• Member Since 22nd Aug, 2013
  • offline last seen Monday

twilightsparkle3562


I am a brony from Massachusetts with Autism who enjoys MLP, Disney and writing!

E

Scorpan returns to Equestria to help the Princesses and their subjects recover from Tirek's rampage. However, he also tries to help Discord get back in the good graces of those he betrayed by siding with Tirek.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 29 )

I like it so far. Can't wait to see where you'll go with this.

I HAVENT EVEN READ IT YET AND IM YES, YES, YESSING!!!

EDIT: OK, NOW I HAVE READ IT!! CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!!! LITERALLY!!! POST MORE!!! NOW!!!!

6972977 Chapter 2 will be posted later tonight before 9PM.

6973372 Yes, I live in Massachusetts, Southwest of Boston and Southeast of Providence, RI. So, it will be 9 pm est.

Hmm. I don't what's so good about rejecting all ties to one's brother, though I approve of the general concept.

This story has my attention.
Don't disappoint me! :pinkiehappy:

I don't think Scorpan ever met the Mane 6 and Spike.

So when does this take place in relation to "Defender of Equestria"?

6989711 It actually takes place after "You Gave Me Nothing!," "Wrath of an Angry Prince," and "Dresses for a Princess."

6989974 So, "Defender of Equestria" hasn't happened yet in this story?

Ooooh! Im loving this story so so sooooooooooo much!! C:

I thought you said this took place BEFORE "Defender of Equestria." I guess you changed your mind?

7074803 It takes place in between "Defender" and "Trial of a Changeling." I'm going to have Celestia ask Discord to take part in the trial later on in this story.

7075956 Ah, yes, that story... About that... I'm afraid I just... can't be your editor for that story. I've got too much on my plate right now. I'm really sorry.

I was hoping that Discord would apologize first, Shining Armour was very good to forgive him. I also find it very interesting; a fanfic being based around something fairly important that no-one decided to acknowledge or care about. :) :pinkiehappy:

That means that Shining Armor will go where no pony has ever gone before.

Maybe I've been playing too much Injustice, but for some reason I imagined Shining Armor looking at the wanted poster with a bunch of weapons and a Deathstroke outfit. :twilightsheepish:

Is the pony who was splattered into the side of a mountain OK?

Great story. Love the introduction of Scorpan and his interactions with Tirek. However its a shame that it was sidelined at the end to focus more on Discord. Don't get me wrong. Discord is great here. But it would be a great dynamic if Scorpan and Discord like discussed with one another about how their respective betrayals have shaped them now

The story, while good, felt a little rushed at we don't even see Discord talking to the Mane 6 with only a passing comment that he helped them.

Overall, an okay story to read.

Login or register to comment