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Rainbow Dash felt like she was getting weak all of a sudden as if she’s a damsel in distress. She remembered that she let her enemies pushed her around and harm her friends. She felt that she’s useless now.

Until, when Tempest Shadow, aka Fizzlepop Berrytwist, return from her journey, Rainbow Dash wants her to be her trainer. She will go through rough trainings and exercises until she become stronger once again. Later, she will see Fizzlepop more than her trainer.

Warning: contain harsh language and... aftersex.

(ALL CHARACTERS/MODELS/STAGES/FRANCHISES/ ECT BELONG TO THEIR RESPECTIVE & RIGHTFUL OWNERS AND NOT ME.)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 5 )

Ooooo. I like this. I will keep reading.

Interesting story. I look forward to seeing where this goes!

However, I did notice some grammatical errors (mainly tense-related). If that's something you're concerned about, I'd suggest finding an editor or using a proofreading program like Grammerly.

It's great to see this story continuing, thanks!

This is continue? Nice chapter

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