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No problem and would you like me to send you notes or such pointing out little stuff like that. Not asking to be a proofreader, barely have time as it is with what I have going on in my personal life. Just willing to help out a little bit.
I'd hafta say that Twilight's more loyal than Rainbow Dash. Then again... soldiers have that reputation for loyalty.
7027057 yes they do and one thing she is besides a psychopath is a soldier.
I have a feeling Twilight won't go home without stepping on Frisk.
7027280 you know the Commander so well.
You said that you are planning a sequel right?
7027353 yes I am.
7027360 Cool, just making sure that I heard right. Anyways have a beautiful day mate.
7027057 Don't Underestimate Rainbow. Faced with similar circumstances she may be just as troubled. Heck Discord got her on Divivded loyalties, just as Rainbow Falls did.
I think a pic of CTS snuggling the anti tank rifle would be just cute.
I bet when the war is over a statue will be dedicated in her honor.
7027752 I agree completely.
I'd love to see fan art of this story though sadly no one seems to have made any. least none I've found which is odd with how many people seem to read this story.
Thank you sooooooooooooooooo much for planning on making a sequel. This story is too good to end ;-;
Me with The mental image on Commander Twilight in a book fort, snuggling an AT rifle:
XD ROTFLOL!!!!!
7027793 I WOULD make fanart, but I suck.
Interesting chapter, and now we know the drones can talk...
Welp, she just needs to do one very thorough vivisection and she's free to go home.
7408527 heh funny you mention that now
dont know what the author is up to these days the third book has gone quiet but honestly i would like to see the commander go back in the last book to see how it turned out
7635682 I'M NOT DEAD!!
just been sort of busy IRL and when I get free time i'm a bit "meh" and just sit to relax, i'm going to try and sit down to write something n the next week as its been to long.
Surprise no one make the Bitches Love Cannon reference.
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Heh.
Heheh.
Heh.
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Damnit, EDI!
Twilight will be going home, I think it's about time anyways, if it wasn't for Twilight in the first place, the rebels would probably all be dead, and the Feds would have won months ago, Twilight helped as much as she could and succeeded, the rebels are close to winning and the Feds are losing, now she has one final mission and that is to protect her home world and possibly her home universe.