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Inked Moongleam


A purveyor of fine horse porn.

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I am usually neutral to foalcon but this is well done. There are really few clop stories with Pip out there. And now that i think f it, same for Dinky, even never saw a single one with the 2 together

wow this is good

also that clear and well explained warning in the description is a really good idea

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also that clear and well explained warning in the description is a really good idea

I'm glad I added it. This way I'm absolutely certain those early dislikes were made by avid foalcon enthusiasts, who were underwhelmed by the first chapter, rather than people who clicked on a foalcon story by accident.

Would you be interested in reading ideas for future chapters?

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I already have several, but I'm open to suggestions.

I'd like to lick you, Miss Cheerilee. You know… under your tail."

Cheerilee chuckled at his coyness. "That's my 'vulva', Pip.

That's a shame. I was hoping for some ass worship.

10946480 Do any of those ideas involve ass worship by any chance?

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A chapter focusing on analingus and other anal fun is already on the todo list. :raritywink:

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Do you want them here or in PMs?

That was really cute, I'm excited to see where this goes.

Loved it! If it's not too much trouble I'd love to read one Silverspoon requests Filthy Rich.

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That's an interesting idea. I'll think about it!

nicely done, surprised she could take big mac.

and that with dinky in my first comment, sorry, old habit

Very nice premise. Really interested to see what pairings happen in the future.

This is cute, and a nice idea! How many chapters and partners are you planning?

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Alright.

One other quick question:
Would you be willing to include mind control somehow, or is this just consent focused?

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How many chapters and partners are you planning?

I plan to add chapters whenever I feel like it, and there's really no set plans for a specific number. I'm also considering opening up for commissions, both for new stories and extra chapters.

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This anthology is for consensual fun only.

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Alright.
That's what I figured just wanted to check to make sure.

I've got a few ideas, but here's just one for now:
Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash having some fun on top of the clouds, with Dash playfully dominating the filly, who wanted to be the sub.

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I like that. I already wanted a chapter focusing on BDSM, and ScootaDash would indeed be a really good pairing for it.

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Cool :)

I do have a few other ideas, but I'll wait a bit before sending them

I started reading this and….didn’t know what to think, really. This was my first foalcon story that wasn’t played as a joke. I was really torn at first.
And yes, I read the warning before I jumped in, so it wasn’t a surprise.

But this was written very well. Cheerilee’s character remains intact, which is what I was most worried about, honestly. So thankyou for the exposure. Dunno how often I’ll dip into foalcon in the future, but this experience was a good one. :twilightsmile:

alright.

Liked and watched.

Dunno why, but Applebloom and Twilight popped in my head. Maybe they can work on some new “Potions”

Just passing by to say that I completely misread the short page summary.

Every Friday, Cheerilee rewards her student of the week with a wonderful prize. A foalcon anthology!

I took that to mean that students are rewarded with an anthology of foalcon, possibly written by Cheerilee herself.

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I completely understand. To be honest, I figured that might happen.

I'll see if I can improve it.

You're not being brigaded. Lucky!

Edit: Your ratio does suggest downvotes directed at your description, though no insane comments. Good.

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You don't have organized downvotes and negative comments directed at you the way I Feel Pretty Did. Hope your luck holds out.

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HAHAHA I thought the exact same thing when I first read it.

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Oh, I'm sure it's all thanks to my amazing disclaimer. Nothing set a hater straight like a good, no-nonsense message of warning.

:rainbowderp:

What the fuck have you brought upon this cursed land

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Agreed. We're all cursed already, but this is stacking another :/

/shrug

This is just too cute! I love the descriptions of Pip and Cheerliee together. Keep up the good work!

Apple Bloom said she'd have a sleepover with her friends at Sweetie Belle's

Meanwhile, Sugar Belle smiled, leaving quietly before her husband and the lucky filly rose from their shared afterglow. Having arrived earlier, Sugar Belle had been able to watch Big Mac as he gave this sweet filly her first time. Watching his cum leak from her vulva afterward had been especially exciting, the memory of it making Sugar Belle’s clit throb.

A shame they didn't get to join in.

10947276 I'm seriously hoping this ends in an orgy.

10947524 And Twilight can teach Sweetie Belle some new magic spells.

10947016 So much yes! Nowhere near enough of that pairing and we need more of it!

10947356 Incest is always a plus for me! :pinkiehappy:

Not gonna lie, i wasn't realy sure what to expect with this story.

In chapter one I was like well thats an unusual but oddly effective way to motivate your students to do better in class but the whole interaction between miss Cheerilee and ill pip was kinda adorable so I read on.

And in chapter two I was like did Cheerilee just seriously just ask the whole town to volunteer to have sex with her students? And everypony is ok with this? It was a little offputing and I wasn't sure if I wanted to keep reading, but i held out for one more chapter just in case.

But this chapter... this bucking chapter right here clinched it for me. This isn't run of the mill generic foalcon written by some deprived sexual deviant ( no offense intended ) this is a heartwarming story about foals on the cusp of adulthood exploring thier sexuality with mature, responsible partners in a safe and nurturing environment, and I applaud you. Thumbs up!

And the scissoring was kinda hot too.

You see, it's stories like this that make me wish I could like a story more than once. The characterizations are great, which means it's not a pure smut story.

I mean, I love a good smut story, but when you have actual characters dealing with life and showcase this part of their life, I dunno. It elevates it beyond just clop.

I'm gonna think about this and come back with better words.

Just know that this is good and I'm definitely waiting for the next chapter.

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This. This is what I was trying to say. My goodness.

A interesting combination and unexpected but nice

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:raritystarry:
This means a lot, thank you! I really wanted this story to be a positive experience for everypony, and I'm glad people also felt that way.



Also...

did Cheerilee just seriously just ask the whole town to volunteer to have sex with her students? And everypony is ok with this?

Toola Roola thought about her best friend, Coconut Cream. She wanted to tell her how she really felt… and maybe even give her a hooves-on introduction. She smiled at the naughty thought.

I'm liking this idea. :twilightsmile:

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did Cheerilee just seriously just ask the whole town to volunteer to have sex with her students? And everypony is ok with this?

If you're taking requests, here's a small one I really enjoy:

Rumble x Cloudchaser

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I was hoping for some ass worship.

I think you will like this one. :raritywink:

10958894 I certainly did! :pinkiehappy: Hoping to see more stuff like this in future chapters! :twilightsmile:

I went to click on like again. I had to stare at it for a couple seconds before I remembered why it was green.

I was excited when I saw this update. I haven’t been this excited for a story update in a long time. I think this is my favorite series on FiMFic right now.

I’ve said it and I’ll keep saying it: this is so good it’s beyond just porn. These characters are fully developed, loving, and real.

And now I’m sitting thinking that I’d like to see how you handle a Colt/Stallion pairing. No specific characters in mind.

Really great so far. I hope I’ll see male on male in the next chapters ^^

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I hope I’ll see male on male in the next chapters ^^

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And now I’m sitting thinking that I’d like to see how you handle a Colt/Stallion pairing.

It will either be the next one, or the one after that! :eeyup:

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