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Trixie Senpai FOREVER!!! Ship Trixie with anyone and you'll make your fic 500% cooler/awesome! Also remember to give the golden mares some love! Mayor Mare, Cherry Jubilee, and Harshwhinny!

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Trixie B. Lulamoon graduated from the Equestrian Officer Academy with top marks and takes command of the new NX-20 class starship, officially designated the Hydra. Her mission to explore new worlds, learn about the universe, discover new species, and report back to Equis Star Command.
As they travel across the universe, bonds of friendship will form. Loyalties between duty and friends will be tested.
Join Trixie and her crew as they travel to the great beyond and learn about loyalty, friendship, and discover what new adventures are around the next star cluster.
Star Trek crossover
Inspired by metroid_freak's Starring Trixie

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Hmm it is really a bit special since this is about space and somehow i remember a certain anime as i had read about a space academy.
I got myself a little spoiler for the next chapter of your story and i think it is going to be interessting.

I think i can enjoy the story, it feels like those kind of storys/movies which i would have to read a bit about it, gathering knowledge or something like that, befor i can really love it, but i somehow like it already.

5381825 I promise it's very different from what I usually write. It's a space action /adventure story. Hopefully it'll do well. :derpyderp1:

This story seriously needs more attention, it's amazing... Just one question, is Equestria in this case an alternate Earth, or are we humans and our old friends the Vuclans and (errr... Frenemies I guess theyd be called) the Klingons still out there somewhere in this universe, as the presence of Romulans would strongly support.

5691586 Equestria is it's own world and Earth is it's own place. I won't spoil anything but Klingons are still there too and everyone else at the time. This is the Enterprise era with Captain Archer just to be clear. So were talking the NX-01 before Kirk was even born or a thought. Glad you like it so far, just hope that fact doesn't dissuade you.
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What did you think of Pinkie being the engineer? I did that so I can have an easy excuse for fixing things whenever I want, as Star Trek is famous for.

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I'm fine with it being in the Enterprise era, it's more how the crew in the show was presented that bothered me a bit.. But at times they really managed to make the crew show their best at well... Captain Archer was the only character i had hard time , but I didn't hate any of them, and like I said, for all they're flaws (a lot of them too) the crew of the NX-01 Enterprise certainly had some bright moments where they shined, even Archer. The time period itself I actually really enjoy, up until Enterprise came around the time between first contact and the federation's formation was seemingly a complete mystery with no real answer as to how it was... Enterprise gave us that answer, and honestly... I think a lot of people over reacted. One of my major problems with it is that they cancelled it just when it was actually starting to get good, and that the finale didn't really feel like an Enterprise episode, it felt more like a TNG episode.

Also, kind of edited it a bit... I decided I was kind of babbling too much, but ended babbling more anyway,, but I'll put it back best I can right quick, ahem:]

I think going in, a lot of people were expecting the 'perfect' humanity of the other series like TNG and even some episodes of voyager (another one I think a lot of people over reacted too for not having 'perfect' enough humans) and DS9 (it's hard to paint a species at war in a seemingly 'perfect' light, but rarely, even this awesome series fell back on this trope)

Plus, one thing they miss is that Enterprise is only in the 22nd century! When in the Star trek universe, in the mid-21st, World war 3 basically caused a temporary collapse of human civilization, with most of the major governments GONE and those left likely just trying to keep their own people alive. Even if Earth was united and most of the bad things from it gone, it was just... It was impossible, or at I feel it was impossible, for the humans of the other Star Trek series to realize themselves yet, the metaphorical shockwave of world war 3 was just starting to pass and the ripples were still being felt everywhere. Terra Prime is proof of that when you think about it, their backstory, if only a bit, was tied into the aftermath of the war.

And Pinkie as the engineer? Admiral, there be parties and hilarity here!... Sorry, couldn't resist. But yea, this should be awesome...

