Pinkie Pie invites everypony in Ponyville to her wedding, and with Princess Celestia as the SDIG (Super Duper Important Guest). Including Rainbow Dash, of course. She doesn't mind to go until she hears Pinkie Pie set up the rules.
One, any pony who attends Pinkie's wedding would have to bring a partner of the opposite gender with them. Two, the lucky mare who gets the bunch of flowers at the end of the wedding must come up on stage to kiss their partner.
Rainbow Dash isn't really comfortable with both rules. First, she doesn't have a partner. Second, she doesn't want to catch the flowers.
Given that Pinkie's wedding is in one month, Rainbow only has one month's time to find a partner...and a dress for the wedding.
Chapters (2)
Amazing so far,the story really has potential. Keep up the good work!
7345073 Thanks. It's my first story, so I poured all my heart into it. There's a follow-up story coming up in the future!
AWWWWW OTP
7345107 Can't wait!!!
But..but what about the gays? ( T-T)
That soo good
SOOOOO KEEEEEWWWWWTTTTT!
ALSO, MAKE THEM KISS AT PINKS WEDDING! I DEMAND IT!
ehhheh.....sorry
Faving dis
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Thanks!
7356667 I already did in Part 2 (sorry, it's a spoiler)
I'm loving it, keep it up
This is yet the best stories I read. Keep it up your doing a great job.
KEEP IT UP
THIS IS AMAZING
I WANT MOAR
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Thanks so much!
These chapters are ssoooooo cute
i love it. Oooh can you mske more for use please.
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7359109 I am currently working on the follow-up story that I mentioned!
OMFGGGGG THAT WAS SO AWESOME! I FANGIRLED TO HARD AT THAT MOMENT!!
LOL I wrote that before reading part 2
who's pinkie's husband? i want to read it when it's done so i just want to know who's the (lucky) guy
7364076 I've already stated at the start of the story when Pinkie Pie told her friends she was getting married. Cheese Sandwich is Pinkie's husband!
Well, where do I begin?
This story was cheesy at best and disappointing at worst. My main grips with the story is the way you have failed to assign different speakers to different paragraphs for the most part. Inconsistently too.
Consider this:
Against this:
At least try consistently applying this. You did a satisfactory job of it, even if you slightly messed the grammer up.
I have a question for you. Is this actually Rainbow Dash? The Rainbow Dash who dislikes mushy signs of affection and anything she considers soft? The Rainbow Dash who has placed the idea of romance low on her list in favour of joining the Wonderbolts, putting up good flight shows and making a good career for herself?
Moreover, you have a tendency of telling instead of showing us information, like how Rainbow Dash-Lookalike is devastated that she doesn't have a date to Pinkie's Wedding. Instead of telling us, show us how Rainbow Dash reacts to the news, like for say, the way she talks and the body signs and non-verbal language she gives off to her friends.
Consider this:
Against this:
Isn't that better?
That's not the end of it, though. I'll post more when I have the time.
7365310 Thank you for the tips.
Is there a sequel
7376872 Coming up in the future. But I don't know when though. I'm currently working on my latest story, The War Within Equestria.
Pls make a sequel plsss !!!! I want some morrrrree
The creepypastas! they burn!
7389440 Haha... I kinda screwed up there...
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SO CUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTEEEEEEE
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"...have to bring a partner of the opposite gender with them."
TRIGGERED
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*explosion*
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You actually got downvoted for stating the obvious? I mean, what the hell is the point of writing a story with this premise if Rainbow Dash is just going to ask Soarin'.
Even if Rainbow dash wasn't the focus character, someone should have said, "So, when will you tell Lyra and Bon Bon that they're not invited?" or somesuch.
Nice job!!
Awkward.. (meh, nothing compared to an old blog of mine, with the cloud.)