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Smithawits


I draw, write, and also work a graveyard shift so I will upload whenever I get the opportunity.

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Rainbow Dash has been a Wonderbolt for some time. She has also been happily married to Soarin and they have had two foals: a colt named Fire Spectrum, and a filly named Gentle Breeze. It's almost time for Rainbow and Soarin's anniversary; when Gentle Breeze finds out about where the two are going to celebrate, she also realises that she and her brother don't know about how the two started dating in the first place. Needless to say, she wants to find out, now if only her brother was as enthusiastic as her....

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Comments ( 27 )

wow I almost forgot this existed

Have to admit, I really enjoyed this redo. Soarin felt natural, the kids were funny and you actually have me wanting to know... How did Soarin meet Dash? I'm very much looking forward to whenever you manage the next chapter.

Also, I think this was a better route to take, as much as I enjoyed the Attic, this felt more natural and a little less contrived. Very enjoyable.:pinkiehappy:

Also... the line about Dash not gonna talk to Soarin for doing something Romantic... hilarious. I was laughing pretty good on that one. :rainbowlaugh:

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Thank you very much! :pinkiehappy: And thank you for your patience! I can't say when the next chapter will be out, but I'll be working on it! :twilightsmile:

Gosh this was a great improvement from the original. Can't wait for the next chapter! :raritywink:

I like your rewrite. Your writing skills have vastly improved since the first version and I look forward to reading the rest.

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Thank you both very much! The next chapter is being written slowly but surely. I'll make it worth the wait! :raritywink:

That Treasure Planet stuff isn't the only dialogue that sounds familiar, Fleetfoot's over the top description of how lousy the food smelt reminds me of one Captain/Doctor Benjamin Franklin "Hawkeye" Pierce, when he decided to jump off the wagon for a week. Not to mention Spitfire's complaints about the two day warning remind me of one Major Margaret Houlihan who was dealing with a similar kind of officer (albeit "only" a colonel) was coming to inspect the nursing staff at her unit.

You're a fan of M*A*S*H as well aren't you.

Comment posted by Smithawits deleted Aug 17th, 2014

Nice chapter. I like how this story is shaping up. I can't wait for the next installment. Good luck.

Treasure Planet. Ahh. Good times. Good times... Anyway! I love the story so far, and I can't wait for the next chapter!:pinkiehappy:

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I am so sorry I haven't updated in a long time! :fluttercry: I am still working on it and I will definitely update it as soon as I can! Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about this story! This has been one of my most popular stories and I would never abandon it! :pinkiehappy: Thank you so much for waiting so patiently! I'll make it worth your wait! :raritywink:

Im sorry but to be honest me including a lot of other wonderbolt fic readers cringed when we heard fleetfoots voice from the episode. But seeing it written kinda made me cringe a bit more....

But other than that this is a great fic! Keep it up!

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For a while, I was battling depression and stress; but I'm back now and will hopefully have the next chapter out soon!


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Funny thing, my editor asked why she was talking with a mouthful of food; I had to remind him that she talks with a lisp. :rainbowlaugh: Thank you very much! I will hopefully have the next chapter out soon!

Comment posted by DanteRevolution deleted Jul 1st, 2015
Comment posted by DanteRevolution deleted Jul 1st, 2015

Lol, Soarin, way to crash and burn the project:rainbowlaugh:

The firefly sure sounds uncomfterbal:twilightoops:

next gen button mash is a gaming expert lol saw that one coming.

I need more of this in my life.

That's all I'm gonna say, because if I demanded an update, I'd be a hypocrite because I haven't updated in forever, myself :rainbowlaugh:

Sorry :fluttershbad:I can’t with SoarinDash

As much as the suit sounds cool, I'm starting to question my comfort level for it. Also, when's the next update? You're doing very well so far.

Well?

Will there be more?

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