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i dunno why ur getting the downvotes, this story seems fine so far to me....i mean ill be honest once the rape or implied rape is in it its probably gonna seriously lessen the quality of the story, rape used as a cheap plot device usually does, but until we know that will happen i dont see y ppl woudl downvote just yet, nothing wrong with these chapters that i can notice
anyway keep writing we'll see how this turns out
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Thanks. Honestly, the implied rape is just one scene and it's not even going to be that graphic.
I guess we'll see how it all turns out...I appreciate the support.
I believe that some people are very against gay marriage, or even gay relationships. That's why you are getting down voted. Because some people are to stupid to understand why they couple chose each other..
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Funny you should mention that...
You may just want to keep reading...
u got a good handle on the confused frustration emotions coming outta nowhere for young ppl with applejbloom kicking the board and tearing up and stuff
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Let's just say that I have some personal experience with being young and confused about my emotions.
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lol who doesnt
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True dat.
this is awesome
and scoot
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Thanks!
I feel bad Scoots is trying to force Apple Bloom to pick between her and Sweetie Belle and Whiteshadow. She shouldn't have too. They can all be friends.
Great story! I can't wait to read the rest!
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Aw, shucks!
Thanks!
I'll have the next chapter up as soon as I can. Things are about to get really interesting!
Things are spicing up.
sexy, sweet, and fun
Awesome story so far
More chapters please :)
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Thanks! Coming up soon!
really liked this chapter, feels very real
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Thanks! That's what I was going for.
wow, this was great, again, so real. i especially love ab's reaction to the stolen wine....that moment when the one we love so much does something so completely different from us, shows that in some ways they have a completely different mindset, can be so incredibly painful, painful out of nowhere, because our emotions and subconscious are so wrapped up in an imagined perfect connection that this sudden glaring difference seems like a uncrossable gulf of separation.......or something like that, idk lol!!! XD
but anyway ya this is good
Great story! Also, I checked your profile and you must really like Fluttershy!
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Thanks. I'm nearly done the next chapter!
And...yeah...
...I really really like Fluttershy. *squeak* 
Oh my Celestia...
I don't know why I even tried to read this, I mean, it had my name on it, but it scares me a little, I'm into colts! Not fillies! And the magazines! No!
~Applebloom
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Sorry, Applebloom.
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It's fine :) It's a well written story.
~Apple Bloom
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Thank you! Hopefully more people think so.
still liking it, its very sweet and sexy
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Thanks!
Another awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapters :)
brian u doo-doo head y u no update
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I'm sorry!
The summer is just so hot, and I recently lost my job so I've been too depressed to write.
I don't want to give too much away, but the next bunch of chapters are going to be somewhat depressing so I have to be in the right frame of mind.
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ouch i feel like a bitch, sorry about ur job
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It's fine.
I have a new job now and I'll get back to writing soon.
this is well written. and it ships my favorite member of the CMC. and dont worry about the downvotes, theres alot more up votes
The writing seems alright and the cmc generally seem in character. there are some who will down vote just for being a clop-fic.
The one thing that really bugs me at this point is the OCs name. Whiteshadow doesn't really seem like a pony name. Perhaps White Lily, or such. Though perhaps a might late now to change the name, just something to keep in mind for future projects.
You forgot to identify Whiteshadow's race. It's ok not to use the racial notes on the show characters, but you haven't given us a complete picture of your OC