"PREPARE THE PARTY TORPEDOS, FIRE THE FORE PARTY CANNONS, GET OUT THE DUBSTEP, wait no, that was a horrible song, CHANGE THAT, GET OUT... ALL THE STAR TREK THEMES! Let's get this party started!"

"Um, Ma'am, what's of a 'star trek theme'"

"Oh, right, fourth wall.. Darn it. 5 of 14, your good at music right, I need you to get together a symphony and compose this music, on the double!"

"Ms Pie, where'd you get that music sheet from... It looks like you pulled it out of thin air!"

"Relax 5, it's Pinkie Pie, don't question it.

"But, 3 of 7... She pulled it out of thin air, that's not possible, for Queen's sake, that's not possible!"

"Just don't question it, young lady, just don't question it."

"I'm 4 years older than you..."

"Yup, just don't question it."

I do have to wonder though if there's some connection between Earth and Equis, they have similar calenders at this time, similar ship ship prefixes.. And the names of the one's who piloted their first warp drive ships are eerily similar (I do have to wonder how ponies will react when they find out that most of the galaxy calls it an entirely different name... Probably not that badly, just some mild curiosity... They may assume every race would have their own name for it...)

And another thing... If some members of the Mane Six and Background Characters are alive now... Who replaced them in the timeline? Pinkie Pie had a very profound impact, for her to be alive now, someone very similar would've had to replace her earlier on in the timeline or history would be altered significantly. And Trixie, while not as crucial to the timeline, had some very important moments... Gah, maybe i'm over thinking this, sorry if my constant babbling is annoying you... I'm told I over think things like a lot...

Y'know, it's an interesting choice to give Equestrians disruptors, a lot of times I see them in stories having developed phasers. I thought it was weird the Feds and Cardassians seem to be the only ones in canon who use phasers, and even the Cardassians phasers were modified, they weren't just the normal phasers like the Feds use and - GAH I'M DOING IT AGAIN, I'M SOSOS SORRY ABOUT THE BABBLING!

5691818 I know right! We see the formation of the Federation to the United Federation of Planets and it was kind of half ass done, I do agree with that. The next season would have been awesome if the rumors about it were true. Rumor was that Tpol was actually part Romulan and there was going to be a whole Romulan arch if it had continued another season. Cause we know Romulans hate feeling threatened and thus their beef with the federation would have been born and explained rather than that's just how it always was.

I also liked how first contact tied into the show this that episode Regeneration.It was a nice change of pace, but true to the franchise they pulled some shit out of their asses to combat the threat. In my opinion. Perhaps it makes sense since it was only Phlox who was infected and not an entire ship, but it felt very lazy to me.

As for the flaws, I feel that's what really made the show. Like you said, WWIII just ended relatively recently, the Earth was split into factions such as Terra Prime and so on and so forth. Thus a perfect crew without flaws would have felt, odd. We gradually see everyone develop into better people as the show progresses on, like Archer grows a pair and finally uses force, when necessary. I liked it second only to the TNG.

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Did a bit of editing to that comment, I intended to reduce the amount of pinkie-level babbling I was doing but I only ended up increasng it... i really need to break that habit,. sorry about babbling so much...

5691929 Hey it happens. I love Trekie talk. Don't get to do it much.

5724425 I went with the traditional Romulan power sources being artificial black holes.

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Nice! Although I do kind of wonder why antimatter reactors were banned in the ponies civilization... I'd like if you would explain that a bit better... Does antimatter interfere with magic or something? Anyway, either way, regardless of if you choose to explain that or not, this is shaping up to be chapter after chapter of pony/star trek awesomeness!.. Keep up to good work...

Also, have a free internet, you've earned it:

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yeaaahhhhhhhhh i finally have time to read another chapter, and this time after reading many long chapters, it isn´t that hard to read anymore.
good chapter.

I don´t know how much of the ship, and Crew interactions i can read here, but it starts to get interessting. (The word (interaction) seems not to be the one i wanted to use, but i talked about the Crew and how much they are talking with each other.

