War was something Dash thought would never happen—at least, not under the era of peace and harmony they were living in and Celestia being the current ruler? That decreased the chances even more.
All that changed on one faithful day where Celestia was overheard declaring the Pegasi beneath them and they were just petty ponies underneath her rule.
Why did she do it? Nopony had a clue.
Angered, the pegasi declared war upon Celestia, using Commander Hurricne's Contingency stating that, if there was any possibility of betrayal from the other races, they could break the treaty between them.
Dash was torn.
Fight for the rest of Equestria? Or her own blood?
She was in the Wonderbolts, she didn't have a choice...
This is a Collaboration between myself and MLP333 who is on Wattpad, not on Fimfiction but, give her a follow anyways!
All the odd numbered chapters will be written by me and the even numbered ones by MLP333
Hope you enjoy this story!
In the beginning and end.... Indent.
You also don't need to many paragraphs there either.
7458074 I've been up for 29 hours straight. Do you blame me? (Yes, I do too) XD
I still have to revise this but, thanks anyway. I'll have to sort it out tomorrow.
7458161 Maybe you should get some sleep
I'm liking this so far, but I have a question. Will Dash lose her wing? I'd love to see that as I've always wanted a fic that has that. Besides that this shows great promise
I've always played with the idea of the pegasi going to war with the rest. I'm looking forward to how this will play out. You most certainly have my attention.
Very interesting start! Definetely tracking this! Lookin forward to the next chapter.
7458367 I don't know honestly, I wasn't planning on it—it was just the cover art. But, I'll see what I can do and talk with my collab-er
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7458689 glad you like it so far!
Holy fucking shit
, I had this idea in the works too!
Hahaha! You guys beat me to it, well I hope you do better than me!
I can't wait to see more!
7489116 Haha well, you can still write it. I'd love to read it! And thanks!
You HAVE TO Continue this story! ITS AMAZING!
7571409 I'm glad you're enjoying it! The girl I'm collabing with is still writing the next chapter, I'll be sure to publish it as soon as it's done!
7571494 Thank you! I cant wait to see how the main five will react to Dash being in the war fighting for Pegasi! Im just so excited!
Abandonned
What is your name in Wattpad?
