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Candymlp12


I write in my free time, just for the sake of it. I also like to draw here and there, mostly the Cmc or background characters. I'm a huge fangirl, and a part time otaku. And YouTube Trash ;P

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It first started with Rumble liking Scootaloo, then they started liking each other, then they started dating. Simple as it sounds, this story indicates a lot more happening between the lines.


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awesome story, keep up the work plz!:pinkiehappy:

"Fine." She sighed. "We'll just head for my house."

Wait. She has a house? :rainbowhuh:

"Well...we could...I don't know...um, is it hot in here?

First of all, :rainbowlaugh:. Second of all, she flippin' handed it to you on a silver platter! But, then again, I would probably do the same thing.

Good work.

"Do you want you dinner?"

Slight typo, should be your. Other than that, cute story :rainbowkiss:

So is this cannon with the Sweetiemash fics or not

Pizza and fries is actually kinda weird in my opinion. I need to try is someday.

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Your welcome. Love me some -Hoot!- Scootaloo.

Umm... Sorry did I just read pizza and pasta? Is that an american thing or something cause I have never heard that combination of food in my life.

I'm guessing you're a fan of Rainbow Dash presents and the Mentally Advanced Series. :ajsmug:6820215

It's something my family always does.6820343

I get it now Scootaloo's a tsundere.

I agree with you on the "Scootalo has bad parents" bandwagon. Glad you're different.

Oh and also typo in title X3.

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Yeah, I wish they would bring back RDP again. It seems they have put it on the back burner or gave it up all together.

Scootaloo: "Love is like a big ocean and I'm your love anenemie." Orion: "I thought sea anenemies reproduce asexually." Scootaloo: "Not this sea anenemie, my hunkalicious manatee." :rainbowlaugh:
That's my favorite part of the whole series. And yes, I wrote that from memory.

As for the story goes, I would say something about the pizza and fries, but ppl already did. So, I'll just say thanks for the quick update and keep up the good work. I like where this is going.

Thank you, and my favorite line from the series would be;

Scootaloo-"You've been grinding ponies baby? Are you sure you don't mean up grinding on ponies?

Hoot!":rainbowlaugh:6821626

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Oh yes, :rainbowlaugh:, I merely forgot about that one. I like what RD followed it up with.

RD: "No, No, I haven't done any grinding. The first day, I locked myself in the bathroom stall and said, 'No, No, you can't make me go out there. You didn't tell me there were going to be little children.' They broke the door down and sent me home. The second day, they had a key and today's the third day, I think we should have a pizza party!"

And, of course, when she broke out in song and sung, "If your life's goal is to be turned into a rainbow, you will not be disappointed once I stuff you into this hole." :rainbowlaugh: I could go on for days, but I don't want this to take away from your story. :twilightsheepish: I laughed throughout that whole episode, especially at the halfway mark. I cannot tell you how many times I watched that episode alone.

Good story Ramble and Scootaloo were made for each other. Can't for the next chapter

I feel that Rumble's old foalsitters might get involved.

Don't worry, I think we all have a small section of ourselves that we reserve for cheesy things.

Hoist the sails! Check the wind! S.S. Rumbloo is ready to sail!

I love these sooooo much thank you for this wonderful stories!!!!!:twilightblush: I can't help but gush when I read these (but shhhh don't tell anyone)

I like this. The story seems to move a tad fast, though.

Rainbow Dash said, twirling her straw around. "It took me a while to, but I eventually found someone to understand that feeling with, and he makes me happy. It took me a while to, but I finally realized how I truly feel about him, and I love him. It took a while to say this to him, but...after saying those words, I couldn't be happier. Now he's moved in with me."

You started a sentence three times, 'It took me a while to' in the same paragraph. I'm not sure if this intentional or not, but thought I point it out. Not only that but you wrote it once again in another paragraph just below this one.

Another good chapter, finally RD got a say in it. And yes, she's paired with Soarin, which I think is the best shipping.

:facehoof: Now that I read back on these chapters, I regret making them one-shots. I'll fix it soon. Ugh, that's embarrassing.:twilightblush:6829178

Peace, Love, Tolerate,

-Candy

Peace, love, tolerate, and candy. Sounds about right, though I've yet to see any candies in these chapters, lotsa burgers and fries though... And tolerance is stretching quite thin already, what with all those questions and teasings everypony is giving to these two :trixieshiftleft:

Off to get me some candy :derpytongue2:

"It's not a date!" The two replied, a tinge of red spotting their cheeks. Rainbow Dash flew away, laughing hysterically at their response.

:rainbowlaugh:

Those friends who never gets the hint.

Something I have plenty of experience in.6834827

Every kid in my school at lunch gets pizza and fries. And to be honest, never though if it being an odd combo.

At least someone else can relate.:pinkiesmile:6835744

Let's hope they don't run or fly into Thunderlane and Blossomforth or worse.

Nice chapter so far this is getting interesting :raritywink:

Oh Rumble and Scootaloo are one of my favourite couples next Soarin and Rainbow Dash

Ah yes. The family whose always bothering you. "Why aren't you married yet, your sister is?" Or "You. Need to give me some grand babies soon."

I can relate to Scoots! My coughing acts up in November to March!

"But you're nearly 18 Scootaloo."

What?! I thought they were in middle school. Huh.

"I'm just going to miss being a teen, you know? Soon I'll be expected to handle everything on my own and act like an adult, but I don't think I'm ready to be one."

Heck, I'm 21 and I know I'm not ready to be one. Teen years are the best years. You have just enough freedom to do something fun without the burden of responsibilities as an adult.

"Rumble, your not as focused as you used to be, and your even wore than before, what's wrong."

That should be ' you're even worse than before. What's wrong?'

'What am I doing? Why am I getting closer to him?' Part of me had ne clue, but a small part of me, another part that must've been fighting it's was through the other parts, seemed to know. I see his eyes close, and feel mine doing the same, as he pulls me into him."

'...had no clue...' And '...fighting what was...'

I didn't mind the first person as it usually reveals the character's more inner thoughts. Though, I would have done the whole chapter that way, but either way another great chapter.

"You've been lollygagging all afternoon, now drop and give me 50 lover boy."

Does that sounds like not in a relationship?

Firstly, :rainbowlaugh:. Secondly, I can understand that. And third,:facehoof:6839261

Hnng... *notices the text* GOD DAMMIT IT DIDNT HAPPEN YET! I'm loving this, though! :pinkiehappy:

Scootaloo and rumble, sitting in tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-, oh, hi scootaloo what can I do for you? Gets punched in the face.

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