Ice Dragon in Equestria

by Fullmetal spike97

Saving the six plus one and introduction

Saving the six and introduction

Once I spotted the chariot that carried both Spike and Twilight I knew that this would be different from the show because Spike looked different, older, more mature and I think I saw a few ponies bowing to him. I also sense that Spike, and somepony else, had spirit energy but Spike’s was stronger while the other was noticeably weaker that I couldn't sense it the first time I was here.

I immediately decided I would train Spike, and maybe even the other ponies with spirit energy, on how to perform kido to help them protect the mane six, but after they manage to defeat Nightmare Moon and after I had fully introduced myself.

But for now I have to wait until they head to Everfree to look for the Elements.

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It was hilarious watching twilight and spike meet the others but I noticed some huge differences.

When they meet Pinkie she acted as she did in the show, but when they meet Applejack, the entire Apple family bowed to Spike and tried to treat him with their utmost respect but calmed down after Spike talked to them, I couldn't quite hear what he said though (maybe spike’s royalty in this universe?).

Then, when they meet Rainbow dash, instead of just flying into Twilight she flew into both of them. After she saw who she crashed into, she went on full panic mode and I could practically hear her repeatedly apologizing for crashing into them and getting them dirty, and tried to fix it by drenching them, and after she did that she apologized again and tried to dry them off. I couldn't stop laughing that I completely missed her talking to Spike (how he forgave her and laughed at how he and his friend looked) and Twilight about how she was supposed to clear out the skies but I saw how she did clear the skies and returned to the, now speechless, dragon and pony to boast then leave with relieved expression on her face.

They then met Rarity as she swooned at the sight of Spike but then dragged both of them to her store when she got a closer look at them. Later, I saw them leave the store in a hurry.

Then they met Fluttershy, who once she laid eyes on Spike, looked like she didn't know weather to be scared and hide or to be respectful and bow, so she decided to faint.

I wanted so badly to go over there and see if she was alright but I didn't want to reveal myself too early, so I settled for watching from a distance. After she had woken up and Spike managed to convince her that he wasn't dangerous, she began to ask him questions about his race, likes, dislikes, etc.

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The time had come. After the whole party at the library and after Nightmare Moon’s return the mane six were ready to head inside the forest, but unlike in the show, Spike was going with them.

‘Huh. I was right. I landed in an alternative mlp where spike is more involved. But my mind is still set on keeping them safe while in there. Ready Hyourinmaru?’

‘Ready as I'll ever be.’

With that I started following them.

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(Twilight’s POV)

After the events off the scary trees, manticore and almost falling to my death we came across a river that that was occupied by a sea serpent that was moaning about his ruined mustache that he was blocking our way to the old castle, but rarity gave up her beautiful tail to fix his mustache and then helped us pass, but I was wondering if he knew anything that happened in the forest a week ago. So, I asked him.

“Excuse me but do you know what happened here about a week ago that caused the strange power surge and weather?”

His face immediately changed from one of gratitude to one of fear.

“About a week ago a strange creature showed up in the middle of the Everfree forest. No one knew where he came from but over the past few days it has been here, it showed that it is extremely dangerous,” He explained with clear fear in his voice, while he looked around.

“Haha! I bet i can take him,” Rainbow dash boasted

“You wouldn’t even stand a chance! His attacks are all ice based! When he first got here he froze a pack of timberwolves, then as the week went by he froze a dozen manticores, a few full grown dragons and a hydra, but the rest of the creatures of the forest left him alone when he transformed into an ice monster that defeated a full grown Ursa Major without receiving a single scratch!” He exclaimed in panic and worry

But this information was both interesting and terrifying to all of us. A mysterious creature capable of defeating the strongest monster in all of Equestria without being injured and living in the Everfree forest no less.

At that moment the temperature seemed to drop, and the sea serpent seemed more panicked.

“Oh no. It's here. Hurry run before it finds you!” He said as he descended back in the water and left.

“Y’all heard i’m lets go for’ dat creature finds us!” Applejack said snapping us out of our shock.

When we felt that the temperature was dropping even more we ran as fast as we could to get to the old castle and away from the monster that was closing in on us.

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(Hitsugaya’s POV)

I would like to say that I didn’t mean to scare them. I heard the sea serpent’s talking to them about me but after he finished talking I spotted a pack of 16 timberwolves closing in on the group.

(10 minutes ago)

‘Damn these things,’ I thought as I flash stepped in front of the pack and got ready to fight

Reign upon the frozen Heavens, Hyourinmaru

I tried to beat them as quickly as I could so I wouldn’t loose the group, so I unleashed a wave of ice that froze four of the timberwolves that where on the far right, and used Hado #31 that burned five more.

