous, but I really like it :) I'm actually pretty curious what, erm, adventures!, await Teddie, waiting for more updates!

I wonder if our nameless trainer had clients in Ponyville too. In particular, whether or not this one:
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Was a result of him going for brain breaking instead of washing. I'm sure Teddy won't have to worry about ending up like that, though! Not as long as she's being a good girl, anyway! I'm sure he'll let her keep most of her mind, even if she's conditioned to be her and any other dog's sex toy for the rest of her life!

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Screw Loose is actually a secret alicorn; don't mess with her

Teddie is going to have a normal life after this, tho in this case 'normal' miiiiight involve sucking dog dicks every day for food and shelter. what even is normal, anyway?

dead dove do not eat

...Is probably the closest thing You could describe the story with. Just reading the description makes Me realize what I'm getting into. Heck,the very beginning makes no sense either. It should have some build up,but instead it's straight into the slavery. Also,why didn't She quit His crap after being raped (Assuming She can just cut off the money flow going to Him)? Moreover,what the hell is an Orthros? Idk if there's a thing I missed from the series,but this sounds like a bad toothpaste brand name.


At least You gave an almost straight to the point warning. Can't really give it an downvote for that,but this also doesn't deserve a upvote.

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an orthros is a two-headed dog that comes up in the series, along with the character Teddie Safari

she doesn't quit after the first rape because at that point she'd already been kidnapped, and she can't cut off the money flow because he's planning to steal it anyway

starts in the middle of things because this is a clop story, and we don't need 3000 words of porn-free introduction before we get to the strokeworthy stuff

thanks for not downvoting I guess?

Is it useful to brand an Orthros' fucktoy? I mean, one would never do something so cruel to a dog, but... she's not a real dog, right?

Are we going to be getting more of this?

It’s amazing how often I keep returning to this story, and this chapter in particular. I hope you still feel like continuing it, ’cause I’d love to read it.

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honestly same, i wish i had the time and energy to write stories with pretty much every female character in MLP and a good chunk of the male characters being forced to service bright-red, precum-dripping, overpoweringly-musky orthros cock

might get some writing done this weekend, but that'll probably be Sweet Apple Discipline tho...

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Sounds good to me. Anything more from you is a pleasure. (Hurr, hurr)

Comment posted by Noc deleted Jan 15th, 2021

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you're excited for teddie's motivated oral performance? :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Noc deleted Jan 15th, 2021

Another awesome tape from our favorite trainer :D
A part of me wish that her training will never end... but a bigger part want her getting fucked by the Orthros :rainbowwild:

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Well, I think we can justify a chapter or two post-Orthros dicking....

Also, fave bit?

I too am curious about those shots. Also, very nice chapter! Heh, maybe he should paint some helpful marks and/or words on her body, like what you get on manuals—to show the viewer how they know their boys are treating her right. "Paws go here, insert doggy-dick in this slot, feeding hatch=pour k9 jizz inside"...

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Might add some tattooing stuff in the later chapters :P

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Tough to choose, but I guess her reacton when the fucking starts. Despite everything that happened so far, she is -or was- not completely broken and she can still sink lower. It just wouldn't be as much fun otherwise.

I'll have you know there's a halfway decent gun in Destiny 2 named "Orthrus" so every once in awhile I'll be killed by it or have it drop or something and immediately be reminded of brutal dog rape. So, uh, thanks.

Hey! Another chapter of this awesome story! I cant wait for the next one. Nice to see a well trained and well behaved bitch.

Oh, that's sweet! He's making sure she can get some orgasms of her own, she just has to have one of the doggies help her. With how out of her mind she is, the lesson of submitting to dogs to feel pleasure might stick with her for a long, long time.

Once he’s done training that bitch might need to get more for the pack she might get lonely

Can't wait for Tape#10 :pinkiehappy:

Of course it dies here! When else would it?

Too bad this was never finished. Especially since it seemed to be in the home stretch. Though, if you want to give it a go again, I'm more than happy to provide any aid I can.

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