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Rainbow Dash bumps into Soarin' during a flight session, but the Wonderbolt asks for her help. The two pegasi end up on an adventure to retrieve an object for Spitfire at the edge of Equestria, and on the way find out more about themselves and each other.
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Thanks to StormbadgerXIII for helping me expand the description. Also, I drew the cover image.
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Don't post fics unless you got a proper description.
For example;
'When Rainbow Dash and Soarin travel away from the borders, they find out Spitfire is left behind.'
That tells the readers nothing about back story, and sounds overall boring.
Considering I haven't, and probably won't, read the fiction, I just pulled that out.
But yeah, Make your description at least a couple of sentences.
1176545 Right then.
The only problem I have is that I can't think of a longer descripion. I'll enlist the help of my brother.
more please?
Sorry for the delays. Busy with school. I'm making good headlong process with the 4th chapter now, too.
Half the chapter is italicized.
1294152 Fixed now.
YOU ARE LIKE THE FIRST BRONY OTHER THAN ME THAT FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DOESN'T THINK DASH LIKES MARES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It annoys me so much!!!! Just cuz you are tomboy, it doesn't mean that you are Lesbian!!
1295544 The canon points to her being straight (or possibly bisexual), but I don't actually mind stories where she is a lesbian. I decided to play that concept a bit in this story, though. You do have a point, though, just because one is a tomboy does not mean one is a lesbian.
Also you're not the only one who thinks your thoughts. It's not that uncommon, too. I mean, SoarDash is cute.
And you have too many exclamation points where it is not neccessary
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Yea SoarDash is one of my favourite pairings! And I like !!!!'s!!!!
Wai- what?! Soarin' is younger than Spitfire by only a week? I hope there's at least a year in between, because the gestation period of a pony is eleven months and I highly doubt even Soarin' could be that fast!
1306789 Either that or they were twins and Soarin' was extra slow coming out. Normally, I wouldn't say such a thing is possible...but hey, magic right?
1306789 But remember these aren't normal ponies. In many respects I consider them far more human than our planet's ponies. It isn't even that important. But they're supposed to be twins, and 1306896 has a point. I'll change it to a minute if it makes more sense. Actually, have there been records of 1-week-apart twins?
And is that seriously the only thing you could mention? I mean, I had a ROMANCE SCENE OF EXTREME IMPORTANCE DIRECTLY after that bit. That's supposed to be the highlight of the chapter. And you had to comment on a little biological inconsistancy.
Sorry if I seem a little rude, I'm just... disappointed, that's all.
1310144 Nah, it's okay: I'm really enjoying this story a lot. SoarDash is my favourite shipping EVER and I just thought that this one thing was a little bit weird.
Rainbow Dash's guttermind at the last bit. Hilarity.
KEEP WRITING GOD DAMN.
If you could, that is. </fluttershy>
1310468 Well, thank you
1310485 I thought it was a good scene.
I've started on the next chapter.
Also random
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1306789 Maybe Spitfire was ready to come out first, ahead of her brother, while Soarin' wasn't quite ready at that point. Or Spitfire had a premature birth for a medical reason.
I'm sure there are some explanations.
1311375 True. I've changed the time anyway.
Also some more random
1310144 Details! The devil's in them.
McTrottald FUCKING BRILLIANT
1331795 Really? That clever? Cool.
And thus the story ends. Hopefully you enjoyed the story, and if not, well... Not my problem
I'm working heavily on Rune Shredder now, and I'm honestly enjoying writing that more than I did this. So check it out
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I'm not usually one to say anything until I've read all of the available story... but I had to say that Rainbow Squeeing was perhaps the greatest way to end a chapter I have ever seen... and so in character too.
No offense... but I think you took the Lesbian thing a bit too far. It was kind of obtrusive to the story.
Other then that it was fairly good, I liked Soarin and Dash and it flowed pretty well. In the end though, there wasn't enough going on I thought. I think you should have explored Dash and Soarin's relationship a little bit more, but not much to do now. It almost seems as if you were just tired of the story and decided to just finish it, which while understandable, leaves the reader unsatisfied.
Not bad story... pretty average, but you did have some highlight moments. 6/10 (With 5 being average and not 7)
1608436 Truth be told, I did kinda lose the drive to really get the story going. It wasn't as exciting as some of the things I was planning on writing in te future, and right now I'm too bogged down with school to actually write anything.
Overall, I'm satisfied enough with the result, but yeah, I could've explored things a bit more. I'll try and do that with my other stories, namely Rune Shredder.
Her wing was gone. now the is only one thing to say and that is Pinkamena Diane Pie
I compleatly forgot that the word `damp` means ... well... damp...
i was starting to thing you could swedish or something 
cuz in swedish the word `damp` (same spelling) means... derpy... or... screwed up... when you like get a `attack` and starts beeing craaazy.... in a pinkie way 
2511614 Well that's an interesting bit of trivia
For the record, I'm Australian.
My freinds ask if i like this story...
Ma awnser;
Like it? LIKE IT? No. I dont like it.
I LOVE IT!!
Poke.
1295544 I think its weird... That people think RD is an Lesbian...
Theres nothing wrong with lesbians. But RD!? C`MON!!!!
Good ending xD
"Stop staring at me like that."
PRICELESS!
And for the story, 10 derpys out of 11
Heh heh, awesome story, love a good soarindash fic
Not Bad
Knew it would happen
Not the best Soar'inDash.But it's was good
Although I personally loved the story, mainly because it's soarindash, it could have been viewed as abrasive to some people, it wasn't to me, but my friend, who is a lesbian, asked me to read it after she did, for a second, unbiased, opinion (totally loved your story, needs some format fixes, but I still adore it)... Anyway, here's my advice: Don't use double space, it makes the whole thing look like a run-on paragraph, if you did single space paragraphs consisting of five to eight sentences, and separated them, it would have a much better flow.
*%*Epic Song*%*I love this story, showed my lesbian friend and she totally loved it to...
I belive her words were, the person who wrote this should be dragged out into the street and thanked.. :)
You made her stop doubting herself... I thank you for telling everyone in the that reads this that its ok to have what ever sexuality there heart tells them.. :)
4587456 Wow. I... Was not honestly expecting this story to actually be that well-recieved. I'm honestly stoked about that
Yay! XD
I've actually read this about 5 times now, and it still never gets old...
*Warm smile*
Egghead Dash is best Dash.
Argh too much gayness!! :(
I have read this story before I was trying to find it so I can read it again and I did
I really like this story but for some weird reason I put in discord in the ending instead of spitfire am so weird
4770131 Well that was weird. But I guess it has something to do with the whole Discord/Fluttershy thing that's been going on.
But I'm glad you enjoyed the story anyway
This seems to be one of my more well-recieved stories in terms of commentary.
Oh, maaan... I remember this one...
One of the first fanfics I ever did read.
Formed me into the kind of brony I am today.
Meaning, adventure and soarindash loving pegasister who's absolutely nuts..
...
I don't regret a thing.
2526124 it's the rainbows