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Candymlp12


I write in my free time, just for the sake of it. I also like to draw here and there, mostly the Cmc or background characters. I'm a huge fangirl, and a part time otaku. And YouTube Trash ;P

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This story is a sequel to "Just Kiss Already!" And Other Rumbaloo Tales


Scootaloo and Rumble have finally graduated, and are trying to get used to their new lives together. With training at the Academy, as well as some pretty big and unexpected surprises along the way, the two have a lot of challenges ahead of them. As well as one certain question on every other pony's minds. "When are you getting married?"

Chapters (13)
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Comments ( 111 )

Yay! A sequel! BAM, RIGHT in the tracking bookshelf!

YAY a sequel nice job! Loved the first chapter!

Suggest-

Thunderlane & fam visit, making the get married jokes...

"So, when's the wedding?"

"Guys."

"What's the theme?"

"C'mon bro..."

"When will I have a grand baby?"

"Mom, not you too....."

"So, she lets to put a ring on it?"

"Rum, I'm really hating your family now."

"Me too Scoots, Me too."

"YA'LL TALKIN ABOUT THE WEDDING?!"

"Dad stop...."

I think this is a wonderful start to the sequel. Also, don't push yourself too hard. But, about the suggestion... I'm not sure. I think you should do what you want to Candy. You're a great writer. That's just me though. One last thing... Good Luck Candy.

Thank you guys, you're all so nice. I'll do my absolute best to write, and I'll definitely take your advice. :heart:

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How I felt about the suggestion,
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I'm definitely using that one sometime!:rainbowlaugh:7204736

Oh boy...here we go again. I'm guessing its gonna take a while for these two to go to the next step, isn't it?

7206790 I'm more of a think-as-you-go person, so I usually make stuff up from the top of my head! Glad a spur-of-the-moment-thinking was funny!

I just saw this about 15 minutes ago, causing me to want to finish the last two chapters of the previous story and look at this. I added this to "tracking" before I even read the chapter. You're very good at this, my friend(you aren't my friend but I felt like saying that, and I may partially want to be your friend), and I forgot what I was going to say.

*edit: Oh, also, you should put a link to the previous story, proclaiming this stories status as a sequel to any who run across it.

Thanks, I can't believe I forgot to do that. And I'd love to be a friend of yours, that seems like it'd be fun.:twilightsmile:7208000

7209900 I used to have 5 friends. Then I went to a different school and became a shy, introverted loner bookworm with excellent grades, aside from the time I attempted to take a public speech and debate. You do not want to be in a class which mandates giving speeches as a central part when doing so terrifies you to the point that you're petrified in front of everyone. I have a few semi-friends (yeah, I'm still in school), and have finally found a group I'm comfortable sitting with (after 2/3 of a year of sitting alone), so I'm not really sure how to be friends. I'm not sure how to smile, though I can through instinct and muscle memory.
I seem to pour my thoughts and past into my comments and blogs without that much careful consideration.

I hope you can find the right crowd, and make great friends in the future. Trust me, I know that making friends in school can typically get rough and complicated, but I hope, no, I'm sure you'll be able to do so.:twilightsmile: I'd still gladly consider you a friend, as well as a lot of my other readers.7210615

Who wears a promise ring as a necklace?!?!?!!?

7224232 Uh, this stuff in Equestria isn't that much like here, so I'm sure it's perfectly understandable to wear a promise ring as a necklace.

Hmmm...I'm surprised Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom didn't overreact more...

Well done, Button. You're good for her.

I can totally see AB and Sweetie reacting like that nice work. Great Chapter.

Call me old-fashioned, but, is this a new term for "engagement ring?" Or just another one of society's oh-so-common "well, I'm not ready for that much of a commitment" things?

7224232 Ponies I guess due to the lack of fingers.

7224232 her :unsuresweetie:
And it's not like she has fingers

Button gave Sweetie the ring for two reasons, one as a pre-engagement ring, meaning he and Sweetie do plan on getting engaged at some point, just not at the moment. And the other is to symbolize their commitment to one another. 7225385

¯\_(ツ)_/¯

I honestly got the idea from DisneyFanatic2364 for BoD (Bride of Discord), I couldn't exactly imagine one gigantic ring around her hoof or on her horn, the latter example being from the show. But meh. I'ma just roll with it.7224232

7226828 For those with hands, wear it on the finger; for unicorns, wear it on the horn, hoof, or neck not chain the ring like a necklace.

