• Member Since 2nd May, 2015
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Candy-Sweets_12


I write in my free time, just for the sake of it. I also like to draw here and there, mostly the Cmc or background characters. I'm a huge fangirl, and a part time otaku. And YouTube Trash ;P

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Button Mash is about to propose to Sweetie Belle, witness how they met, their first date, and more as they start their new lives together. Learn about the lives of their friends and families along the way, and how it leads up to one of their biggest moments; getting married.


Please be aware that this was posted before Season 5 Episode 18, and I'm not willing to make changes.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 24 )

I know that it's short and corny but cut me some slack, this is my first story. What'd you expect? The best story ever? This wasn't meant to be perfect or read by a lot of perfect or get a lot of views like Bride of Discord, or My little Dashie. And my spelling isn't perfect, I know. Just wanted to get that out the way. Basically I'd appreciate it if anyone took the time to make a comment of any type (that's appropriate) or even take the time to read this fanfic since I was inspired to write this after Don't mine at night. The ponified version of course. Plus if took any ideas from anyone's story I apologize I didn't mean too. Any way, peace.

:derpytongue2::heart::twilightsmile::fluttershyouch:

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I think it's adorable!
Also.... THIS IS YOUR FIRST STORY?
OH MY GOD..... GOOD JOB!!!:pinkiehappy:
honestly you did really well for your first story!

Good chapter! Really enjoyed it so far! Pretty good for the first chapter, only flaw is a bit of punctuation.

Have you released the next story yet? So goood!

I'm working on the cover art for the next story now, and be on the look out for a story Called "The making of a nightmare" Where I write about the best princess(at least in my opinion) Luna and her first night on the moon, but it won't be on the front page of the site. But yes, whatever free time I have left I'm writing or drawing for this. I'm also thinking of making a Rumbaloo story, What do you think? And thanks for the support, it really brightens up my day.

-Candy:heart::derpytongue2::pinkiehappy::raritywink:

Nice Work. It's AMAZING. and by the way, the thumbnail is so awesome!


- RoseFire (You may know me.) :pinkiesmile:

Here's an announcement I will post the second story this coming weekend. Also please tell your friends about this, whether they like it or hate it, I need the views. So sit tight and be patient. Peace.

-Candy:heart::rainbowwild::raritywink::twilightsmile:


p.s. My making of a night mare story is out, so go find it. Please.

I haven't read it yet, but I have a question about the title. Is it supposed to be "number"?

Thanks for helping me realize that, I can't believe I didn't notice.:facehoof::twilightblush:

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Well... There are errors yes, that can be seen. The story? I love it, and deserves my like.

Now to help a little?

Remember, you need to put the " on place, when they begin to talk and when they finish talking. That is one of the predominant errors I have seen but all in all it is a good story.

"I've got a little time to spare, the young stallion said.

It must be

"I've got a little time to spare." The young stallion said.

There are many places where the " is missing at the end making me a little confuse and re-read the paragraph.

Another problem would be the

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You placed, you know? Sure they are nice but they consume too much space on Iphone and the like, oh and the people that are reading with bigger letters. Try using the bottom that says 'Add Horizontal Line' it is just at the left of the 'Add link' and 'Add images'. Many people dislikes when they aren't being used properly. Just remember to gave one or two spaces after using the option so the division could be seen.

There is the lack of , and . on some parts but that is really not that big of a problem for many tend to just ignore it-not everyone-

Welp that is all.

P.S. You should edit the story later, add more scenes or just correct little errors here and there..

P.S.S. Reading the sequel right about... NOW!

P.S.S.S. Being your first story it is awesome ma bro, you have my respects and likes xD. Just remember that in the future after you become a better writer to take a look on your first story and correct your errors.

P.S.S.S.S. I'm not forcing you to do anything, just criticism and giving you 'my' opinion. This is your story and as such you should do what you want on it. Have a nice day-wait didnt I said that already? uh... okay! bye bye!- Pancakes for Love! :yay:

Thanks for the help! I really needed it.6468452

Too late to change it but in season 5 they get their real cutie marks. just thought I'd let you know

"Do you wanna play on my Joy Boy"
Button sucks at pick up lines

"Anything for my player number one," Sweetie said.
"And anything for my player number two." Button said in reply.
Well almost none of the recent games have split screen not even halo 5

You've got this, you are a warrior of Hirule

This made me laugh as I remembered this meme:
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"W-wow! You look more beautiful then Princess Zelda!"

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7804507 sweetie belle has no standards

7805477 I can't think of a return joke so :unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie::unsuresweetie:

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