Just finaly realized i had an imagination, now im gonna see what i can do with it.
It has been quite some time after the defeat of X.A.N.A, and now the gang is off to pursue their dreams, sadly, Yumi couldn't join them. So as they are about to graduate, they pay one last visit to the factory to say their farewells. But, something goes horribly wrong and they are plunged into the magical land of Equestria, but as pony's. Now, they must work together with the mane six to find their way home, and to try to prevent what lies ahead.
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Another one of those crossovers of two wonderful things that better work out, for the author's sake.... xD
Well to be honest it's sort of a long story, and there is a HUGE plot behind all of this, I originally tried animate it
a few things:
separate your characters' speech into a different line for each bit of dialogue. this makes it easier to read.
when scene changing add some sort of visual indication instead of just going to a different paragraph.
other than these and the occasional spelling error this looks interesting. definitely has some potential. tracking to see where this goes.
752271 I thank you for you help, and I'm glad that you think there is potential, to be honest, this was originally a pilot written in actor's script because I had plans to animate it, but something occurred (that I won't go into detail about) and I could no longer animate it. Well it still is a pilot story for the next part in the series, but I probably won't be able to publish the whole thing here (cuz it has like so far I've written about 6 or 7 books for this)
MLP and Lyoko, finally! took the fandom long enough!
New paragraph for each speaker/action please.
Continue!
752533 ok, i kinda rushed the editing today because im going camping, but come Monday i will upload Chapter 2: The Return of X.A.N.A.
Holy shit! Someone remembers Code Lyoko! I luved this show, and was sad to see it go. It had such a kickass premise that I still don't think I totally understand. Meh. The show kicked ass, that's all I need to remember. Now if you excuse me...I'm gonna go watch the entire series again.
752942 Did you hear about the series renewal this fall? its called Code: Lyoko: Evolution! I recommend you check it out.
752963 I know it's offtopic, but that may be the greatest thing I've ever heard. Once again, incentive to watch all episodes evar again.
YAY
SOMEONE STILLS REMEMBERS CODE LYOKO!
And made a interesting crossover no doubt.
FAV AND TRACKIN!
Interesting, and I love the fact that you're started this crossover... But seriously, has this never been done before?
760856 It has actually, the story is called " Code: Pony" but no, when i was writing this I had no idea of its existence at the time while I was writing my story, it's pretty decent... I don't have the time at the moment to fully read it .
Is that a hint of 'My Little Dashie' I see in there?
765644 why yes it is :)
Ok story though I think the mane 6 were to trusting of them.
What happened to Yumi?
766617 well they do seem a little too trusting, it's mainly Twilight who has faith in them, she is letting her curiosity get the better of her, while the rest have their dbouts, but some events happen later on that ensure their faith in Jeremy and the others
766770 Yumi as we all know was a year older than most of the gang, she graduated before them, and her father also got a job in computer software development for Sony in Japan so they had to move
770837 I know, I am a failure when it comes tofinding endings to quotation sentences thdonned end in a question or exclamation, I am currently searching for the actual punctuation mark
Enter Franz Hopper!
I like how both Aelita and her father are alicorns. Keep up the good work!
773919 thank you! I did that based off of the fact that they are both the masters of Lyoko.
774958 That would make sense.
775848 funny thing about Aelita's design, when I created it about 3 months ago, it looked ALOT like Cadance, I had planned to use that but decided it would stray too much from te story
777703
Huh. Well, at least the story won't stray too much, so that's good!
I apologize for not uploading as I usually do, I am currently out of country and will be out for the next few weeks, but to compensate I will finish uploading parts 2 and 3 in the pilot
Ok a quick note: This story will be the only one that really focuses on Lyoko, the next one will be focusing on a new person, but will also still have everyone else, it just won't deal with Lyoko very much.
I fly back today, so spect an update some time tomorrow or the day after
I'm still in highschool and probably wont update it as often, bit it will be updated!
It works so far. However, every time a new character speaks, you need to put it into the next paragraph. Before you continue writing/editing, read a fantasy novel like Eragon or Harry Potter. The speech formats used there are standards, and are considered the most acceptable.
Apart from that, I think this is a great idea. I've no idea how the Code: Lyoko characters will deal with Equestria, but I'm excited to see!
1015398 yeah, I don't have a way to fix that ATM, considering the fact that I'm the int person writing or doing anything with the story, it's just me and Microsoft word... So until I can find an editor that I can trust, there isn't much I can do unfortunately. It's good to know that you enjoy the story.
1020085 WARNING CODE: LYOKO IS ON NETFLIX I HOPE PEOPLE STUMBLE ACROSS THIS.
oh yeah and here is a link to the show full episodes and protected from being taken down:
code: lyoko
ps. start at the prequel part 1
1020085 bro you need to get this featured.
My favorite foreign periphery demographic show & my favorite American periphery demographic show? WIN
1172601 it's great to hear that people love this despite my horrible grammar!
Ah, sorry for the lack of updates, I have a ton of school, not to mention I had to re-write the files that I used for this story, I should update them some time tomorrow
Ok granted this chapter was written in about 5 minutes it's a bit short, I have completely lost the original archive so I'm going to be sticking to a somewhat different Plot, but the end result will be the same
FINALY!!!
UPDATE
The crossovers has been doubled! We need a luna emoticon without needing an outside source to put them in.
Side note, alright chapter. France Hopper came out a bit Pinky~ish, maybe Jeremy~ish on one of his cheerful days.
What?
What!?
Did this just crossover with Doctor Who as well?
Eyup, and it's a key element in this... As River would say
Spoilers
1751651 ah so you noticed, well here is the thing, I can only reveal this much, but it should help with the sudden change in additude with the charecters:
Teleportation can sometimes have some side effects
Oh God.
I knew this was great, but this is amazing.
752963 Yes! We will get to see William use his powers while not controlled by X.A.N.A. ! This new character though... no information out about her beyond her name being Laura, but it will be interesting to see what the story writers have come up with for her Lyoko costume and abilities. They also make X.A.N.A.'s new replica home sound like it's not just a copy of lyoko and yet it has towers, whether that means it will be the so called "Volcano Sector" that appeared in one of the Code Lyoko games or something completely new Is unclear, but it surely will be interesting. Only one little thing that bugs me, Ninjas, I mean really
, they had to have X.A.N.A.'s human partner use virtual Ninjas to attack. Oh well, nice to see that they are doing something more with the show, just hope they don't muck it up. On the plus side, if they translate the episodes of this new season at the same speed as the original series then we will only have to wait about a month or so between when it airs in France and when it airs in America. And I'm guessing that Kabillion will be the channel to air it here in America, seeing as they have been rerunning Code Lyoko for the past year now.
(Joke) Alt. Title: Code: Lyoko Ono: Crossover EVERYTHING
"Your a LOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG way from Fance, boy."
-Engi
Will there be more chapters if i will your computer into existence infront of you
The next chapter I might do today, or tomorrow, maybe today, just gotta think of something
very impressive, I must say.
Boeing? Like the Co.?