Right when they asked,"What do we have to lose?" They took a selfie therefore losing their soles.:derpytongue2:. But besides the joke good job Candy, and I'm glad you had fun writing this story. Yosh out.:pinkiehappy:

Sorry! I know it's been a while since I updated, but I've been busy with other things this week and didn't really make the time to type for this story.:twilightblush: I plan on updating soon though. Feel free to give any suggestions if you'd like.:twilightsmile:7271177

? I don't get it...

Don't get what, exactly? I'd like to fix it asap.7273682

It's times like this that I really wished I made my OC a pegasus instead of a unicorn.

Because then I could FLY AWAY WHEN I'M LEFT HANGING ON A CLIFF LIKE THIS!

Hopefully it'll make sense in the next chapter.7273769

Great Chapter. Sorry i didn't around to reading it earlier. Still good chapter though.

That was fun Spitfire's on character. So are Rumble and Scootaloo. Comet.... ugh i hate people like that. I can agree with Rumble's feelings, but can also agree with Scootaloo's logic.

Yep. I hate them too. I named him after a cleaning product to show how washed up he is.7283497

Hmm...should've known that was gonna happen Rumble.

Wait, what is Comet's character style? Is it like Zephyr from the last episode? Is it like that except less lazy? Is he far more flirty? Is he far less stupid? Is he far more aggressive? What is he?
Also, I only watched a small part of the last episode, so I don't know if Zephyr evolved beyond lazy, arrogant, kind of disgusting, idiotic flirt that bullies his parents around.

That's the thing, I'm trying to develop that. If I were to be honest, planning out how characters act and their personalities just doesn't work. When I write, I prefer to develop how they act over time, and establish their personalities based off of those events. I did the same thing with all of the other characters.

Basically, I just make small mental notes to keep them in character, and establish their personality with time and as I continue to write about them. It must be a bit complicated to comprehend, I barely understand it myself, but I find that I enjoy writing about them more because of that. If I established how they're supposed to be beforehand, then the stories I've written likely wouldn't have been fun to write, or be where they are today.

To put it simply, ¯\_(ツ)_/¯. Not sure yet. 7286237

"Yeah, I could write a whole story on it." Scootaloo said.

"And it'd probably have over 40 chapters or something." Rumble chuckled in agreement.

No kidding Rumble. It also contains nothing but Scootaloo being a total troll and her constantly abusing a gullible Rumble.

As for this chapter, that was nice. Though Scootaloo is still kinda rejecting Rumble at parts...WHY WON'T SHE JUST ACCEPT HER FEELINGS?!?!?!:flutterrage:

Why you little-

Not sure if that's a rhetorical question, but just to be a smart mouth, I let them do that to keep them in character. Over time, the way they treat each other would likely change, but for now. Scootaloo's still got a little tsundere left in her.:trixieshiftright: :trollestia::moustache:7321032

"Good, now a few ground rules, if you can follow them, then maybe you can survive the camp. Rule 1, don't leave your bedrooms after curfew. And don't try to give me any excuses such as potty breaks. Each bedroom has a bathroom built in it for that specific purpose.

Rule 2, keep the rooms clean, this is an Academy, not a pigsty, clean up after yourselves for Celestia's sake. We're not some cleaning service meant to look baby you. I'm looking at you, Comet." Spitfire said.

Rule 3, Do not open the windows or bring food without permission into the bedrooms, last thing we need up here is for any pests or anything else up here to get in.

Rule 4, I do not, I repeat I do not want to hear any chatter after curfew. Any talking, running, or any other noises that does not pertain sleeping is strictly forbidden. You are all expected to be awake as soon as we alert you.

And lastly, just so that you little pranksters could know, failure to abide to any of these rules leads to immediate suspension, and you will fail this year. So disobeying rules to get a laugh is not acceptable, and will not be tolerated."

