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There's something delightfully endearing about kids (Or teens I suppose) spanking other kids and you did it quite well.
Very sensual and lovely descriptions, even the non-sexual scenes. Do teens instinctively go to that pond to masturbate?
Applebloom's disappointment in Tender tugged at my heart strings. The emotional confusion in the dialogue is very reminiscent of adolescents and was engaging as well as amusing. You really captured the awkward and embarrassing nature of the spanking with them being the same age and Tender being larger due to his gender. Also, it was nice how in-character they are with Scootaloo's fierceness, Sweetie's reluctance and Applebloom's cool familiarity with proper roast rumping.
That scene between Tender and Applebloom was nothing short of adorable.
Great ending. (Sweetie's spanking method was interesting. Perhaps Rarity does it the same way when chastising her?)
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Your kinds words mean a lot! Balancing on the drama/porn/comedy trifecta is really fun to do. I also got to make loads of bad jokes and weird scenes, so I'm happy for today!
For I have found that our path is shared by both heaven and heeellll
(The Promised Neverland theme english)
That would leave Sweetie Belle with someone she has in mind.
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I think Sweetie's just fixated on the results, not necessarily where they cum from, looking at her reactions.