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Ekhidna


Hobby writer and potentially a complete future one aswell!

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Been waiting for this man and it sure is golden

I hope we can see how the elements and the princesses feelings on the fall. You covered Cadence, but skipped everyone else. I'm looking forward to see how they're coping.

Good start, good start. It's nice to see you back!

Holy crap... the Fall really did changed Equestria and the world forever.

Great new chapter looking forward to the next one.

That is... until a caribou, her master at the time, decided to teach her a lesson by ripping away her left eye and doing something I rather not say to both the eye and the socket."

I wonder if that particular caribou realized that saying you're going to skull fuck someone is supposed to be an idle threat

I love that last line mang...

Man that some heavy stuff.

It sure is :heart: NOW GIVE ME BLOOD ON NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

Jesus... Soarin sure is hating himself a lot. Your writing really presented the emotional and mental pain in this chapter.

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Thank you. Glad you liked it.

I wonder how Rainbow feels about Soarin at this point. She is aware of the corruption being the cause for his change, and she saw that even Spike had to pretend to be something he wasn't, but she suffered greatly at Soarin's hands. Could she ever look at him as a teamate again, or would she strive to never be in his presence if at all possible.

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That answer is already given in the Resurrection story-line. In Judgment, Rainbow Dash forgave Soarin for what he did since it was the caribou who turned him into a monster, and she knew he had to keep up the act after his mind was free to keep her, his remaining teammates, and other mares safe even before joining Spike.

In Resurrection Rainbow is a Scaled Guard as a member of the Wingless Unit, which Soarin commands. The issue here is that Soarin can't or is unwilling to forgive himself.

Spike spent time with his bestest of friends one final time, this make me happy and sad at the same time.

Dude... Why you gotta pull on my heartstrings?

You...promised... And you made so... Congrats dude

Great chapter but damn it man, I was hoping to read more. Why am I so bucking quick at reading, damn it!

Beautiful... It's absolutely...Beautiful...:fluttercry:

I hate you so much for making me cry right now. DAMN YOU BRO!!!! I need to go for a walk, this chapter was just to heartbreaking for me. And I'm normally the master of dark shit, but never feels....never feels.

Amazing, I have now word left. Good job

It's back!!!!! But damn this is cold...damn.

I spotted a few errors but nothing major, just remember it's Apple Bloom. Anyway, really, really well done chapter, I love how detailed and crafted this chapter is my friend.

You know, I was always interested about what happen to Tiara and Silver after I saw their cameo in Judgement, so seeing a bit more about them is certainly welcoming.

I'm somewhat familiar with this universe and honestly have pretty conflicted feelings on it, but here I am still reading!
I especially like this chapter (and for once someone mentioned how much what they're doing is literally genocide), and seeing someone stand against the fighting and warfare. Making them ursas was pretty interesting.
The very end was excellent- that alone convinced me to give this a like, well done!

This is awesome, I would like to see more stories like this: moments from the End of the Fall from a normal person's perspective. If this fic's gonna continue longer, might I request to see a few more stories like this? There's something satisfying in seeing those bastards pay.

A single shining spot in a sea of muck and crap... Such good story man

I'm a huge fan of duel weapons. This one was awesome. Now I'd love to see the god of chaos himself just tearing the nation in half in rage. I love this.

Interesting take on the Justice League. I like it. Great job my friend.

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I think you made a mistake, sire. That is Sabaton, Rise of Evil. Anyways, leaving a link to Durin's song in the A/N, thanks!

I had to watch the Justice League intro after reading this. :pinkiehappy:

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Fixed. Im on mobile and bloody thing doesnt purge the clipboard with system shutdowns.

You use the last verse of the song of durin. Well done.

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I love it man, I just find it amusing for not expecting it sooner...

Strange, for some reason I thought that the song that inspired you was Europa, by Globus

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