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I was half-expecting Scootaloo to wait there and punch Sweetie once she leaves the corner. And something tells me it won't end with spanking.
7045223 Something tells me you might be right.
A MOTHERBUCKING SEQUEL! OHMYFUCKINGOD!!!
*explodes*
...
*explodes again*
7045321 Oh, hey you. Haven't seen you in comments since... forever!
7045389 I don't comment half as much as I used to...
Still reading a fuckton of fics though
The time in the corner, that was done very well.
Excellent first chapter. I am looking forward to reading more of this story.
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Yeeesh. Cold
You do funny prose, mang.
god, the coldness is painful :(
My dinky finks so.
I know what this is froooom!~
Man, the corner time is the best. Sweetie's chaotic, run-on thoughts. She's losing her goddamn mind and doesn't even realize. And that last line, ooooh yes.
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Such nice positivity to wake up to! I don't even care if this fic didn't get featured, the 24-0 rating feels a lot better. This being a sequel almost certainly doomed it to obscurity and for those people who'd already read the original, so I'm happy people are liking it.
I hope the next chapter won't scare people off, because we're gonna go pretty dark there. Not DARK dark, but... eh. I'll probably post the chapter later today if I manage one more proof/edit run on it.
Is the spanking going to be otk? Sort of my favorite position and Sweetie Belle did offer to crawl over Scoot's lap. Though fair's fair so tying her up and switching her like she did to Scoots would be just.
Sort of hoping it ends in post-spanking Scootabelle cuddles.
7047165 gives me something to look forward to
7047428 In the cold darkness of pony, there is only cuddles!
damn...
These two have some serious issues to deal with...
Also, damn FiMfic.net failed to let me know that this story updated.
Well, that was intense. I do hope that this will go towards resolving the issues between them because I think they make a nice couple and I want them to have their happy end, and no thats not a euphemism
7048090 Next chapter's where I reveal the Tragedy tag and the whole story ends in a suicide and the other party blaming themselves for the rest of their lives while their last remaining friend is so broken that she loses all functionality in her legs!
Or not.
7048363 aww you tease, getting my hopes up like that
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I guess you can explode twice
Told ya.
quiet spike
well that was a very nice resolution. I'm just glad they made up because those two are just too sweet for it to end badly for them
and that ending with Rarity was just perfect. 
My reaction
This was an excellent story.
There's this big space here...
wow just wow! Again you have proven to me that your one of the best writers on this site! Amazing Story, iam realy looking forward to more awesome stories in the future.
Well this was veeeery weird but the end was lovely. I hope some epilouge will be for this story.
7058225 This was the epilogue to Dominant Ideal.
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Well then I guess it's fair enough.
Well, shit got real...
Rarity just quietly being awesome. That was the highlight really.
7089747 I don't usually like to write her, because I've never found her character to be interesting. This time I wanted to try something different and I think I hit the spot. The idea came from "From whom the belle toils" episode, where Rarity was working indirectly behind the scenes to make sure that things would go well for Sweetie. I'm happy you liked it too.
Ahhhhhhh! This was amazing. I'm surprised that you did anything more with this story but I'm really glad you did. Seeing such a cute, happy, sexy ending to it was really great.
Thanks for the wonderful read yet again. :)
Deep emotion beautiful and makes one think. Presenting oneself in such a veritable position to earn ones trust is so deep well to cop out here I can't adequately describe it but these stories shed a light on BDMS practices in a way I rather enjoyed
Yes, this was good. I particularly liked the psychological sweetie waiting for punishment aspect, but I found the transition to having sex again to be a bit rushed after the massive emotional rollercoaster. Plus the ew post enema aspect seems a bit overdone given the horror that preceeded it. I would love a follow up with the fillies talking to Rarity or scootaloo's mom. That would be an awkward conversation. Sweetie is going to have some serious bruising.
All in all i give it a thumbs up and you get +1 internet.
More of this might be fun, maybe six months or year later?
7826673 What a deep and insightful critique of this fic. What would I have done without it!
For future reference, the "thumbs up" button covers saying you like a fic or think it's good. You don't have to repeat it in the comments.
8021692 Told you. There's a lot of this kinky stuff here!
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