"Would you like to hang out today? My folks are out—" "No. Got stuff," Scootaloo said, and stepped out into the rain.
Yeeesh. Cold
"Nu-uh. They're mom's," Sweetie Belle said, only slightly offended about the clear aversion to her cooking skills. She had to admit these were a bit better than the ones she'd tried to make for her friends once. More solid too. And made of actual bread, come to think of it.
You do funny prose, mang.
Scootaloo hesitated for a moment. After a moment she sat down and crossed her forehooves and looked at Sweetie Belle with a scowl. "Okay. Tell me."
god, the coldness is painful :(
"Do you... do you think it'd work?" she asked, a faint tint of hope in her voice.
My dinky finks so.
Her parents weren't believers of spankings, though Rarity had once confided in her that she'd gotten a few after really being out of line after gaining her Cutie Mark and destroying half of her mother's dresses while 'improving' them. Rarity had probably meant it as a lesson about not getting carried away by getting a Cutie Mark, but all Sweetie Belle could think of was her sister howling and kicking over their father's lap while getting her butt smacked.
I know what this is froooom!~
Man, the corner time is the best. Sweetie's chaotic, run-on thoughts. She's losing her goddamn mind and doesn't even realize. And that last line, ooooh yes.
Such nice positivity to wake up to! I don't even care if this fic didn't get featured, the 24-0 rating feels a lot better. This being a sequel almost certainly doomed it to obscurity and for those people who'd already read the original, so I'm happy people are liking it.
I hope the next chapter won't scare people off, because we're gonna go pretty dark there. Not DARK dark, but... eh. I'll probably post the chapter later today if I manage one more proof/edit run on it.
Is the spanking going to be otk? Sort of my favorite position and Sweetie Belle did offer to crawl over Scoot's lap. Though fair's fair so tying her up and switching her like she did to Scoots would be just. Sort of hoping it ends in post-spanking Scootabelle cuddles.
I was half-expecting Scootaloo to wait there and punch Sweetie once she leaves the corner. And something tells me it won't end with spanking.
7045223 Something tells me you might be right.
A MOTHERBUCKING SEQUEL! OHMYFUCKINGOD!!!
*explodes*
...
*explodes again*
7045321 Oh, hey you. Haven't seen you in comments since... forever!
7045389 I don't comment half as much as I used to...
Still reading a fuckton of fics though
The time in the corner, that was done very well.
Excellent first chapter. I am looking forward to reading more of this story.
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Yeeesh. Cold
You do funny prose, mang.
god, the coldness is painful :(
My dinky finks so.
I know what this is froooom!~
Man, the corner time is the best. Sweetie's chaotic, run-on thoughts. She's losing her goddamn mind and doesn't even realize. And that last line, ooooh yes.
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Such nice positivity to wake up to! I don't even care if this fic didn't get featured, the 24-0 rating feels a lot better. This being a sequel almost certainly doomed it to obscurity and for those people who'd already read the original, so I'm happy people are liking it.
I hope the next chapter won't scare people off, because we're gonna go pretty dark there. Not DARK dark, but... eh. I'll probably post the chapter later today if I manage one more proof/edit run on it.
Is the spanking going to be otk? Sort of my favorite position and Sweetie Belle did offer to crawl over Scoot's lap. Though fair's fair so tying her up and switching her like she did to Scoots would be just.
Sort of hoping it ends in post-spanking Scootabelle cuddles.
7047165 gives me something to look forward to