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Autum Breeze


a home-grown australian who embraced being a member of the fandom 2 days before joining. Willingly delved into the fandom whole-heartedly and has never looked back

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Cover are a combination of images from here here and with the background from here.


Bon Bon had honestly thought her life as a secret Agent wouldn't come back to haunt her. But, when the Bug Bear returned, she became worried. She meets with Celestia after the wedding, asking if there is anything she should be concerned about.

What Celestia tells her, shocks her to the core. She has a daughter, a clone created from her own DNA from her Agent days on the off-hoof chance she would need replacing. When the agency dissolved, the clone was given to a family, Celestia not knowing Bon Bon hadn't known the clone was still alive or whether or not she'd wanted to keep her as her own daughter.

Now, Bon Bon must find a way to break it to the filly that her life has been a lie. She isn't the pony she thought she was and her family are, tehcnially speaking, not her family.

Motherhood was never said to be easy. Well, when your daughter's a clone of yourself and has lived all her life unaware, it's even harder.


An idea that popped right into my head after a comment Black Gryph0n made during the Bronies React 100th Episode.

In Popular Stories 1-4/8/2015. :rainbowderp::pinkiegasp: Wow! Thanks, guys! :twilightsmile:

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 25 )

Love this idea.

It's great already.

Huh, I'm interested.

Yeeeees...clones! The concept has always intrigued me to the point that I'm using it in my novel, but your take on it has already peaked my attention. Even if we didn't already know each other on the site, I would still so put this on my Read Later list. I am looking forward to seeing the two Sweeties interact and personally hope the maternal factor is really played up, since I'm working on a story about a police officer raising her own clone and doting on her and it is the most gosh darn cute thing ever.

Please pardon my ranting, but this idea is amazing and I am so glad this exists. :rainbowkiss:

This sounds interesting.

I've not read it yet, but it sounds like a interesting story. I do have one potential issue based on the story title and characters tagged.

If this is a story dealing with a clone... from an earth pony.... how does a clone of your own DNA become a unicorn? If magic is your answer... well its not a clone anymore. Clones are identical.

6270983 Well what would you call it then?

Family isn't just about blood. It's about how you have bonds with.

I'm amazed that no one aside from me noticed the similarities between the two. I originally chalked it up to an design error but this throws things into a new perspective.

What a great idea for a story. I've noticed the similarities in their designs and names too.

ALAHU ACKBAR!

THIS IS AWESOME!

Im actually intrested, that's a first in a long time. I want to see where this goes. Like.

Bon Bon: "What about the baker from Starlight Glimmer's town?"
Celestia: "Coincidence."
Bon Bon: "You sure?"
Celestia: "As far as you need to know."

This is a great idea. I'm looking forward to reading even more...

Really, REALLY bodacious concept. I look forward to reading.

"Hey... Lyra? It turns out I've been a mother this whole time! I thought she was dead, but it turns out she just got adopted by Rarity! Neat huh?"
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Wat.

Now it would be the real surprise if it would turn out that Sweetie Belle has some nuckleoid in her DNA from Rarity too like here:
https://derpicdn.net/img/2013/10/25/456345/large.png

...and chapter 2... GO!

...still waiting.

;)

new chapter please :raritywink: thank you :twilightsmile:

This will be an interesting read.

Clone always make things better, Just ask the Galactic Republic.

I have to wonder why no one in the comments made a Metal Gear reference.

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I have to wonder why no one in the comments made a Metal Gear reference.

because nobody... I mean nopony cares.

"Don't be mad at me!"
:fluttershyouch:

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