• Member Since 20th May, 2013
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briantherat


Comments ( 38 )

Wow. Good story. Best clopfic about FS I read!

Have a like, favorite and follow.

Man, this is great. Short and sweet just like it should be, yet also still a good read. I fervently enjoyed it, a like for you fine sir

Sweet and hot :yay: But thoughts of a character should be in italics or use 'these':pinkiehappy:

holy shit , fucking infinite plain ponyxhuman fics........

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So, you didn't like it?

2627752 didn't read it , not interested in fic of ponyxhuman....

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Fair enough. A lot of people are like that.

What sorts of things do you enjoy?

2628803 princest.....

Flutters must have really enjoyed it or she would have squeaked (adorably) and fainted at the sight of the blood on his shoulder.

Then again... who knows what the butter colored pegasus does behind closed doors with her extra special somepony?
(Hey hey hey, stay outta my shed!) :yay:

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I'm sure, deep down, Fluttershy has a very naughty side. :fluttershyouch:

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Maybe she kills him, cuts open his stomach, and hangs him on a wall!

Or they just have aggressive sex

Hmm...people seem to like this story more than the sequel.

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If you don't like human and pony shipping, then why are you here. Didn't the title of the piece of art give away the plot? ( plot in both meanings of the term :trollestia: )

Aaww... that was cute. I'm in you get a fav, like, also I would read the sequel.

Oops... sorry I click dislike. It should be 97 likes to 7 dislikes. Sorry.

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Thanks, hope you like it!

Also, damn you for your dislike! :raritywink:

I gently ease her onto her back and I gently ease her onto her back and gave deeply into her big, beautiful eyes.

gave

It's GAZE!

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You are right!

Apparently, I need a better proofreader to correct such minor mistakes. And...since I don't have one...perhaps that would be a good place to start. :rainbowwild:

Well, I came to your profile after reading your other clop fic. Liked it, so I checked this one out too. Really enjoyed this one also!

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Really happy you liked it! I appreciate the positive feedback. :pinkiehappy:

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:applejackunsure: Thanks...I guess.

This was my first-ever clopfic, so I was just getting my bearings on how to do clop scenes properly.

What I do hope I conveyed, though, is the real love and true passion I feel for my Fluttershy. :heart:

2836472 Yeah, I'd say that was a success... :twilightsmile:

Another great one!:twilightsmile:

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I'm sorry.... When I hear agrresive sex these days all i can think of is shrek the OGRELORD !!! Lol some nasty shit right there

But seriously this was a sexy story, and as a note for the author, I will be in further contact if you so wish to have a proof reader, currently I am unable to as my computer is broken (may she rip)
(Using my iPhone right now it always lets typos through and screen to small to proof read my messages)

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Thanks! I appreciate your feedback and will gladly take you on as a proofreader if you'd like. Let me know. :)

I do plan to do some writing again sometime soon.

That was... I'm going to use a word that might come across wrong if you let it... that was pretty. As in beautiful, in a soft way. That was everything it should have been, no more and no less. It wasn't really cute, it wasn't what I would immediately call hot, it was pretty.

And that's exactly what it should have been.

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Pretty, huh? Well, I guess I appreciate it. :-)

2837320 I found you reading clop again, Jack.

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Nice little story, by the way. :)

5551694 Ah, but now you see, I now know that you too read; the clop.
Blackmail opportunity, gone. :rainbowwild:

Also, expect Luna to hear about this! :trollestia:

Well done I maybe new but the story was great now if only in my stories do I wish Ace had the guts.

Well done clop, my friend! :)

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