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Kyoten Fuyu


Writing is my passion... same with Coke Cola, Video Games, and Off-brand Anime

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What if Rainbow Dash didn't become an Element of Harmony? What if someone took her place? What if her destiny changed the day she was born, and somepony else became an Equestrian hero? What if Rainbow Dash was just your average small town Pegasus trying to live her life and enjoy the little things?

This is the story of the person who took the place of one of Equestria's greatest heroes, who tried to convince everypony that she wasn't who she said she was, but no one believed her. And when she tried to make things right, someone else took the destiny as the Element of Loyalty. Now, stuck in the body of Rainbow Dash, Zephyr must figure out how to return the real Rainbow Dash to Equestria. All the while dealing with the everyday life of a common pony.

"And I am NOT crazy!"

Author: This is the Equestria Girls One.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 24 )

I opened the chapter and saw the quote at the top. Then I actually looked at the author name and said "Oh fuck, it's the Winter Rose guy".

... That being said, I actually like it well enough so far, so take that more as a "You've come a long way". It also starts off by avoiding the whole "You're an ape from another dimension? Okay, cool." deal that always annoys me when reading things like this, so major props just for that.

Nice tag salad. Really inspires confidence.

In which Twilight Sparkle hits on a mare she's only ever seen having a mental breakdown... Okay, y'know what? The funny factor on that is high enough that I'm not ever bothered by it. I'm just here for the ride.

Meanwhile, Twilight Sparkle could only sigh at the sight of Applejack walking towards us. An interesting detail if I say so myself. Makes me wonder what makes me so different in comparison to everyone else we talked to along the way. I stood back a bit and let the scene play out before me. Meanwhile, Twilight Sparkle could only sigh at the sight of Applejack walking towards us. An interesting detail if I say so myself. Makes me wonder what makes me so different in comparison to everyone else we talked to along the way. I stood back a bit and let the scene play out before me so I can enjoy the sense of nostalgia.

My brain hurts.

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I can't believe I didn't see that. Woops.

Now, by "Zephyr", you mean Fluttershy's little brother, right?

If I didn't act, and act fast, then not only will Rainbow lose her primary destiny but then I wouldn't be able to use the Elements of Harmony to find her soul.

I had to do something to ensure Rainbow's destiny before the return of Nightmare Moon. The question is: What can I do?

This will sound really depressing and negative, but the answer is: "Give up" :pinkiesad2:

You can't accomplish what you intend to try, so you will have to accept that and try to find another path in life... i would recommend trying a modeling career if your description of yourself from the previous chapter was accurate :trixieshiftright:

Now, make no mistake, her skills with both fire magic and swordsmanship are absolutely terrifying. She took on the entire Solar Elite by herself, and it was only with the combined efforts of the Royal Guard, the Wonderbolts, the last Solar Knight, and Celestia herself that finally took her down after a twenty-two-hour battle of attrition in the castle. Twenty. Two. Hours.

So, when Sunlight Blade pulled out a sword made from dragon scale that was on fire, as well as don possibly the most epic suit of armor, EVER! Ponies got worried.

Oh i hope we get more of Sunlight Blade at some point, she seems like she will be a lot fun :pinkiecrazy:

Trouble is on the horizon...

May We have another?

Dash's parents are assholes. Disowning her is one thing but throwing all of stuff into the trash and taking all of her money that wasn't in her bank account. That's just plain over the top harsh. And I hope karma will come biting those two in the ass.

I'm super into this. Cant wait for more ( ^ω^)

I’m sure this story is as great as everything winter wrights , I’ve not been disappointed once by winters storys , great job as always winter

I agree with my self , it is great

Happy to see that this story lives.

I really enjoy this story, happy to see it updated! Keep up the good work

It lives! I hope it gets on a regular update schedule.

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You should change the name, then, because people will confuse the two.

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One has a Pony, One has a Human. One is Teen, the other is Mature. Both have names that clearly state the difference, and both link to each other.....WHAT MORE DO YOU WANT FROM MEEEEEEEEE??????????????1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Parties are supposed to be special. They are a celebration of a particular individual or event that brought great pride and joy to a community. Parties are meant to show how much you are loved, cared for, admired, and welcomed to a specific person, group, or thing, but what Pinkie Pie does completely ignores that sacredness altogether!

Now that i think about it, yeah that is true

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