The remaining timberwolves then started charging at me. Three of them circle around me trying to find an opening to try to, at least, wound me. The last four tried to attack me at once. I ducked under one that tried to jump at me and swung my sword and cut it in half vertically.

“Leave now or pay the consequences!” I said in a threatening voice while increasing my spiritual pressure causing the temperature to drop even more.

The remaining 6 timberwolves took the warning and ran away.

By the time I went back to watch over the group I saw them run with a scared expression on their faces.

‘They must have sensed my spiritual pressure. Damn!’

With that in mind I began my chase behind them.

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(Spike’s POV)

After running from the mysterious creature and crossing the bridge we finally made it to the old castle.

“Alright, let’s start looking for the elements,” I heard Twilight say as she started looking around.

“I found them!!” Pinkie shouted from across the room.

“These are the elements?” Asked Rainbow Dash as she looked at some dull, shattered rocks.

“I don't understand. How could this happen?” Twilight said, starting to panic.

“That would be my doing,” a voice said as Nightmare Moon appeared in front of us. “I knew someone would try to look for those pesky elements so I decided to destroy them, and now I'll rid myself of you meddlesome foals,” she said as she charged her horn.

“The night will be eternal!!” She yelled as the fired the spell.

We all huddled up together waiting for the spell to hit us but then we felt the temperature drop and heard an explosion. However, as we opened our eyes, we saw a wall of ice in front of us, which most likely saved us from the spell.

From the other side of the ice wall we could see Nightmare Moon glaring at something towards our right.

“Who dares to interfere with the ruler of the night!”

We then turned to look where she was facing and saw a strange bipedal creature with white hair and, what looked to be, a white robe over some black clothing with a sword drawn

“My name is Toshiro Hitsugaya and I am here to fight you”

Author's Note:

Sorry about the long wait i was very busy at the beginning of summer, and I lost my phone wich had two chapters already written, so there's that but I will try to update a new chapter ever week if I can.

I am still looking for an editor l, if any of you interested or knows a good editor plz pm me

Comments

[SilentMech]

I believe there is a group for editors, can't recall the groups name though. . Any way, this story seems to be doing quite well, despite the lack of an editor. Heck, I didn't notice any errors, but that is most likely me not knowing of any errors you may have made.

[Shadow of doubt]

This is awesome, I have been waiting for the next chapter and you have delivered at 120% of what I expected.

[Blade tormentor]

Good job man long wait but still pretty good can't wait to see next chapter

[SeventhBrony]

the end felt rushed but nice chapter nonetheless

[Voltaje]

You really write your chapters in your phone? and kept it there without a copy? wow, ok i'll bite, anyway, hope you don't abandone the fic, Hitsugaya its my favorite captain too, so good louck with it.

[AkwardIncarnate]

MOAR

[wildarms]

It is an amazing story can't wait to read more.

[1020853]

Rainbow = Ichigo

[Sturleght Glommar]

More ples

[Dark Law]

I'm liking what ive read so far, BUT i will save my upvote until ive seen a few more chapters. This story has potential let's hope it doesn't fall into the stereotype, and if it does lets hope its done entertainingly.

[FrostTheWolf]

And now I'm even more excited!!

[Dillmccathron]

Yes final new chapter I'm very happy with what you write i wounder what will happen next keep up the good work update more on this story soon

[Chris Russell]

why he or she not continued the story I am like it the stories?

[Hoppa_21]

My, my. Sounds like things are about to get interesting!

[Sturleght Glommar]

COME ON UPDATE ALREADYI mean if you want to.

[Hoppa_21]

More?

[Night_Flicker]

updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates updates

[Jlargent]

Pinkie will start with the ice puns after the battle.

[Viper Pit]

8018249
i dont think there will be another update from the looks of thinks

[Night_Flicker]

8278032
There needs to be more updates though

[Viper Pit]

8278272
i agree

[TheGamerKing]

When is the next update?

[ShadowLight96]

Update the story bro. Please. Also if an editor is whats holding you back i can help you out.

[Noctis Prism]

Must have more fight!

[tristanmon]

up date it

[The_Lost_Somebody]

I would like some more, when you have the time.

[Draige Dragonfire]

pls update

[Roran Dreamon]

This story is dead as shit, everybody move along, nothing to see here.

[Chris Russell]

9823391
so it's dead

[Soleam]

BRAINS!!

[Arveildir]

I honestly want more of this, but I completely understand if you had decided to drop this story.

[Starkiler]

continue with this story please it's really cool I really loved this story please :)👍

[Haver]

More good

[TheValiantQuartziOrville]

[TheValiantQuartziOrville]

It's been almost a decade, pls more chapters.