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Isseus


Cutie Mark Crusaders Forever!!!

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Really like it not gonna lie, fantastic mix between friend's love/naughtiness, shenanigans and legit funny moments.
Really curious to see what shit did WF got to see and if it was bleach material lmao

"Nu- uuuuuuh{/i]," Wallflower half-said, half-moaned. "That was just the start. When I realizied people didn't really notice me even if I was in the buff..." Wallflower's expression sank a bit. "Well, okay, that was kinda depressing, but..." her expression brightened. "I could walk around school in the nude!"

There's a broken italics code bracket there (you accidentally used a curly brace) and it makes the next few paragraphs all solid italics.

Solid stuff otherwise! Not bad.

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Hey, Aria. Nice to see you still hanging about! And thanks for the correction. I thought I proofread this, but now that I think about it, I just did it in the editor. :facehoof:

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I know it's a bit vanilla after what kind of stuff I've written before, but I've been out of the writing game for several years now, only pushing out the occasional s%%%fic or one-off. I'm trying to gather up myself and doing it in small steps.

You have no idea how much just a simple comment like yours means to me. Those are (one of) the things that make this hobby worth it! :twilightsmile:

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No worries, happens all the time: I've been pushing a new fic out recently myself, and I have to go over every chapter with a fine-tooth comb because of how the importer mangles formatting sometimes.

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Glad to help my dude, and I totally understand you, it's the same way with drawings.
Hope you get back into it and hope to see new or more stuff!

I’d think eventually it would reach nature documentary levels. As in objectively noting it’s existence but treating it as more like trivia.

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As in, what Wallflower witnessed sounds so ubiquitous that I’d think she would become rather blasé about it.

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I borrowed it from Pterry. Basically it's the sound someone makes when they're very confused and groggy.

This was excellent! Very sexy :duck:
But, uhh... what is Sunset here? Is she human, pony, or anthro? She stands on her hooves, grabs with her hands, and isn’t able to use her horn. So I’m guessing anthro.

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She's human, or whatever the girls in Equestria Girls are. The story is about her waking up confused and slightly hung over, and thinking she is a pony, hence why she acts the way she does in the beginning.

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