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“You use a glass mirror to see your face; you use works of art to see your soul.” George Bernard Shaw

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Finally with a cutie mark and out of school, Scootaloo runs her own shop where she can fix anything as a master mechanic. She lives a simple life, simple but fulfilling. Yet, something is missing... but the mare doesn't want to admit that what's missing is really important.

But someone else can help open her heart.


Huge thanks to Contodaslasganas for editing and Mayhew Cullen for pre reading.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 75 )

It's always nice to read one of your stories when I get bored with doing my homework. I swear, this proofs class can give out very loooooooong homework. :ajbemused:

Yay! I had so much fun today finally prereading this in its entirety. I'm still loving thee chapter ending and I can't wait to see more.

Her face lit up with a grim upon mentioning Apple Bloom.

grin?

She had fixed her heater last winder

I'm guessing you ment to say winter?


Also

'that's how we fix thing 'round here

it should be things.

4966255 No problem!:twilightsmile: Great story by the way. Can't wait for more!:pinkiehappy:

This needs obligatory music:

4973265 :pinkiegasp:OMG!:pinkiegasp: This is the song that inspired this story!!
I almost called this story 'I Want To Know What Love Is.'

I've noticed a few little errors here and there that can be easily fixed with a quick read over. I'd offer to do it but I'm on my phone at the moment, but if you're interested I could preread for you as well and help you with those errors (provided I'm on my computer at the time). I know you've already got an editor and prereader but a second one doesn't hurt.

I like the plot of the story it.... Interesting.

I have read some scotabloom on fimfiction but this one has something new to it.

Thou before i give a thumbs up or even a fave i will wait and see where this story is going

put the new on in

on = one


Scootaloo really say her.

say = saw? (I'm not sure if there is another word for Saw)

Ouch, a bit of a downed opening. But I'm very interested to see what happens, this is going in my favorites.

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Ouch, a bit of a downed opening.

How do you mean?

Finally found a good scootabloom fic that i like. Can't wait for more:twilightsmile:

Great start to the story, and I can't wait for more!

Man, Scootaloo is one unsure mare. Her emotions are so all over the place it makes it complicated to determine her next actions.

4985878 that means I'm doing something right. :yay:
Poor Scoots is so lost and lonely, she doesn't know what to do.

NEW CHAPTER!!! ME NEEDS IT!!!

Oh hat next, what nxt?

Just a quick comment. I'm loving this story! Also just a minor detail, if it is morning then it would be dawn, not twilight at the beginning of the chapter :scootangel:

I pictured RD's talk with Scoots in my mind... And wow... Its amazing!

Uplike and definite fave!!! ^_^

4998238 Twilight can be between dawn and sunrise and after sunset (dusk).

:pinkiehappy::yay:Yay! New chapter! * squeals internally* time to read!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I never knew that rainbow was that deep. I bet that even Adele couldn't roll in something that deep :pinkiehappy: but anyway I guess that rainbow is now a Love Doctor (someone place a vid cause I can't find it.)

5005673 Rainbow is also much older in this because Scoots has been out of high school for a while.

This is such a great story that delivers so much feels:raritydespair:

Yay I finally read the second chapter! Okay Sad lonely Scootaloo is so cute that I need to hug my Fluttershy again... anyway I'll see you at the next chapter.

I said Booyah! I love Dashie in big sister mode. That part was delivered wonderfully. I mean wow, She quit the Wonderbolts for Scoots... that is love to the highest degree. I will see you at the next chapter.

:pinkiesad2: I will not cry, but this saddens me. So much drama in one chapter, I need a pick me up.
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:pinkiesmile: Well...it's something.

"Yes, let's!" Scootaloo shouted back, her face red as she tried to keep herself level. " 10c06 No one tells me how to run this shop! No one tells me how much to charge! You sound like Rainbow, always telling me I'm never going to make a living... but I do just fine, thank you! If you don't like it then there's the door!" She help up a shaking foreleg, pointing to the front door.

Just wanted to point out the 10c06 in there

5044919 I don't see it. Hmm, could it be an issue with your browser?

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Idk maybe i see it after keep herself level

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Idk maybe i see it after keep herself level

5045833 I've checked from two different computers and my cell phone and it didn't show up on any of those.
It could be some kind of glitch, in the BBcode. :unsuresweetie:

Okay, to be honest... this grand finale ties it all together neatly. Fav'd on the finale. :pinkiehappy:

Hooray! You know as the prereader, I actually feel a sense of accomplishment seeing this finished... I'm so damn proud. Anyway like I said I loved the love scene and I still love the idea that Dash gave up her dreams of being a Wonderbolt to try and be a better sister to Scoots.

So I'm excited to see what comes next. I'll see you at the next chapter.

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Yea probably because I'm using a phone, but anyway I'm enjoying the story so far

i kinda want a sequel to this. just a little day to day story that shows how there life progresses from here.

This was cute! And I love it! good pacing and the feels!!

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5047608 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

5047232 I've thought about making one actually.

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i kinda want a sequel to this

I've thought about making one actually

You know you want to, Twi-Fi. Now you have to do it! :pinkiecrazy:

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