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Quoting Mettaton
OH YES!!!
She fell down a steep rocky hill.......RRRrrrrrrriiiiight!
Oh I approve of this ssooooooo much mate.
7023873 but she did, its in the report, did you read the report? No way anything in that thing is a bold faced lie and that soldiers of the EDF wouldn't want to beat the crap out of her for stealing their comrades Cutie Marks in anyway.
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Obviously it has to be the truth. I've never seen an instance of Twilight lying in her reports.
So, I'm guessing the next interlude is covering Tirek?
7024011 yes it is and it may end up being as long as a chapter normally is.
Wow, Discord worried about Twilight? That's definitely something, and of course Starlight put up a fight before getting captured, but in the end, she gets put in the slammer
7024104 have you seen what Twilight is capable of? if she wanted to she could destroy the world and where's the fun in that for Discord?
also I think we all saw that out come for Starlight in this universe.
Pretty sure Commander Twilight Sparkle said "Eep!"
Hm, Discord said he could destroy Twilight - But could Twilight destroy Discord?
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7024510 Twilight, Unlikely. Reaper on the other hand could possible. depends on how much of her is released.
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Isn't "Twilight" simply a mask, a facade (A front - A Wall, etc.) if you will - For "Reaper"?
7024582 no Twilight is well Twilight basically it is her where as Reaper is Twilight insanity manifested and incontrol of the body and power and is far more powerful then Twilight so to the magic being fueled by pure insanity.
Think of Reaper as like being Nightmare Moons younger and far more powerful sister that does whatever the hell it wants.
Basically in a sense Twilight has a separate personality in her so to speak.
7024639 Depends what that means as I do not know to much of the man.
Great story so far, but I keep seeing incorrect word usage and lack of Spell Check usage. For example, you used he instead of she in (copy and paste from the second to last paragraph in her report) "of her legs being broke, he face suffering sever bruising". I've placed the words in question in bold. Stuff like that is in several places throughout the entire "Soldier of Magic".
You may need to pay extra attention to what you write and/or change who proofreads your stories in case it's he/she/them that make these changes.
Other than that I've enjoyed this story thus far and am looking forward to both Discord and Twilight working together.
7024956 well I do run I through a spell check but my Edit is trying to catch up with the story so is still working on everything before Chapter 10.
and I slowly make small edits as I find them when I read over them but for the most part chapter are posted unedited after I finish them and do a spell check on the and replace them later.
7023999 Still I wanted to read the actual damage she did to Starlight. You censor one of the few ponies the fandom as a whol;e wouldn't mind seeing the crap beaten out of her.
7025309 well...it wasn't really Twilight that did anything, it was more the EDF soldiers escorting her for what she did to their Comrades and Twilight sat back watching the show as they pummeled her.
Just imagine a group of ponies beating the crap out of her while Twilight sit in a lawn chair eating popcorn while watching and you have the general idea.
When I read "they all have the same cutie marks..."
SHIT.SHIT.SHIT.SHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHITSHIT
But I was wrong, Starlight didn't activate reaper mode, thank God.
7025341 she'd have had to steal Twilights Mark for that, other then that it just put her on alert for something wrong.
7025332 Dude I am going to ask you this once.
WHAT THE BUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU!?
The most perfect time for Twilight to be all Joker and you don't use it.
7025349 Witnesses, she had soldiers around her so Twilight couldn't really get some alone time.
though there is a joker-esque moment in the final chapter.
also factor in Twilight has been talking with the Queen about things and its getting her under control more as its basically therapy.
7025353 this the Commander we are talking about. SHE WOULD FIND THE TIME.
7025359 true, I may right a bonus chapter of her have a chat with a freshkly healed Starlight who unfortanly tried another escape and falls down a flight of stairs.
Oh...okay then
7025344 Well that's what I'm thinking.
7026249 But thank the Lord, I was wrong.
7025365 "Falls down", sure, sure, whatever you say.
I liked how you portrayed Discord. He said everything I would have said to Twilight had I been there and had the means to stop her.
There are a lot of jokes with Discords antics out there. It is rare for me to find a new one I really enjoy, but "blowing in Twi's ear so he could hear her better" had me laughing out loud.
Also I think Discords approach of "nothing is more boring than a corpse" seems to be rather common in the fandom. (Though your Discord never actually said it like that.) I think that is in character for him but that may just be my head cannon?
And last but not least YAY for Discord knowing stuff. I always like fanfics that give Discord information he reasonably should not have, but doesn't reveal because ... because Discord. (Sometimes Pinkie gets that role, but she gets handled differently and that is good.)
As for Glimmer, all that seems to be in character from my point of view. I never was a Glimmer hater even with season 5 still running but I don't much care about her getting a beating either. It feels like she would try and escape using her spell and getting punished for it by EDF operatives is a logical conclusion for that (as was established in the Interlude with the Changeling haters).
MfG NIchtraucher
I honestly cried the second time i read this, Congratulations... Then again i was high from the dentist soo
The subject shot herself nine times in the back of the head while hogtied.
I was a little hyped for starlight to try and take twilights mark and not be able to because she doesnt have one anymore. Guess not :(
7023871 !!!!!!
So you hit 2 birds with one stone? In one chapter no less?! Noice!!!
P.S. don't call peta!! Plz!?!?
so chance of starlight's "accident" actually being a accident
Dsicord behaved in a way that makes sense for him I think.
Yeah Discord has a defense plan.
I would have sweetened the deal saying if needed he can cause CHAOS on the battlefield as long as no teammates die/get hurt(including mental damage).
Fell down some stairs eh?
I am enjoying this story quite a bit, but you really need some proofreading.
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Eh...how does 0.00000000001% sound?
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Twilight has reaper mode not starlight but yea i believe she was close lol
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On a scale from 1 to Soviet-bloc Civil Police? :D
"We didn't beat him up, he really fell cap'n!" :D
How would fortresshy react to this twilight sparkle.
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Who?
So in a battle between Mendez and Discord... who would win? I'm going to say Mendez but I feel it would be close.
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Fortresshy - Fluttershy raised by characters from Team Fortress 2.
- MLP: FiM
- Team Fortress
- Comedy
- Slice of Life
Red team finds a tiny filly in a paper bag. They decide to raise her their way. Hilarity, adorability, and explosions ensue.It is a story here on FimFiction and Fluttershy is there basically like Twilight in this story. Just tad less cooler.
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Fortresshy would probably squee and glomp CTS and after respawning proceed to do it again all while CTS had a "WTF IS THIS SHIT?" face lol
Well things just got really interesting.