Is she still in love with Spitfire? I think you know that i like that pairing, but i would not mind it either, if it would be a different pairing this time.
Suddenly i start to think, that it would be funny if one retard of the group, would be allowed to get through with his antics, and even could talk to the Captain normally. I guess that the Crew has probably great respect from her position, and expect that no one can just talk to her, and i just want to see some shocked expression.:yay:

5844338 Just wait till you meet the engineer. You'll love her.

I like the chapter, but somehow i am a bit suprised, that it looks like Trixies first action as a Captain, are the worst she could have done.
I think Octavia was a bit to passive, while Trixie was maybe to aggressive in her fighting plan.

I think i understood, that this was not a know Enemie right?, then i would have been a bit more curious about them, but still a bit wary, i guess i would have been a mix from Octavia/Trixie. For me it means that i really like the idea of Trixie, and Octavia as countervailing Commanders.

I am not sure if Octavia should really try to relieve Trixie from her position, because one decision against an unknown enemy went bad. That one or two ponys have to die in a fight would be probably normal, it is just bad that it was her first fight. I think she have to get a bit experience in a few fights, befor she can live up to her title, Octavia probably only want to play it safe, that means she isn´t the best one to command in a fight either.
I think they need both of them.

To be honest i maybe think the action came to fast, but i like it. If i understand this right, the Humans are attacking the Ponies and everything else right?.....wow they are assholes. I hope Trixie can change some of her systems, it seems she got a bad ship, because of forbidden material, and well the ship itself wasn´t really prepared thanks to Pinkie Pie probably.

Not bad, but i think this story is a bit harder for you to write then the other storys right? I mean with all of that Ship stuff. I would like it if there would be still on or two fans for her, that would prefer every decision she made.

What i mean is some in favour of Octavia, and some in favour of Trixie. I don´t know if Trixie is in love with Octavia right now, but i would not mind a childish Crush of one or two Crewmembers for her.

5845321 True that is, but that's the dilemma. Who was really right in that situation?

True, Trixie was aggressive in her stance on the enemy ship, but they knew they attacked the space station they were going to, which was giving a distress call AND the ship attacked them first.

At the same time, Trixie acted rashly but that was due to bad luck. But she endangered the ship and crew, but if she hadn't they would have died. So, who was really at fault? :rainbowhuh::applejackunsure: :unsuresweetie:

Star Trek is known for giving these situations to the captain all the time, and he/she must make impossible decisions that affect entire nations, space nations, and even the crew.

Makes you wonder...

BTW what did you think of Pinkie?

Sorry I need to write this down:

- You have Pinkie as an Enginer.
- Trixie is the captain and a master enginer.
- You have the changelings whit Borg names but whit personality.
- Griffins are like Klingons.
- If I'm correct the Thrane are like Volcans
- You use the begining of Voyager, just they ended in Earth solar system.
- Earth and Equis are in the same univers just realy far from each other.
- You made them face Praxton. One of the biggest racist of Star Trek.


This story is Freaking Briliant!!!!:pinkiehappy:
So much Awesomnes!!!
I realy waiting the next chapter.

6024607 Wow, that's quite the reaction you gave me there.

Pinkie I always thought would make sense as the Chief Engineer. Especially with how in the Star Trek universe how they always manage to pull some sort of bullshit out of their asses at every turn. Now, mlp has given me the best answer to all ship problems since Borg nanoprobes, Pinkie Pie being motherfucking Pinkie Pie!

Don't worry the next chapter will be out soon!

Glad you liked the story so far. What'd you think of the battle with the 'green ship?'

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For a first starship battle it was prety good and the ion canon was a nice touch.
I always like when somebody kicks some Romulan ass. ( I don't like them )

But I'm realy would like to know why was the Hydra so unprepered for a fight?

