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After the long hard days of probation, Rainbow Dash is now free from being a clean up maid for the Wonderbolts. Sadly, she's still struggle from being called 'Rainbow Crash' and being disrespected by them. To make matters worse, the Wonderbolts has been performing live performances without her. Rainbow Dash faith in them is in jeopardy.

Suddenly, a group of unknown performers appeared and called themselves the Seekers. Unlike the Wonderbolts, the Seekers show mighty respect to Rainbow Dash. Even, their leader, Starscream, grew feelings for her.

Later on, Rainbow Dash have to come down making a rough decision. Will she stay with the Wonderbolts? Or will she quit and join the Seekers?

The story take place after the episode: Newbie Dash. If anyone haven't seen it yet, then don't read this.

My Little Pony & Transformers are owned by Hasbro.

(ALL CHARACTERS/MODELS/STAGES/FRANCHISES/ ECT BELONG TO THEIR RESPECTIVE & RIGHTFUL OWNERS AND NOT ME.)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 27 )

I love this chapter.:raritystarry::heart: oohh can you make more? Pleeeeeeeeeaaaasssee?:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::raritystarry::raritystarry:

Okay, better, but still not impressed here. This still seems like a Wonderbolts bashing fic to me, and the Seeker/Changeling thing is still a bit... odd.

I enjoyed it, I always thought the wonderbolts would be a bunch of assholes.

Comment posted by DashiesYandere deleted Jul 25th, 2016

Good story, hope to see the rest of it.:moustache:

This story has peaked my interest greatly, I look forward to more.

Uhhhhhhhh the ending is so kawaii!!!

YASSSSSS I DIDNT EVEN READ IT YET
A CHAPTER YUSSSSSSSSSS
AHAHAHHAHAHAAHHAAHHAHAH
Ok I go read now

Comment posted by DashiesYandere deleted Aug 9th, 2016
Comment posted by DashiesYandere deleted Aug 9th, 2016

I SWEAR TO CELESTIA IF HE HURTS HER IMA KILL HIM
LITERALLY!!!!!!
*pulls out katana and pistol*
Treed through these feilds carefully my friend

I actually got so mad that I threw my phone across the room ( while I was charging it ) and now it's broken...
I also fell off my bed and rolled on the ground...


I think I need help

I'm really starting to like this, please continue! :pinkiehappy:
Also shouldn't Princess Celestia and Princess Cadence say you instead of y'all? Their speech should be more formal.

I don't like this chapter :fluttershyouch:

7501683 Why? I thought every villains need a song?

I love this chapter

7501927
No that's not what I meant...
I'm was just upset and disappointed with this chapter. I was really expecting a creative love story and I was really looking forward to that but then I read this. Now I'm sad and disappointed... But that was my fault I set my standards to high for a story. I still like the story it's just I'm not going to be excited when it updates. I know you can't please everyone it's just I feel slightly cheated on... :fluttercry:

7503710 Oh sorry. I didn't meant that to happen. I'm so sorry my friend.

7503805
I'm not mad! :pinkiesmile:
Just slightly disappointed! I still love this story and will continue to read it no matter what happens later on!

I WANT to give this story a shot, but the romance is rushed and forced as hell.:facehoof:

Awwww! This is my SHIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy:

I looked at the picture and my god that chin, you could break a rock with that chin.

"Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh!" That being put in Rainbow Dash's words. You should really continue. I love the story. :rainbowkiss:

"Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh!" That being put in Rainbow Dash's words. You should really continue. I love the story. :rainbowkiss:

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