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Dusk_Writer


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Takes place right before Newbie Dash, though may contain a few references from future episodes.

Special thanks to Berry Delight for proofreading this! Go on and leave a follow!


After a rather peculiar dream, Dash is forced to think about somepony who she had loved dearly betraying her.

On the other hoof, Twilight has asked of her a request which both excited her and formed a sense of dread in the pit of her stomach…

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Chapters (12)
Comments ( 163 )

7324867 Not yet. Update will be every three to five days. I'm just getting a head start so I'll have an extra chapter in case I get busy :raritywink:

One month for one stadium? Wow, that's a very quick construction team. Most stadiums take at least a year to build. :twilightoops:

And get yourself an editor, please.

7324986 yeeaah, I was considering the fact they usually take over a year but, it would be absolutely preposterous that the 'Bolts stay for a year…

Besides, this is Equestria.

And you think I've not tried? It's not as easy as you might think.

7325361 Haha, thanks. I was trying to do something a bit different so I guess it worked! XD

feed me more :flutterrage:
please

7325493 update coming in a few days per schedule :twilightsmile:

OMG yessss!! This looks good:pinkiehappy:

I CANT WAIT FOR THE UPDATE

I now actually read it (after a day... Yes thats how slow I am) I really like it. Like. Really really. Like really you should defiantly carry on and not leave for a year or something then write again. ... Thats really annoying.

7329067 Haha, don't worry. I have chapter 2 written. I just wanna finish chapter 3 then post chapter 2 :3

7329101

Yay owo Thanks! (For updating so fast unlike me XD)

7329184

Oh... dang I forgot. I'm still at school because im stuck in the UK... School isn't out for another month...

7329193 oh yeah, forgot that school's not out there.

Getting better and better
Keep it up bro
Ima be waiting 4 DA update

7334233 Don't worry, I'll try and not update only once a month :rainbowlaugh:

Rainbow got a sign from the heavens!:rainbowlaugh:

I can't wait 4 DA rest

AWESOME:rainbowkiss:, Can't wait for more. :pinkiehappy::yay:

I really love the chapters so far.:raritywink: i hope in the ending it will be good with soarindash together.:raritystarry:

nice story!

but wait... did you see that?

lets look a bit closer.

3.666 words.

666

soarindash1 = illuminatti confirmed

:rainbowlaugh:

Um im confused, what was Dash worried about?

“Uh, hello. We—” Fleetfoot finally got a good look at who she was speaking to and yelped, jumping into the air with surprise. “A dragon!!” She gasped.

I would have laughedmy head off if she flew off really fast and soarin just said "k bye!"

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“So is a bomb.” She snarked.

Wait. Bombs are canon in equestria!? Why didn't I know this!?

“Pssh, Twilight didn't want a friend, let alone five!” Spike snorted.

You got no friends and you got no fans

it cupcakes noooooooo:pinkiecrazy:

7390887 finally someone got the reference! :rainbowlaugh:

CUPECAKES YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSS

Ooohh now that is something interesting to read in this chapter, funny, silly, great and also fun to read in. Love it. :heart::raritywink::heart::pinkiehappy::raritywink::pinkiehappy:

I wonder what will happen on the next chapters, and great chapter story, keep up theamazing and funny sweet work, im really looking forward to the nwext ones.:raritywink::raritywink::pinkiehappy:

7393478 if you like can't-say-it, you're going to love the next ones :pinkiecrazy:

Cupcakes nooooo everyone's gonna die:pinkiecrazy:

7394678 They can't escape the The Pinkie Pie :pinkiecrazy:

No Rainbow! Don't be careful! Make sure you let more things slip so he'll know it's you!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

So when do you think the next chapters are coming in huh huh huh :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: im really exited and wanting to know what will happen next. What will happen between soarin and rainbow dash when they remember there past as foals, and the promise he made?? :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: when when? :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::heart::heart::heart::heart:

7408175 I'm currently working on it and hopefully it'll be soon enough. :raritywink:

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