6025128 Watch Star Trek Generations the movie and you'll see. :rainbowlaugh:

In that move there was only 80 something personnel in the Enterprise B, no torpedoes, no weapons for that matter, and they used the deflector dish to fix the problem. The hydra was in a sense ready to fight, it was just on par with the Romulan ship. :scootangel:

The Enterprise!!!!!
Ooooooh this fic start to get realy good. :pinkiehappy:

6037049 Yeup, good old NX-01 at it's best. So how will this end up for Praxton? And what of the MARES commandos? BTW what did you think of my acronym for MARES? Took me over 8-9 months to come up with that?

On a side note to that...

I'm wondering. Do you watch every series like I do? Or are you the kind of person who watches like one over others? Just wondering. Personally I liked Enterprise the best, with TNG being a close second and then Deep Space Nine. I liked Voyager for what it was, but not the actors.

Definatley NOT the actors.

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I wacthed all Star Trek seris, except the original first because that wasn't aired in my country when I was young. ( I'm 22 and I live in Hungary in Europe) I saw all movie.
My favorite was Voyager, but I have favorite characters and episodes from every seris. I like good storys over actors.

You MARES remind me for Space Mariners from Warhammer 40K for some reason. But I'm not sure why.

6038548 I wouldn't now. I actually plan on adding art to the story later so I can give a better idea of what they look like. I'm not very descriptive in stories like this. Actually their armor is based off Halo ODST armor but I plan on drawing them later. I liked Voyager too. Concept wise. Glad to meet a fellow Star trek fan by the way.

I'm 26 and live in California.

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There are Star Trek fans everywhere, just need a little searching to find them.
Sadly I'm fan of many franchise: Star Trek, Doctor Who, Stargate, Sonic, Digimon, MLP, Pokemon, Starcraft...stb. So I don't know everything but I'm in picture whit a lots of thing.

I haven't played whit Halo so far. So that maybe the reason for mixing up but I liked Cortna from the gameplays. I usualy whatch a lot of gameplays for games I'm unlucky to be able to play.

6038616 I honestly hate Dr. Who. Sorry, but those others are great choices. :trixieshiftright:

I love Stargate SG-1. My favorite episode was the one where the SG team landed in a museum full of people that thought they were invaders and ended up stuck, holding hostages, until a negotiator talked to them. It also had on e of my favorite quotes. "There's a 65% chance we'll activate the gate and a 55% chance we'll blow up."

"...That's 120%."

"Then there's the crossover percent where we activate the gate AND blow up."

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Yes Stargate alway had realy good mix of humor and action.
My favorite is when Oneil is trapped in a timeloop.

6038686 Oh ya. I remember that one with Teilk. He kept getting hit by the door! :rainbowlaugh: Oh, good times.

i accept whatever you meant with the sexist against male in this chapter, but i never liked that, not against males, and not against females.

I had already seen a story with that kind of role allocation, and i always liked it more, if just everyone that want to do something, that they can do it if they want, if you know what i mean.

However, that doesn´t means that i didn´t liked that chapter, it is just a bit more weird to have the roles reversed, even if i don´t think like that.

Now i have read the chapter and want to give my real comment.
His behavior was somehow cute, and it was nice from Pansy to take him with her, and as long as his room isn´t painted with flowers, and he is the one that likes to talk about his feelings, or do tea partys, or whatever would it make more weird, i have nothing against this (sexist agains males so far)

Nice chapter, i maybe expected to see Trixie again, but i guess they can´t just rescue her in the middle of the fight, but one or two would probably have the time to get her. I mean aren´t there any people who aren´t really there to fight? Maybe a doctor or a mechanic?

I never watched Start Track or the other stuff as much as i could have, and because of that i learned most about stuff like that from Star Wars, but well i saw some episodes, and it isn´t bad,.......good story.
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Ist this a real ship, and the real people out of Star Track or something? That would be rather interessting, maybe you could with pictures there, so we(i) can learn a few names and faces.

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This is the crew of the NX-01 Enterprise. Starting from the front, the man sitting is Jonathan Archer captain of the Enterprise. Far left is Ensign Mayweather helmsmen, T'pol Vulcan science officer, Lt. Malcom Reed tactical/security, Hoshi Comm. Officer, Charles Tucker III Engineer, Dr. Phlox well, he's a... Doctor. What can I say? Self explanatory.

