i dunno why ur getting the downvotes, this story seems fine so far to me....i mean ill be honest once the rape or implied rape is in it its probably gonna seriously lessen the quality of the story, rape used as a cheap plot device usually does, but until we know that will happen i dont see y ppl woudl downvote just yet, nothing wrong with these chapters that i can notice

anyway keep writing we'll see how this turns out

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Thanks. Honestly, the implied rape is just one scene and it's not even going to be that graphic.

I guess we'll see how it all turns out...I appreciate the support.

I believe that some people are very against gay marriage, or even gay relationships. That's why you are getting down voted. Because some people are to stupid to understand why they couple chose each other..

this is well written. and it ships my favorite member of the CMC. and dont worry about the downvotes, theres alot more up votes

The writing seems alright and the cmc generally seem in character. there are some who will down vote just for being a clop-fic.

The one thing that really bugs me at this point is the OCs name. Whiteshadow doesn't really seem like a pony name. Perhaps White Lily, or such. Though perhaps a might late now to change the name, just something to keep in mind for future projects.