After the Canterlot Wedding Soarin', one of the famous Wonderbolts, starts to take a liking to the pony who saved his pie, Rainbow Dash. He and Dash have now been dating for 6 months. Soarin is ready to get serious in the relationship, but is dash?
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I'm a professional story judge and here is my verdict:
Dis story be gud. Moar!
Just so you know... I logged out for the night, found this story, read it, logged back in, faved it, up thumped it.
Just an FYI
Now bed time.
Ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh
That's what should be going through Dash's head right now
oh my gosh, THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!
it's my first story too!!!
1909335 haha that was actually how the next part of the story starts.
Awesome story! I love the Rainbow Dash Soarin pairing. I think that Pinkie and Rarity's reactions were very well written and in character. Great job
I could't help notice your screen name is MeghanMae, and had a question. Is Mae your middle name? Because my middle name is Mae, and I've never seen or met anyone with the name. Just curious
1912373 Thank you so much! and yes Mae is my middle name
Here's some more questions: How will RD's friends react to this? How will the Wonderbolts react to this?
The official story judge here again:
I be likin dis hommie.
I be back hommie. Dis be gettin better!
Was that a Regular Show ref?
Anyway, this could use some work, but nice job bro.
So.... your not amazing at characterazation but I'll see what you turn out. I'm interested to see how this goes, because I've always imagined Dash freezing up and running for her life after a situation like this, but we'll see.
I want moar!
ooooooooooohhhhh snnnaaaaP THINGS JUST GOT SERIOUS ...im favoritin'
Can i has moar plz?
I want more
You need an editor like Twilight needs to get laid.
It's a good story so far but couldn't they spend more than six months dating before proposing? Just my head canon says Dash would be very careful about marriage and all.
I want MOAR.....[img]Fluttershy[/img]
Where's the rest?
Some grammar and spelling problems, but nothing I haven't done myself, so I like it. I'm happy to find any story where Rainbow Dash isn't into mares, actually. I have nothing against that, it just seems that everyone assumes she's gay because she's a tomboy (or whatever the pony term is) and she's covered in rainbows.
As for the proposing after 6 months, that isn't bothersome to me. My cousin proposed to his wife after only knowing her less than 3 months. They've been married for 10 years now and have two kids. When you know, you know, I guess.
MOAR !
Umm...Please?
When is the next chapter coming out? This story is too good I can't wait! Oh, and GORGEOUS story dear!