Let's the epicness begin!! :yay:
Who helping you write this? I don't belive that you writing this alone? It's way to good.

6055823 Funny you should say that. I work alone in everything I do. I have no collaborators just a kind of reviewer Corwscrowcrow for Wonderbolt my heart. Even then he's not really a that, he's just one of my dedicated readers that comments on my stories.

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Are you sure? No hiden writers in chains under you bed?

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NOOOOOO.....

You changeling! Write me fanfics!
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Poor changeling. Don't hurt it!!
It can write very good fanficts.

why did i not noticed the chapter from 2. june ? i put it into the tracking folder. I don´t know why i don´t get a note for some comments, or chapters.
However, i read one now.

I don´t know much about Enterprise, but this is getting better, and better, you keep it even interessting enough for me.

For a moment i thought you forgot Trixie, but it seems you thought of it, i propably just forgot that Octavia said something like that last time, because of the great amount of storys i read.

So there are four species fighting right now?, or at least four ships?

Some Humans, the Enterprise, the Hydra, and Klingon?
On which ship was sunset Shimmer?, is she the enemy?, i am not sure if they meant her in the last part.

Okay, it looks like Octavia would get a large amount of the cake, but maybe there is someone on the Enterprise as risky as her, which thinks her idea was a good one, i think i was on her side too, but both Octavia was to afraid, and Trixie was to .....risky?

I never thought it would be that good, even if i liked it befor a bit, but it is getting better, and better.
I hope Trixie is soon well enough, to speak with them as well, if they do their meeting. It works like that right?
So many storys, and yours are one of the only storys, that actually get new chapters,....i talk about those i keep track of. (tracking)

I believe you doesn´t make more storys, than you can tend to right?, other people just start to many.

6081381 Actually there are only three species fighting now. Humans on the Enterprise (which has two on it), Hydra which has multiple species on it) and the Klingons. :twilightsmile: I know it's hard to follow when you aren't familiar with the show, but that's all there is right now. Lt Sunny Smiles a.k.a. Sunset Shimmer is a member of the Hydra.

For a moment i thought you forgot Trixie, but it seems you thought of it, i propably just forgot that Octavia said something like that last time, because of the great amount of storys i read.

Are you kidding me?:rainbowlaugh: I'm such a Trixie fan I read stories that only mention her once, and then I read them for the sake of seeing how many times she'd show up later. I'd never forget poor Trixie. :raritywink:

The whole thing with Trixie being risky, is this. Octavia is very reserved in her approach to everything. She aint subtle, but she does believe in going by the book with everything. So when Trixie did the whole blackhole thing it scared her. She never realized how much responsibility being a captain was, and now has a better respect for what Trixie did against the Romulans. Everyone on the ship is Trixie's responsibility, their deaths lay heavily on her and now Octavia, who fears that very outcome is now in charge. Hence why she's reacting so violently in the chapter. I spoiled this part so other readers won't feel cheated.

Glad you like the story.

I have over seven I want to write but I only focus on three a this moment. Fist is Trixie Secretary Extraordinaire! TSE!) and then Adventures Across Space, then Wonderbolt my Heart. (TSE!) is almost done then I will focus on my other two stories before I even consider writing the rest of them. I can't stand when so many good stories get canceled or put on hiatus cause the authors can't sit down with one idea for too long. I get it. I really do, it's hard to focus on one idea all the time. That's why I have three stories.

But i will never cancel them. I love these stories too much.

As always, thanks for the comment! Love the new Avatar, and remember to always read, rate, love, and tolerate!

6081566 The whole thing with Trixie being risky, is this. Octavia is very reserved in her approach to everything. She aint subtle, but she does believe in going by the book with everything. So when Trixie did the whole blackhole thing it scared her. She never realized how much responsibility being a captain was, and now has a better respect for what Trixie did against the Romulans. Everyone on the ship is Trixie's responsibility, their deaths lay heavily on her and now Octavia, who fears that very outcome is now in charge. Hence why she's reacting so violently in the chapter. I spoiled this part so other readers won't feel cheated. you didn´t managed to hide it if you tried to do this, i think everyone can see it.