"Good, now, a few ground rules. If you can follow them, then maybe you can survive the camp. Rule 1, don't leave your bedrooms after curfew. And don't try to give me any excuses such as potty breaks. Each bedroom has a bathroom built in it for that specific purpose.

"Rule 2, keep the rooms clean. This is an Academy, not a pigsty, so clean up after yourselves for Celestia's sake. We're not some cleaning service meant to look baby you. I'm looking at you, Comet." Spitfire said.

"Rule 3, Do not open the windows or bring food without permission into the bedrooms. Last thing we need up here is for any pests or anything else to get in.

"Rule 4, I do not, I repeat I do not want to hear any chatter after curfew. Any talking, running, or any other noises that does not pertain sleeping is strictly forbidden. You are all expected to be awake as soon as we alert you.

"And lastly, just so that you little pranksters could know, failure to abide to any of these rules leads to immediate suspension, and you will fail this year. So disobeying rules to get a laugh is not acceptable, and will not be tolerated."

7322229 Oh I know. Its just a bit irritating since I know Scootaloo could solve almost all of her problems if she would admit her feelings. That and if Rumble would get one brain cell...or grow some balls.

7324033 Glad I can make you laugh.

What's up with the line break just before the words "a long week"?

Huh...an actual reason for Scootaloo to act like a tsundere that isn't her being a troll?!:pinkiegasp: In this story?!:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: It's a sign of the end!!!:raritydespair::raritycry:

Just kidding, nice little chapter.:pinkiehappy:

Sorry, sometimes I make mistakes while typing! :twilightblush: I'll fix it soon.:twilightsmile:7369492

First of all, I apologize for not commenting on this sooner. I was re-reading the Savage Skies series (Which I HIGHLY recommend. It's on FimFiction and its awesome. Starts with the story The Foal of the Forest.)and didn't check my tracking for a week or so. It's awesome to come back to twenty unread chapters. But anyway, this chapter...
It's certainly enjoyable and lighthearted. I do like the introduction of the conflict and how Scootaloo didn't get what she wanted and how this will affect the experience of the academy. However, my overcritical mind (WAY overcritical and I'm sorry) did notice a few things that could be improved upon in the future.
First of all, there's comet. He needs some character development in my eyes, as currently he seems to fill the role of (forgive my language) sleazy super douche and that's about it. He might need a backstory or something else to spice this up (Interests, an emotional breakdown, a hobby or two, etc). Something that I think would be interesting would be if they bonded over the week as friends.
Two, Spitfire and the academy itself. I'm no expert on this subject, but I think that the academy is a bit too methodical. I find it hard to believe that they would organize wingponies based on their dizzitrom times alone. How would that let the pegasi grow as fliers if they were paired with ponies near their skill level? Something that could offset that is if the pegasi are strong in some areas of flight but weaker in others. Also, I'd like to think that personality might play a factor.
But maybe that's just me.
Another thing I see is that Spitfire is making the same mistake she did in the episode: Taking a backseat role and not supervising enough. This can have dangerous consequences, as shown in the episode.
But that isn't necessarily a bad thing. *Evil chuckle.*
But overall, this chapter was still awesome and the things I listed were minor and can be corrected if you feel so inclined.
Good job as always.
~Pyrepinna

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.:twilightsmile: But to clarify, I do intend to give Comet some development, which is one of the reasons I paired him up with Scootaloo, as well as challenge her and see how she can develop and deal with him. As for how wing ponies were assigned, I just concluded that since Rainbow Dash and Lightning Dust were the fastest, that they were paired up to work together. Personally, it would be better than being with someone who isn't as advanced of a flier. Also, I figured that the Academy could test the recruits (like an obstacle course or a flight test, something I decided not to include in the story) to see if they qualify for it, in fields such as agility, speed, durability, resistance, whatever may be deemed necessary by the Wonderbolts. I figured that those results could also help to decipher who's pairing up with who. Although, I should have that clarified.

Thank you for the feedback!:heart:

Btw, I'll check out those stories soon:derpytongue2:7381441

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