• Member Since 9th Aug, 2012
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Brian Jacko


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Rainbow Dash's dream finally comes true. She gets accepted into the Wonderbolts, but problems strike her soon. Can she overcome the many obstacles that challenge her?

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 33 )

First of all, HOLY CRAP where are the paragraphs? Walls of text are an instant turn-off for readers. Seriously, I can't even begin reading this. It could be incredible, but without proper formatting nobody is going to take it seriously.

There is no second of all. I can't read it.

i agree but ive had the same problem static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png so il give it a through try hopefully it is good keep writing :D

1107879Terribly sorry about that. I just fixed the paragraphs now. This is my first story. I really hope you'll go back and read it. 1108408Thanks for reading. I hope you enjoy! Expect a new story soon!

The part where Rainbow said what she learned was the part where I cried.:pinkiesad2: I love SOARINDASH stories!:pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::heart:

2940449 I'm glad it was a good read for you. I happen to be a major Soarin' x Dash fanatic and I have many other Soarin' x Dash stories I have written. I'm just getting ready to submit a new story called Rainbow Dash's First Crush today. Might want to give it a read if you're crazy for the pairing, It's very short, but so innocently sweet! :rainbowkiss::heart:

Trying not to scream cause the others in the house is still asleep. YAY! I'm a huge SoarinDash fan!

I totally love Roses and rainbows and Bits and Games. I'm glad you'll write more soarindash fic.

2945053 Thank you so much! My most recent Soarin' X Dash story just got approved now! It's called "Rainbow Dash's First Crush" and it's on my story wall.

Thanks for taking the time to read my fics! I appreciate it so much! :twilightsheepish:

2945046because your name.didn't give any clues as to that. I'm kidding font kill me please...

Good story so far:rainbowwild:

3454200 Thanks. This is my first story that I wrote here. :twilightsmile:

Hhmmm funny how most of the fanfics fabricate Rapidfire as a jerk......huh lol anyhow awesome story I love it so far great job

Aww oh Fluttershy WHY do u have to be so darn ADORABLE lol!!

This story is amazing this is the sixth time of reading it, honestly :ajsmug:
I love all the detail you have put in it, I'm a bit of a book worm and this is a good story :twilightsmile:
The way you made fluttershy so caring and kind is just unbelievable :yay:
Thanks for making pinkie pie as crazy as she is :pinkiehappy:
I didn't see much of rarity but you got her character just right :raritywink:
And lastly rainbow dash the story I love and I love that you made rainbow dash sound like she is and for making it clear that she was ment to be with soarin and that she was over with rapidfire and she was not ment to be with him and he was just a lying cheater:rainbowdetermined2::heart:
I hope that you have a good one :trollestia::moustache::derpytongue2::moustache:
Bye:derpytongue2:

First Calm Wind's Head in the Clouds and Sky High, and this next. What. The. Heck.

Finally! After reading a gazillion chapter, SOARINDASH!! THANK THE BANANAS!!

Uh....Rainbow would never do this/ She's a winner!

No , no, no oh god:rainbowhuh: please let Soarin intervene please:applecry:

screw rapidfire RD you deserve better!! *cough* Sorin Skies *cough*

Don't let anything happen to RD please she's my third favorite pony (pinkie, flutters are my first and second)

6974553 I agree and Princess Celestia would give he another chance, this chapter doesn't meek a lot a sense :rainbowhuh:

Nice nice very cool indeed but next time let that Rapidfire dude get hurt if that's alright *inerdemon* KILL HIM! KILL HIM FOR WHAT HE DID TO RAINBOW DASH!!!! *tsk tsk tsk* stay in there inerdemon anyways I love love love love loved how Soarin took it nice and easy cause of what happened with Rainbows relationship with RAPIDSFIRE WILL BURNNNNN Shut up! I'm trying to talk here! Anywho I just love Soarins love for Rainbow Dash. I hope there's a sequel :rainbowkiss: YESSSSSS SO RAPIDFIRE COULD BURNNNNNN How many times do I have to say shut up?! SHUT UP! okay bye now, before inerdemon will loss control :twilightblush:

I LOVED THISSSS


Now,

If you'll excuse me, I have to go murder a certain pegasi named Rapidfire!

The princess isn't in charge of the weather...And there are other weatherponies who woulda cleared the sky. Those ponies also don't live in ponyville AND if the crops died it's ALL of the weather team's fault!

It bothers me how they kept saying " Twilight Sparkle" and " Rainbow Dash " :rainbowwild:

I learned that Celestia is a female dog.

I really like the story.Can i make a Soarindash anthology for these Soarindash Stories?

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