Yeah i am more or less sure, that i understand Trixie, and Octavia here, the only thing about what i didn´t thought that way, was probably, that i didn´t thought Octavia was to much after her precious book, and well i think at least now it is clear that she is affraid.

I like my new Avatar too, She looks better than i had thought like that, somehow that Inkling is cute.

To be honest yes i am sad for every good story to end, but every good story is going to end sooner or later, but maybe you could make and open end, maybe you want to write a sequel in the future, not to soon, but that way it is still possible.

Does one of your other storys have a romance, that after the ponys are together, that it still continues for a while?
I actually could use a trilogy again, from you or others.
It is always that if they have their special somepony, or if they got their kids, that the story is already near it´s end, i always hope to read about the actually relationship too, maybe you can do something like this with one of the storys you have in mind, i don´t know, but it never hurts to ask.

.....poor Changeling. I don´t know why i like those Changelings that much, i still don´t know every detail about her episode, but Chrysalis is one of my favourite Villains.

6081616 I do have other stories about love, but its a displacement story about Lightning Dust and Trixie from the human world, Equestria Girls as Soviet MIG pilots. It takes place after Rainbow Rocks so Trixie wasn't in the battle of the Bands, but the Dazzlings were. The story goes on based on what happened at the end of Rainbow Rocks with that worlds Twilight connecting all the anomalies to the high school.

In the story the Soviets think their enemy, America, where the school is located, is building a super weapon and send their best pilots to investigate. Then they end up in Equestria. I spoiled too much but I think I can give you a sneak peak if you're interested?

6081629 I have finally nearly finished everything else, so i guess i could se a little sneak peak, if you have something that i can read.
Ahhhhh it is good to know that you like Trixie probably as much as me:pinkiehappy: You really never forget her:heart:

If i understood you right, then you still have to hide a possible spoiler in that one comment towards me i think, i understood that you don´t wanted to spoil something.

6081650 Well, I'll PM the story to you . Tell me what you think of it. It's a military story so I'm not sure if it'll make much sense to you though. If you ever need to look up the things in the story and it'll make more sense. I play games like ace combat and read a lot about military aviation so I'm very familiar with everything in the story. But It took a long time to write.

It was not bad, but I admit I was reading pretty fast right now, because I have to learn today. I am not sure If I understood what they talked about with aliens, and same rules.
Were they talking about a soldier Pony tending to a normal pony? Did they thought that would mean love?

6453966 It is a thing the military does with their rules which are called regulations. I don't know if you know what this one is so here's what they were talking about. In the military, or any armed forces, two people are not allowed to intermingle, date, etc, due to it being a conflict of interest.

Now star trek is very liberal about this and easy going but even they kept the whole someone cant date someone from the same group or anyone in teh service they are part of. Its more complicated than that but that's the jist of it. I hope that cleared it up for you. :unsuresweetie:

I forget you're not familiar with many of these things and for that i do apologies. :twilightblush:

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I know, and I'm sorry it took so long. I was having so much fun with my other fics I completely forgot about this one for a while. Hopefully I will be able to give this one more attention now that I got my life back in order... somewhat.

So what did you think of the chapter?

6455936 to be honest this time, I only needed to be remembered, I heard that once, but I forgot it, and somtimes in rare moments, I´m still unsure what I read in english, or what the meaning could be.

6455950 Oh, well I'm still sorry if I made you uncomfortable. I'll do better to explain things like that in the future.

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Don't be sorry. Good work need time. :ajsmug:
And most of us have that thing called REAL LIFE and that need realy much time on some days.

I think it was a good chapter but I was sad when you sciped the battle whit Praxton.
His reaction when he realise that his plan had failed because ponys!! :pinkiehappy:
Just thinking about it makes me smile :pinkiecrazy:

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